♥ Small Excerpts and Ideas! ♥

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{ Heya people, It's your one and only Lilith Winters rocking your RP and story worlds!

...Well kinda...I really don't know ALL of you, sad to say. xD

Well, I felt the need to post this to kind of get my creative flow moving along.

NOTE: All of these small story excerpts are made up from the top of my head. Constructive critism would greatly be appreciated. ^^

Also, feel free to leave random comments or bumps, and also small excerpts of your own. Who knows? If I like it, or you want me to help you make your own short story/ RP, I'm free. :D

Hmmm. Well, that's all for now. I'll post my first excerpt as an example of a first-person fiction.

Ta-ta for now, Dahhhh-lings! =p ♥}

[foxed_spirt]

{I can't wait! Wow, you're like me, coming up with rps and stories at the top of your head.}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Rain.

I often wondered how such a beautiful grey day could bring back so many memories...

The breeze turn into a furious torrent as I stared aimlessly ahead of me, waiting fo the call.

Any sign in particular to relieve me of such nostalgia would have been too good to be true...

"Lynne?"

Thank goodness for eavesdroppers.

"Yes, I'm here." Brushing off the wet soil from the bend of my knees, I stood and turned toward my worried and freckled friend, Alicia. Next to her stood my ever-so-protective brother, and husband of Alicia, looking strickingly uneasy.

Well, I suppose he had good reason to.
After all, who would want to spend a rainy Sunday morning in a place such as this?

"C'mon. You've been here for two hours Lynne. We'll take you to your apartment."

I simply nodded absently, staring at the rain drops kissing the dull grey tombstone.

The tombstone that belonged to Him.
My one and only, who'll stay that way forever.

"Yes. I'll be there in a bit." I watched as they left, hesitating, and offered me a pitiful smile.
Making sure that the roses were perfectly placed, I walked toward the two awaiting figures that stood tensely by a black car.

And yet, maybe I was in fact going crazy, but in my mind, a small beautiful echo, I heard him.

'Always, my love, you're with me in spirit...'
And yet I wept again.

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{I can't wait! Wow, you're like me, coming up with rps and stories at the top of your head.}

{ Lol, thanks! ^^ I'm glad to see I'm not the only one running around with an overly-active creative mind! xD }

[foxed_spirt]

{ Lol, thanks! ^^ I'm glad to see I'm not the only one running around with an overly-active creative mind! xD }

{Yeah, I just love how we can do that. I'll be in a shower, and BOOM! Idea! Happened today. But I dunno if I'll put it up for an rp...}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{Yeah, I just love how we can do that. I'll be in a shower, and BOOM! Idea! Happened today. But I dunno if I'll put it up for an rp...}


{ Lol, it happens everyday. *Nod nod* You're free to post your ideas here, random details, and such. :D }

[foxed_spirt]

{ Lol, it happens everyday. *Nod nod* You're free to post your ideas here, random details, and such. :D }

{Ah..Thank you. I might think about that.}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{Ah..Thank you. I might think about that.}

{ Mm. You're welcome then. ^^;; I'll post my second excerpt in a little while or tommorow, just in case you're bored. Which I highly doubt. =p }

[foxed_spirt]

{ Mm. You're welcome then. ^^;; I'll post my second excerpt in a little while or tommorow, just in case you're bored. Which I highly doubt. =p }

{Me, bored? Never.}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

The street lights were an assortment of bright colors and flickered to every street corner nearby.

People drank, danced, and livd for the night all while forgetting their domestic problems; Or perhaps, all problems in general.

'Live today just in case tommorow might not come'.
How cliché were these small whispering lies?

Close to a small park, she stood, her gaze dropped to the black cobblestones.

Minutes, if not seconds, passed by and she tensed furthr and further...

She could hear them so close.
Too close.

'Just hand them the code, and ge ton with it...there's no need to fret...' Despite this, her dark, almost black eyes sparkled with anxiousness as he darted around in panic. The wind played with her raven hair and caressed, in mock reassurance, her pale skin.

They were there, so close, so calm...

"I see, little one, you are having trouble properly breathing. What an odd and trivial thing, endearing mortal, it is to gaze upon you and watch your frailty as you struggle for air..."

She froze. If they, as a race, weren't terrifying enough, their leader sure as hell was worse than all of them combined.

"...I...I have your order. The code is here and I want nothing else to do with you. Any of you." Despite her Nervous state, she was able tospeak calmly, albeit breathless, to the Vampire before her.

"You are an interesting soul. Scared to your breakable bones, and yet here you are, face-to-face, with me. How admirable."

"No more small talk, your code is ready." She handed the small peice of parchment to the Vampire with silver hair and golden-emerald eyes.

"Little Marie, how wonderful it has been tied to your family for decades. I'm afraid though, that this will have to end."

Marie stood, slightly wavering, as he glided slowly, on purpose, towards her.

