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ShadesOfGrey
05-28-2007, 07:44 AM
I'm ridiculously bored, so I'm trying my hand at poetry. Woo. Let me know how horrible it is. ^^


Devotion for the Romantically Challenged

Love
And
Pain
An art form
You were always better than me
I tried, I really did
Drawn like a moth to flame
You burn me alive
Scattering the ashes of my soul
To forget
The beauty in love
Tormented by the pleasure
And adoring every wound
Defile me! She Cries
Stab me! The plea
Oh, just make me feel again
For once this is over
I’ll surely turn to stone

lanaia74
05-28-2007, 09:25 AM
Very original and creative and very well done:eek: :p

nineteen
05-28-2007, 05:28 PM
really good.

ShadesOfGrey
05-29-2007, 04:57 AM
LOL
It's that bad, huh? XP Thanks guys, I appreciate it.