A Song I Wrote

[mj_in_wonderlandXO]

Please Tell Me If Its Good, honestly

When Twisted Heartache Feels Sublime
by: MJ McClernon
(C)

(verse one) Are we really moving when we're moving on from lost loves, familiar skies, broken hearts, fictious lives? When taking hands becomes a hesitation, it's only just begun. (Are we moving on?) Are we moving on?

(verse two) Are we really thinking when we think about the past when everything was perfect and butterfiles turned to knots. When you feel that tight sensation, it's only just begun. (Are we really thinking?) Are we moving on?

(bridge) I'm twisting and turning heartache. Finding solutions. Swinging and Swaying pain. Thinking back to that day. (Are we moving...) Am I moving on?

(chorus) Am I in denial, I'm trying so hard to find a way. find the light. And find a way to shut my eyes at night.

(end) Twisting and turning (Am I moving...) Swinging and swaying (Are we moving on?)

Oh, how this twisted heartache is running through my mind.

Oh, twisted heartache, how you feel sublime

How you feel sublime(x4)

Are we moving...

Am I moving on?

[mj_in_wonderlandXO]

no one..nodody..? Aw man, I thought it was really good, and I worked really hard on it:(

[twilightqueen13]

Please Tell Me If Its Good, honestly

When Twisted Heartache Feels Sublime
by: MJ McClernon
(C)

(verse one) Are we really moving when we're moving on from lost loves, familiar skies, broken hearts, fictious lives? When taking hands becomes a hesitation, it's only just begun. (Are we moving on?) Are we moving on?

(verse two) Are we really thinking when we think about the past when everything was perfect and butterfiles turned to knots. When you feel that tight sensation, it's only just begun. (Are we really thinking?) Are we moving on?

(bridge) I'm twisting and turning heartache. Finding solutions. Swinging and Swaying pain. Thinking back to that day. (Are we moving...) Am I moving on?

(chorus) Am I in denial, I'm trying so hard to find a way. find the light. And find a way to shut my eyes at night.

(end) Twisting and turning (Am I moving...) Swinging and swaying (Are we moving on?)

Oh, how this twisted heartache is running through my mind.

Oh, twisted heartache, how you feel sublime

How you feel sublime(x4)

Are we moving...

Am I moving on?

I LOVED IT! IT WAS SO FREAKIN AWESOME MJ!!! U ROCK GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Beautiful, Beyond words. I loved it, really!

[twilightqueen13]

Beautiful, Beyond words. I loved it, really!
see told i knew u would.:) it's a really awesome song!

[mj_in_wonderlandXO]

:o thanks guys...that brightened my day a little

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Awww, you're welcome. I was being honest, I really do love it. ^^

[twilightqueen13]

:o thanks guys...that brightened my day a little
u're welcome. and to be honest, it was really well done. u should write songs more.:D u rock mj.

[mj_in_wonderlandXO]

thanks!:D :D