She held her breath.
She knew what he wanted.

"...N...no...!" She turned, but there he was, standing in front of her in any direction she headed. "Cain! You promised not to...!"

Her effoerts were torn apart however, as he simply smirked.
But behind it, she could see a tint of sadness dull into his beautiful golden-green orbs.

"Tradition is tradition, my lovely." He placed his pallid hands to her tear-streaked face. "You have to become one of us."

{This is a small example of a third-person narrative fiction. As stated before, leave any flames or critisisms, reviews, or the like. Mucho amor, ♥ Lilith W. }

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{...Okay...Apparently no one liked it...-_-;; }

[foxed_spirt]

The street lights were an assortment of bright colors and flickered to every street corner nearby.

People drank, danced, and livd for the night all while forgetting their domestic problems; Or perhaps, all problems in general.

'Live today just in case tommorow might not come'.
How cliché were these small whispering lies?

Close to a small park, she stood, her gaze dropped to the black cobblestones.

Minutes, if not seconds, passed by and she tensed furthr and further...

She could hear them so close.
Too close.

'Just hand them the code, and ge ton with it...there's no need to fret...' Despite this, her dark, almost black eyes sparkled with anxiousness as he darted around in panic. The wind played with her raven hair and caressed, in mock reassurance, her pale skin.

They were there, so close, so calm...

"I see, little one, you are having trouble properly breathing. What an odd and trivial thing, endearing mortal, it is to gaze upon you and watch your frailty as you struggle for air..."

She froze. If they, as a race, weren't terrifying enough, their leader sure as hell was worse than all of them combined.

"...I...I have your order. The code is here and I want nothing else to do with you. Any of you." Despite her Nervous state, she was able tospeak calmly, albeit breathless, to the Vampire before her.

"You are an interesting soul. Scared to your breakable bones, and yet here you are, face-to-face, with me. How admirable."

"No more small talk, your code is ready." She handed the small peice of parchment to the Vampire with silver hair and golden-emerald eyes.

"Little Marie, how wonderful it has been tied to your family for decades. I'm afraid though, that this will have to end."

Marie stood, slightly wavering, as he glided slowly, on purpose, towards her.

She held her breath.
She knew what he wanted.

"...N...no...!" She turned, but there he was, standing in front of her in any direction she headed. "Cain! You promised not to...!"

Her effoerts were torn apart however, as he simply smirked.
But behind it, she could see a tint of sadness dull into his beautiful golden-green orbs.

"Tradition is tradition, my lovely." He placed his pallid hands to her tear-streaked face. "You have to become one of us."

{This is a small example of a third-person narrative fiction. As stated before, leave any flames or critisisms, reviews, or the like. Mucho amor, ♥ Lilith W. }

{I don't really understand it..}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{I don't really understand it..}


{ Really? Sorry. >.<;; It's just an idea that kinda revolves arund plot I made up.

To put it simple, I'd just say that a whole clan of vampires pretty much want to rule over the rest of their race, and ancestrial Vampires leave behind codes for them every 82 years. Thus, the Vampires become intertwined with an old family that specializes in solving puzzles, codes, etc...
Soon, their tradition becomes that the clan leader always takes away one family member everytime they meet with them, only that the Master Vampire falls in love with the girl, who was newly turned...

It's crappy, I know, but it just kind of popped up in my head. Sorry if you don't like it...:( }

[Animeboo]

Yeya! I'm not the only one who comes up with weird Ideas in weird places at weird times!! Mind if I place a story excerpt?

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Yeya! I'm not the only one who comes up with weird Ideas in weird places at weird times!! Mind if I place a story excerpt?

{ Of course I don't mind! ^^ Feel free to do so! :) }

[Animeboo]

Death. It’s really not all that fun. The coldness gripped me as my arms and legs started to go numb with every heartbeat; every slowing heart beat. I could see my killer being…. Actually I couldn’t, tears were blocking my eyes, but I know that my killer was sad, angry, dementedly happy, or regretting what he or she just did. I guess a million thoughts went through my mind, but the biggest one, which I’m sure everyone thinks, is, why? Why me? Why now? Why this way? I was starting to drift off, trying my hardest not to, well, not to feel anything at all; I lifted my head, and then banged it against the floor. I wonder how much blood there is… I thought. I could definitely feel my head bang against the floor. I cried a little bit more, knowing it was all over for me. Again, death’s not fun at all. If there is a God, I haven’t done anything too bad… well, maybe not really bad. My heartbeat got slower and slower by the second, I could feel myself slipping out of reality, when I thought about how careless I was the past few months that led up to me dying…

