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imprincess_tiger
06-02-2007, 02:20 PM
They're silent
footsteps masked
blending in
They are unseen
to the normal eye
Where are they?
elizaTrickster
06-03-2007, 01:47 AM
This actually is a poem with some merit. (And I'm a tough crtic to impress.) It's short and enjoyable. It doesn't rhyme. And it is not quite so dark and depressed, and no one is complaining how no can can understand their pain. Bang up job! :D
okami-san
06-03-2007, 02:31 AM
They're silent
footsteps masked
blending in
They are unseen
to the normal eye
Where are they?
Interesting.. Like said once before, its Dark and fairly depressing:) .. Lol.. Ironic.
imprincess_tiger
06-04-2007, 06:58 PM
Thanks guys I had nothing to do so I was writing when it came to me.