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elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 06:17 PM
I'm so bored, I can't see straight! :D
~1~
We settled into things we knew could never be
We were content with our destiny
Together we lived for things unknown
Together we knew, we could never go home
Living this life one day at a time
Living together, in our world of rhyme
Apart and detached, yet together and whole
Apart becomes only a word
Though it's everything that shaped our world
Though 'everything' is just a word
Words that shape
Words that define
They are what guides our eternity
They are the life that we knew could never be
Our eternity is false
Our whole being is one heart, with one pulse
The things we once thought were true
The things became shattered and we knew
We knew that words were false
~2~
Detached and uncaring
Self- Pitying and meek
Guess it's all been said
You are your own tragedy
Fool
You are what you make yourself
Life is simple
Do what you will, if it harm none
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 08:52 PM
All in all, they were all right. Pretty good for spouting from apparently complete boredom.
"We were content with our destiny
Together we lived for things unknown
Together we knew, we could never go home
Living this life one day at a time"
That bit reminds me of something, but I can't think of what...
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 09:39 PM
All in all, they were all right. Pretty good for spouting from apparently complete boredom.
"We were content with our destiny
Together we lived for things unknown
Together we knew, we could never go home
Living this life one day at a time"
That bit reminds me of something, but I can't think of what...
It felt appropriate at times to throw in the line: "Livin' life at the edge of the bowl." But I resisted that temptation.
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 09:43 PM
It felt appropriate at times to throw in the line: "Livin' life at the edge of the bowl." But I resisted that temptation.
It doesn't remind me of "Rock 'N' Salad Roll", if that's what you're hinting at. The wording just seems like I've read something similar before... But, then, you know me. I've seen everything and everyone in some previous life or something, because this is all familiar.
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 09:46 PM
Ha ha! Indeed. I haven't forgotten. That's why I'm not worrying about it too much. Though, I would like to know why it's familiar.
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 09:48 PM
Ha ha! Indeed. I haven't forgotten. That's why I'm not worrying about it too much. Though, I would like to know why it's familiar.
What a coincidence. So would I. :cool:
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 09:51 PM
I like how it's only been you who's been responding to my threads. :D Danke!
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 09:53 PM
I like how it's only been you who's been responding to my threads. :D Danke!
Well, not only do I feel an obligation to, but also, I know that you won't eat or ignore me. And maybe if there are enough posts on them, people will look.
It's not like you're not usually the only one who responds to mine. :]
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 09:58 PM
Nobody understands our ART! *emo ugh and makes slit wrist motion*
Ooo look there. I was controversial. Maybe now people will respond! :D
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 10:01 PM
Nobody understands our ART! *emo ugh and makes slit wrist motion*
Ooo look there. I was controversial. Maybe now people will respond! :D
I'm starting to worry about you. You're always locking yourself away in your room and writing poetry and listening to bands whose lead singer doesn't sound like he's hit puberty yet. And then those mysterious cuts on your arms...are you all right? [concerned face]
:D
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 10:03 PM
Don't ask me that! You'd never understand! Nobody understands what I'm going through! I'm so alone! No one else in the world had ever felt pain like I have! I'm so misunderstood! My house is three stories tall and my father drives a Mercedes! No one can feel my pain! You are so absurd! *Toss, Gay*
((Oh look! I said 'gay'!))
:D
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 10:06 PM
Don't ask me that! You'd never understand! Nobody understands what I'm going through! I'm so alone! No one else in the world had ever felt pain like I have! I'm so misunderstood! My house is three stories tall and my father drives a Mercedes! No one can feel my pain! You are so absurd! *Toss, Gay*
((Oh look! I said 'gay'!))
:D
Now you're bringing gay people into it?! You've gone too far! I was about to pity you, but now, how can I? How can I believe you're anything but a spolied, whiny brat who hates gay people? I thought you were so much more! But now you've turned into one of them!
((Gay is my favourite verb, followed closely by emo.))
:D
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 10:08 PM
I don't care anymore! I don't care what happens! I'm just so... depressed! *Fails about dramatically*
((Oh looky! Depression! Ha ha! Gay and emo are my favourites too.))
:D
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 10:11 PM
I don't care anymore! I don't care what happens! I'm just so... depressed! *Fails about dramatically*
((Oh looky! Depression! Ha ha! Gay and emo are my favourites too.))
:D
You always do this! You always fall when the going gets tough. You're not a real man anymore! You're a sorry, emasculated excuse for a human being! I'm leaving, John, and I'm going for good this time! *grabs suitcase and slams door*
((I have no idea why I made you male.))
:D
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 10:15 PM
You always do this! You always fall when the going gets tough. You're not a real man anymore! You're a sorry, emasculated excuse for a human being! I'm leaving, John, and I'm going for good this time! *grabs suitcase and slams door*
((I have no idea why I made you male.))
:D
((Because that's the only way you could've said that.))
Well I see no more point in arguing. You ended it. :(
premiumdancer
06-17-2007, 10:15 PM
Es tut mir leid. :[
elizaTrickster
06-17-2007, 10:17 PM
Das ist ok. I don't think it was working, anyway.