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Death. It’s really not all that fun. The coldness gripped me as my arms and legs started to go numb with every heartbeat; every slowing heart beat. I could see my killer being…. Actually I couldn’t, tears were blocking my eyes, but I know that my killer was sad, angry, dementedly happy, or regretting what he or she just did. I guess a million thoughts went through my mind, but the biggest one, which I’m sure everyone thinks, is, why? Why me? Why now? Why this way? I was starting to drift off, trying my hardest not to, well, not to feel anything at all; I lifted my head, and then banged it against the floor. I wonder how much blood there is… I thought. I could definitely feel my head bang against the floor. I cried a little bit more, knowing it was all over for me. Again, death’s not fun at all. If there is a God, I haven’t done anything too bad… well, maybe not really bad. My heartbeat got slower and slower by the second, I could feel myself slipping out of reality, when I thought about how careless I was the past few months that led up to me dying…

{ Ooooh, angst. I can never get enough of it...^^ Good Job! }

[Animeboo]

Thanks ! :D Although, it could be better, but I'm glad you think it's good.

[living_in_twilight]

((All I have is a setting I don't know what should go on there D=
you want me to post it? O.o
btw, lovely exerpts lilly ^^))

[Animeboo]

I luved lily's excerpts. Really tense and well written.

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

((All I have is a setting I don't know what should go on there D=
you want me to post it? O.o
btw, lovely exerpts lilly ^^))

{ Of course! Feel free to do so. ^^ And thank you! *Glomp* }

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

I luved lily's excerpts. Really tense and well written.

{ Awww...thank you very much, Animeboo. ^^ I luuurved yours as well! }

[foxed_spirt]

{Nice story. May I post my ~shattered~ on here? I just put it together at the last minute of a Friday night at 12:00 am...}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{Nice story. May I post my ~shattered~ on here? I just put it together at the last minute of a Friday night at 12:00 am...}

{ Of course you may! ^^ I sometimes compose stories late as well...I usually have too much energy I suppose. -.-;; Lol }

[foxed_spirt]

{Okay}


Prologe:::
I watch the sky grow dark this day in June. The wind aginst my pale skin feels good.
"Danille. Come here."
I stand up as my own brother motions me to come to him.
"Yeah?"
"I want you to not cry."
I begin to get curious.
"Why?" I ask.
My brother sighs and leads me to our small home. He turns toward our mother's room. She's not moving.
"Mother? Tell me, brother, is she?"
"Yeah. She's dead."
My brother puts his hand around my arm as we sit down next to my mother.


Chapter One:

I walk the streets with my brother to the graveyard. It's cool and raining today. I can feel the wet grass through my sandals.
"Brother," I ask him "How did Mother die?" He turns to me slowly and answers;
"I really don't know. But after Father died last year, every member of the Ligero have been killed."
I glance at his face, which looks as if he had been crying.
"Brother....."

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{Okay}


Prologe:::
I watch the sky grow dark this day in June. The wind aginst my pale skin feels good.
"Danille. Come here."
I stand up as my own brother motions me to come to him.
"Yeah?"
"I want you to not cry."
I begin to get curious.
"Why?" I ask.
My brother sighs and leads me to our small home. He turns toward our mother's room. She's not moving.
"Mother? Tell me, brother, is she?"
"Yeah. She's dead."
My brother puts his hand around my arm as we sit down next to my mother.


Chapter One:

I walk the streets with my brother to the graveyard. It's cool and raining today. I can feel the wet grass through my sandals.
"Brother," I ask him "How did Mother die?" He turns to me slowly and answers;
"I really don't know. But after Father died last year, every member of the Ligero have been killed."
I glance at his face, which looks as if he had been crying.
"Brother....."

{How interesting. A little touch of angst added with a hint of simplicity.

I like it. ^^ Good job. }

[foxed_spirt]

{How interesting. A little touch of angst added with a hint of simplicity.

I like it. ^^ Good job. }

{Thank you very much. I was half alseep, and I write better when I'm alsleep, I guess. I draw better in the car, too.}

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{Thank you very much. I was half alseep, and I write better when I'm alsleep, I guess. I draw better in the car, too.}


{ Lol, yep, you definitely sound like me.
Except I can't daw in the car, or else I get motion sickness. X.x

I'd love to see your artwork sometime! I'm an artist as well. ^^ The only problem is that my scanner hates me. -_-;; }

[angelgirl1419]

((Great Idea lilith...care if I write one?^_^))

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

((Great Idea lilith...care if I write one?^_^))

{ AngelGirl, you are more than welcome to write anything you want in this thread! You should know that!! xD *Ahem* ...Go right ahead. ^^ }

[angelgirl1419]

((Lol, thank you.^_^ I had an idea...but sadly I lost it...Ah well! I'm sure i'll think of something.))

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

{ Sacré Bleu! ...Don't worry, I'll cope. *Sniffle* ^^;; }

[angelgirl1419]

((Did you just swear at me in french? Lol))

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

((Did you just swear at me in french? Lol))

{ Not at you. No one in particular. And yes, it was french, although it wasn't that much of a curse or swear, Lol. ^^;; }