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sasuke231
06-05-2007, 12:43 AM
Once upon a time there lived a family of cats. All of them where black except the newborn who was white. His name was kitsaka. Kitsaka loved to play with his sisters, Yufa and Yuna. His Father and Mother always loved to take naps, but not the kids. They like to play, a lot. One day Kitsaka went out for a walk with his sister, Yufa. Yuna didn’t want to go because she wanted to stay and clean up.
“I’m getting tired” complained Yufa. “Well I’m not, you big baby.” Mumbled Kitsaka. Yufa tackles Kitsaka. “When we get back im telling mom you tackled me.” threatened Kitsaka with a sneer. “Oh shut up! I don’t care if your older or younger then me! I’m the boss hear! Mom said I was boss because I’m older so ha!” Yelled Yufa. Kitsaka kicked Yufa in the stomach and jumped up. He sprinted off and he heard a shriek from Yufa. He raced back to find a huge wolf pinning Yufa down on the ground. Kitsaka rams strait into the wolfs side sending him into a tree. The wolf whined. He growled, “The rest of your family is dead. I will get you two soon. That’s a promise.” Kitsaka helped Yufa up and they raced back to there home. When they got there the place was all torn up. And they saw Yuna, Mother, and Father with arrows and scratches everywhere. Kitsaka and Yufa started to panic. They raced away, not knowing where they where going to end up.
“Kitsaka…” said Yufa quietly. “What is it Yufa?” asked Kitsaka as they where running. “I’m kind of scared… What if he wolf finds us and kills us also?” asked Yufa. “To tell the truth… I really don’t know…” said Kitsaka quietly. They raced on. Soon they came across the thickest part of the whole forest. They hid safely in a bush. Yufa went to sleep but Kitsaka stayed awake to make sure Yufa stayed safe. He didn’t want the only other part of his family to be killed also.


Tell me if u think i should ask my gf to write more to me

lanaia74
06-05-2007, 11:16 AM
Loved it! Totally AWESOME!:confusedmonkey :griningmonkey :eek: :)

sasuke231
06-05-2007, 11:15 PM
Loved it! Totally AWESOME!:confusedmonkey :griningmonkey :eek: :)

cool i have the more of the story in my messages i will add it once more ppl comment

swalot-girl
06-13-2007, 02:42 AM
Now ima little embaressed that thats up.

hinataboom
06-13-2007, 02:42 AM
Now ima little embaressed that thats up.

i like it! it was cool!!

swalot-girl
06-13-2007, 02:44 AM
thx........ holy crap......... now i have 5 storys........ and dylan i ended up typing another page. Privet Message me where page 2 stopped okay?