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twilightqueen13
04-11-2007, 05:52 PM
OK. I love writing songs. And I was wondering who else on here does. So if it isn't to much trouble, go ahead and write one!

Here is one that I wrote to play for my band:
Two Hearts by The Rebels:
What they saw was someone lonely.
Seeing what they never could believe in.
What they thought they'd never had.
(Here is the story..)

She had something to hide.
A life outside the innocence.
She gave into her lies.
Couldn't find the true life.
She just wanted to hide.
But he could see.
He could see it behind her eyes.

And these two hearts beat as one.
Never a real goodbye.
Always thinking about what they gained.
These two hearts beat as one.

He didn't think, he'd get a chance.
To have someone else.
Other than himself, to talk to.
He just wanted a friend.
But he fell in love.

And he could tell.
That she could see the pain in his eyes.
The pain he failed to hide.
But then he realized that he could
finally smile inside.

These two hearts beat as one.
Never a real goodbye.
Finally they could smile inside.
The two hearts beat as one.

And even as the years start to fade.
And the lies are to gained.
They can still feel.
What they felt back then.
Because they never said goodbye.

And as these two hearts.
Beat together.
Finding that they can't say goodbye.
These two hearts.
These two hearts.
(Beat as one)
These two hearts beat as one.
These two hearts...

Kynt
04-11-2007, 11:48 PM
OH...someone's got major talent!!

Caoko
04-11-2007, 11:50 PM
Well... my friend wrote this song for our fake band. xD Like, our 'theme song' thing or something.
I'll get him to e-mail it to me.

And I love your song, btw. <3

Randomgirl
04-12-2007, 12:55 AM
I love it Sissy!!
You did a wonderful job!
You should get it copyrighted && published!

twilightqueen13
04-12-2007, 11:06 AM
OH...someone's got major talent!!

thanx. it took me a long time to write it and make the chords.

twilightqueen13
04-12-2007, 11:07 AM
Well... my friend wrote this song for our fake band. xD Like, our 'theme song' thing or something.
I'll get him to e-mail it to me.

And I love your song, btw. <3
thanx. yeah, we used to have a fake band but we wanted to actually perform. so we made a real one. we perform this song lyk 3 months ago.

twilightqueen13
04-12-2007, 11:09 AM
I love it Sissy!!
You did a wonderful job!
You should get it copyrighted && published!
thanx! i was hoping to get it published. i'd have to ask my friend Kimberly, she's the one that really brought the band together. but for now we're just gonna perform. we have lots of cds but none in anymore stores than Dover's local stores and Newark's so..

Caoko
04-12-2007, 08:32 PM
thanx. yeah, we used to have a fake band but we wanted to actually perform. so we made a real one. we perform this song lyk 3 months ago.

Yeah. ^^ Only like, two of us have musical talent, so xD Yeah.