A couple Sketches that I've done

[Dannathrik]

Hey. I decided I want to show off my work and see what people thought. I'd love comments, criticism too =D

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i279337930_48177_6.jpg

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i278557246_2796_6.jpg

Thats it for now :D

[neurotic_nerd]

those are really good!

[kiki26:)]

*claps* very good! wish I could draw like that XD lol

[Dannathrik]

Hehe, I didn't even realize I could draw like that until a few weeks ago

[Endoh694]

Hey. I decided I want to show off my work and see what people thought. I'd love comments, criticism too =D

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i279337930_48177_6.jpg

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i278557246_2796_6.jpg

Thats it for now :D

*jumps**grabs your ankle* Teach me!!!!

( haha I allways wanted to do that)

[yagamigirl]

thats pretty kool!!!

[Randomgirl]

Those are nice.
But if you move them to the creative corner, I bet they'd get more opinions. ;)

[Dannathrik]

Lol, I didn't know where to put them because they're anime pictures so I put them here :p

[Rei]

Hey. I decided I want to show off my work and see what people thought. I'd love comments, criticism too =D

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i279337930_48177_6.jpg

http://images-014.cdn.piczo.com/i105/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i278557246_2796_6.jpg

Thats it for now :D

(this is for the bottom pic) looks good but u need to make ur hair more like anime, like ur top picture. make the highlights all swiggled, not in a straight line, make the nose and mouth a little bit bigger, and where is the ears? i should be able to see some of the ear, or if u dont want to make ears then create more hair. but its really good for a beging! ive spent 12 years drawing, and in the middle of that 12 years i lost my right arm(its still on my body, i just cant use my right hand) and had to draw w/ my left.

[2sic..]

Those are really good.. :D
I wish i could draw like that..

[Dannathrik]

(this is for the bottom pic) looks good but u need to make ur hair more like anime, like ur top picture. make the highlights all swiggled, not in a straight line, make the nose and mouth a little bit bigger, and where is the ears? i should be able to see some of the ear, or if u dont want to make ears then create more hair. but its really good for a beging! ive spent 12 years drawing, and in the middle of that 12 years i lost my right arm(its still on my body, i just cant use my right hand) and had to draw w/ my left.

Yeah, the bottom one was one of the first 'Decent' pics that i've done. That was about a month ago I think.

It's a shame about your arm though :( That must've been a big problem for you

[Neon]

I agree with RG, these should go in the 'Creative' section. (Thus I will move it there....)
Other than that, they are good, the red-haired girl looks like she has some hair missing from the back, but other than that she is fine.
The first one (the neko) I would have liked to see colored. Have you ever thought about coloring in Photoshop? Or Open Canvas?

[[S].k i t t l e s]

the first one's better it's really nice:D

[Rei]

Yeah, the bottom one was one of the first 'Decent' pics that i've done. That was about a month ago I think.

It's a shame about your arm though :( That must've been a big problem for you

if u do want to check out my pics, some of them my be a little tilted but what the hay, here u go...
http://fanart.theotaku.com/artist.php?id=455963

yea.......

[Dannathrik]

if u do want to check out my pics, some of them my be a little tilted but what the hay, here u go...
http://fanart.theotaku.com/artist.php?id=455963

yea.......

Wow, There are loads of great pics there! And you did a few of them using MS Paint? They're really good! (I suck at drawing on a computer Lol)

I like them alot! Great job Rei! :D

[Dannathrik]

Gots a new one.

Kouta - Elfen Lied

http://i105.piczo.com/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i210799280_74685_6.jpg

I darkened the pic a little so that the pencil lines show up better. What's the verdict?

[Rei]

Gots a new one.

Kouta - Elfen Lied

http://i105.piczo.com/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i210799280_74685_6.jpg

I darkened the pic a little so that the pencil lines show up better. What's the verdict?

well 1 eye is bigger then the other....but good!

[Dannathrik]

well 1 eye is bigger then the other....but good!

Wow...I never actually noticed that O.o

[AbangAssassin]

Gots a new one.

Kouta - Elfen Lied

http://i105.piczo.com/view/3/h/7/2/1/7/2/z/r/g/a/9/img/i210799280_74685_6.jpg

I darkened the pic a little so that the pencil lines show up better. What's the verdict?

Hmm.... oo..kkk....
1. The eyes
2. The viewing angle. Not same as the face.
3. Empty foreground.
4. Try to use lineless paper. That lines really spoils the drawing.

[elizaTrickster]

I just have a question: The first and last drawings- are they form your head? Or were they a picture that you (for a lack of a better word) copied?

They are still good by the way.

[Shadow Tears]

very good i draw to lol

[Dannathrik]

I just have a question: The first and last drawings- are they form your head? Or were they a picture that you (for a lack of a better word) copied?

They are still good by the way.

Yeah, the first and last pics were copied, but I used the original picture to guide me. It was on screen and I kept glancing up andtaking in the detail, then applied it to the pictures.

[elizaTrickster]

I thought so. It's a good way to learn. I used to do that all the time. Another good thing to do is trace comic books to learn perspective.

[Dannathrik]

I thought so. It's a good way to learn. I used to do that all the time. Another good thing to do is trace comic books to learn perspective.

Thats cool, thanks for the tip :D

[AbangAssassin]

Hmm... I kinda want to show off mine.... so here's one..

http://img105.mytextgraphics.com/photolava/2007/05/29/emoinmalaysuit-46n4rsfiz.jpg
An EMo in our traditional clothes, "Baju Melayu"
*of course... the problems is at the shoes.... i messed it up a bit*.

commentars?

check out my "Drawing Show off" and "Pictures of Zodiacs"..
That's all where my work is shown.

[AbangAssassin]

here's the other one......

http://img104.mytextgraphics.com/photolava/2007/05/29/charclasses-46n4x4d8n.jpg

heh... this what really called "character classes" hah hah...

[Shadow Tears]

here's the other one......

http://img104.mytextgraphics.com/photolava/2007/05/29/charclasses-46n4x4d8n.jpg

heh... this what really called "character classes" hah hah...

sweet, i cant see it.