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♥тωιѕтє∂_яσѕє♥
06-07-2007, 05:01 PM
I feel the bitter sensation
crawling beneath my skin
As my fingers trace the scars
Once more my anger wins
I spit words of acid
As my blood rushes alive
Yet the words do not wound
so for what did i strive?
I stare into those eyes
I am dazzled, yet i am grieved
distressed by my own cries
stumbling as i try walk away
my mind is set in a twirl
Somehow im forced to stay
With a stung heart and soul.
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TWISTED ROSE
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broken inside
06-07-2007, 05:09 PM
I think its good^^

ILuvMangos
06-07-2007, 05:14 PM
that was awesome!!!!!!!!

♥тωιѕтє∂_яσѕє♥
06-07-2007, 05:15 PM
Thanks.. I think it needs abit of polishing though... XD

broken inside
06-07-2007, 05:17 PM
Yeah I think it does to but I did like it.