hate

[protector13]

as the pain withers around
you soon find yourself on the ground
u are about to give up
but a new fealing has appeared
the hate has settled in
the people that harmed you when u did nothing wrong
they teased you because u dident like a song
they mocked u when u said u were sad
they laughed when u said u were almost dead
they dident take it seriously but u were withering away
but now you are now filled with hate
fealing of revenge
to take back what was yours
to make them who laughed suffer as yours
you have no more allys
its only you
as u sit in this world
u it just you
you hate everything
and you hate every one
but deep inside hate
the pain it still stood

[protector13]

say what u think plz

[articwolf]

thats pretty good i wish i could do that like think about it off the top of my head but i can't i have to do or think about it for a couple days. and oh yeah i love it lol.

[AlcTrCKaD]

as the pain withers around
you soon find yourself on the ground
u are about to give up
but a new fealing has appeared
the hate has settled in
the people that harmed you when u did nothing wrong
they teased you because u dident like a song
they mocked u when u said u were sad
they laughed when u said u were almost dead
they dident take it seriously but u were withering away
but now you are now filled with hate
fealing of revenge
to take back what was yours
to make them who laughed suffer as yours
you have no more allys
its only you
as u sit in this world
u it just you
you hate everything
and you hate every one
but deep inside hate
the pain it still stood

*crosses arms*
I'm jelous.....your good
and yea that pertains to a lot of people too

[protector13]

*crosses arms*
I'm jelous.....your good
and yea that pertains to a lot of people too

thanks to both of u im wrighting on what im fealing so im glad u like it lol

[AlcTrCKaD]

thanks to both of u im wrighting on what im fealing so im glad u like it lol

hehe. aww. are you feeling sad?

[articwolf]

well i cant write at all well i write storys in a note vook but i cant writ peoms and stuff like that. i would share my one story but it to long.

[protector13]

hehe. aww. are you feeling sad?

u could say that

[articwolf]

what r u sad about or mad about? if u wanna tell me or should i say us.....

[protector13]

what r u sad about or mad about? if u wanna tell me or should i say us.....

na its ok i can mannage my pain and saddness shall give u great poems lol

[articwolf]

lol ya i was just wondering it helps me to tell my friends.....even though were just meeting i guess.

[protector13]

lol ya i was just wondering it helps me to tell my friends.....even though were just meeting i guess.

yea dont worry i know all about this i help people with alot of problems lol:cool:

[articwolf]

thats kool wel i try to but sometimes i make it worse....

[protector13]

thats kool wel i try to but sometimes i make it worse....

yea... but if u stick around long unuff they will budge and u will have helped hey u wanna be friends?

[articwolf]

sure ok i will add u

[articwolf]

did u add me? lol im soo bored...

[protector13]

did u add me? lol im soo bored...

i did lol so am i

[articwolf]

yea nuttin to do...

[AlcTrCKaD]

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
................boredom

[articwolf]

i did lol so am i
ok i psted first chapter of my story.