My poems, my thought..better say what keeps me alive

[little_white_fox]

A story is a dream that make you feel heppy or sad, better sais it makes you feel alive. When you start a story ,nomather how boring, you start to have feelings for it like you have feeling for someone who is around you.
A new story is a new friend, that you make everyday and that keeps you alive.
When you continue the story you continue the friendship.
When you stop writing you put an end to your friendship.
When you finish the story you know that it will always be in your hart and you will always dream of it.
When you start a story you wonder when it will be finished, but truly in your hart you wish that it will never finish so you will never lose or let go to a friend............

[little_white_fox]

My little girl.....

Why are u sad
My little girl
Why do you cry
When you are alone
Why do you scream
That you want to die
Why don`t you
try to let
Someone help you
Why are u scared
My little girl
the world isn`t so bad
As you always think
What did they do
To you little girl
That made you so sad
that made you so mad
Let me help you
My little girl
I know I can do it
Just let your hart
Trust me
Just let you mind
Hear me
I am here
Only for you
I am here to
Help you

[little_white_fox]

Show yourself
I know your watching me
I know your here with me
Show yourself
to me
Show yourself
In my dream
Show yourself
When I`m alone
Just let me see
Who you are
Just let me see
What`s helping me
Just let me see
Who`s here with me
But even if
I neve see you
i`ll know
In my hart
That your the one
That keeps me
From folling

[premiumdancer]

A story is a dream that make you feel heppy or sad, better sais it makes you feel alive. When you start a story ,nomather how boring, you start to have feelings for it like you have feeling for someone who is around you.
A new story is a new friend, that you make everyday and that keeps you alive.
When you continue the story you continue the friendship.
When you stop writing you put an end to your friendship.
When you finish the story you know that it will always be in your hart and you will always dream of it.
When you start a story you wonder when it will be finished, but truly in your hart you wish that it will never finish so you will never lose or let go to a friend............

It isn't bad, but it does kind of read like a list. If you cut out some of the words and phrases here and there, it might sound less like one. :]

[little_white_fox]

It isn't bad, but it does kind of read like a list. If you cut out some of the words and phrases here and there, it might sound less like one. :]

thanks, for your opinion