Nameless ((i.e. I don't have a name for it yet.))

[Starry_Catastrophe]

Why can't we have time to make descisions,
Have time to live?
If we can't keep going and going,are we dead?
Like a petals falling from a flower?
Though the petals fall,don't thay still have a bit of life?
Throw me down,
Pick me up,
Build me up so you can watch me fall.
Is that what you just sat there for?
To watch me fall?
It's just a game to all of you.
Have you ever even experienced life at all?
Have you stood on the edge of a moutain and felt the adrenaline that your holding life and death in the palm of your hand at the same time?
Have you ever thought of living life before you destory mine?

[AlcTrCKaD]

i really like it

[priestess94]

wow its good umm name ups and downs of life

[elizaTrickster]

Just one quick question: why is your second-to-last line so much longer than everything else?

It really throws off the rhythm.

The beginning sounds akward when read aloud, but you built up a good momentium with these three lines:

"Throw me down,
Pick me up,
Build me up so you can watch me fall."

They were pretty cool. Overall, it's nice, but it just needs some work. :D