My Light...

[Sweetie2393]

Together forever is what he said, I listened to those words, and now feel like I'm dead.
Forever was a lie, one that made me cry and die inside.
Seeing him with someone else now, is something I dont think I can take.
Knowing how I lost him, that it was my mistake.
His feelings he had for me, went down the drain, unlike this killing pain.
I sit here in the dark, where the vampires roam, where the light cannot touch my now black soul.
All I can do is wait and wait, for someone to come and be my light...

*Shrugs* I was bored... Bad I know, but yesh me is bored >.>.

[NinjaMouse]

THis piece shows a lot of emotion I like it for that part. YOu really must miss this guy, since your now in the dark. Lost, and alone... Well lets not get off subject this is a great piece I love it it shows emotion it shows chacter it shows life,

[Sweetie2393]

Thanks... :]

[♥тωιѕтє∂_яσѕє♥]

Yup.. you've got talent.

[Sugar_rune]

Hi! Wat'cha all talking about?? Hi! Uhhh...er, wat'cha saying, again?? :* I'll be gueit! Bye bye dude's and dudetes!!:p :p :p

[Sugar_rune]

Hi! Wat'cha all talking about?? Hi! Uhhh...er, wat'cha saying, again?? :* I'll be gueit! Bye bye dude's and dudete's!!:p :p :p

[killerkiwi]

I really think that's agood work. Heh, it isn't just because of I'm German. I like poems and I added this into my favourite ;)

[Sweetie2393]

Yup.. you've got talent.
Thanks... >.>...
Hi! Wat'cha all talking about?? Hi! Uhhh...er, wat'cha saying, again?? :* I'll be gueit! Bye bye dude's and dudetes!!:p :p :p

Um please dont post like that here...

[Sweetie2393]

I really think that's agood work. Heh, it isn't just because of I'm German. I like poems and I added this into my favourite ;)

Hehe, thanks ^^.