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protector13
04-22-2007, 11:37 PM
the pain is closing in
never lossing it tight grip
alway fightin gme down
beating me into the ground
never stand up
never speek up
cover my pain with lies
tell them its all beter when im dieing inside
cant feal anything
cant evin cry
when i get up
i just wanna die
it just beats me back
and im sick of getting up
one day im just ganna say i give up
and sit there and let myself die

(( if u dont like it just say it i dont care))

MZprincess1993
04-22-2007, 11:43 PM
honestly..
I like it.
its relatable.

Sweetie2393
04-22-2007, 11:51 PM
I agree with MZ...

priestess94
04-22-2007, 11:53 PM
nice (not in mean way) and i agree with the others

protector13
04-23-2007, 08:55 PM
what does any one else think

AlcTrCKaD
04-23-2007, 08:57 PM
I like it!!!!....it good

articwolf
04-23-2007, 09:00 PM
i agree with everyone else its relatiable like they said.