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mj_in_wonderlandXO
06-19-2007, 01:19 AM
Ok, I only have the first chapter!

“Time to get up Hanna!”
Oh how I loathe how every morning my older brother, Matthew Good, had to wake me up at exactly nine in the morning so I could get ready for school.
I shoved my brother off of my bed and glared evilly through my knotted black, blonde streaked hair. He smiled like a little kid and stood himself up.
“You have no idea how much pain you’d be feeling right now if I wasn’t too tired to move.” I hissed throwing the covers over my head and burrowing into my sheets.
Of course Matthew had to pull all the covers off of me just to aggravate me. He knew I wasn’t a morning person and he was practically begging for me to kick him.
“Final exams, baby sister!” he said cheerfully, “One more and you’re out for the summer!”
I rolled on my side and stumbled to my feet. “Matt, I love you, but…I’m going…to choke you.” I said glaring at his cheery, eyeliner-caked face as he grinned.
“And to think, next year, I’ll be going to community college and my baby sister will be in high school, finally!” he exclaimed, wiping his face of a imaginary tear and sniffling, “My little Hanna Mai is growing up so fast!”
“Why won’t mom kick you out already?” I groaned, limping my way into my bathroom to brush my teeth. As I scrubbed away at my pearly whites Matt stood behind me giggling like a little school girl. Damn, he was so happy I swear he was going to break out in a verse of “I feel pretty”.
“No such luck, sis.”
“What are you so damn cheerful about?” I asked, rinsing my mouth and turning to face him, still in my pajamas.
His mouth gaped and he pretended to be shocked by my language, “Hanna Mai! Where’d you learn to talk like that!?”
“Easy,” I remarked, “I live with you, now why are you so happy?”
He smiled, “Oh nothing, just that…Starr is moving to L.A finally!”
Oh god, it was about Matty’s little childhood girlfriend, Starla Moore, or Starr as he called her. She was moving back to L.A? Well, this was my chance to check my big brother’s girl out.
“She’s moving in over town with her little brother and going to college with me.” He beamed.
Now that sounded like something I wanted to hear, a little brother. Hopefully, he was hot. “Oh, how old is Starr’s little brother?” I asked in curiosity.
“In high school,” he replied, “But I’m not sure how old he is, you and him will be going to school together, though.”
“And this boy’s name?” I asked suggestively.
“Dunno, but he’s just like you. Young, annoying, wears eyeliner and emo jeans. So on.”
I nodded my head and tried to picture the kid in my mind, no use trying, I’d just have to wait until Starr and her brother came to town. “When are they coming?” I asked.
“They will be here tonight, I’ll pick you up from school and then we are going to the coffee shop to meet them.” He replied, now a little less cheery and back to “normal” Matthew.
“Ok, now get out, I have to get dressed”
Matt obeyed and left my room. I picked out a pair of ripped jeans, my converse, and a plain black wife beater. I pulled back my blonde and black hair back into a messy bun with a black headband in. I covered my eyes in heavy eyeliner and put all my rings in, which included a labret ring and all my ear rings. I smiled at myself in the mirror and left to go meet Matt, grabbing my Jack Skellington bag on the way out to Matt’s old beat up car. I said goodbye to my mom who was smoking a cigarette and drinking her coffee. She waved goodbye as I jogged out the door to the car. I got in and we drove off to my middle school.
When we arrived at the school, I said goodbye to my brother and ran inside and up to the class we were supposed to test in. I sat down beside my best friend, Sammi Lesson, who was sitting there listening to her Ipod loudly. She pulled her earphones out the minute I sat down.
“Hello there,” she said, “I was beginning to worry where you were, did Matt have to wake you up?”
“Yeah, right after this he has to pick me up and we have to go meet him little girlfriend and her little brother who are moving here.” I replied picking at my black painted nails.
“Is he hot? The little brother, I mean.” Sammi said to me like she always does when it involves a boy. Sammi knew I was boy obsessive. C’mon, I’m a fourteen-year-old girl, what else can you expect besides make-up, trashy clothes, piercings, loud music and boys?
I shrugged, “I don’t know yet, but if he is, I call him!”
Sammi leaned back and huffed, “Damn you, Hanna.”
I just smiled at her and we went on with our final exams. After the three hour exams it was a little after noon, I waited outside of the school on the picnic tables with Sammi and my other friend, Vince.
Vince was obsessed with the band NOFX, it was sometimes weird. Skateboarding, hot girls, boobs and NOFX took over that kid’s life. He was messed up, but I loved him. He was an amazing friend to me.
Beep Beep
I turned my head to the curb where Matt’s ride was waiting for me. “Ok, I’ll call you guys later, its movie and popcorn night at my house tonight!” I said, grabbing my bag.
“Extra butter this time and don’t let Matt come, he’s a weird emo freak.” Vince sneered.
“Hey!” Sammi and I took offensively.
“Pffft, I don’t care about you two, it’s the emo boys that scare me. Emo girls are hot.” Vince corrected.
I rolled my eyes at him and said goodbye to them and ran over to my big brother and got in the car. “Hey Matthew, ready to go meet your girl?” I said, buckling in.
My brother kept his grip on the steering wheel tight as he kept his gaze forward. He looked pissed. I gave him a strange look, “Matt?”
He turned his angry blue eyes to meet my same pair. His medium-length black hair hung around his pale face and his pierced lips stayed still.
“Matt?” I repeated.
He pulled something out of his pocket and tossed them so they landed on my lap. My heart sank into my stomach.
“What were these doing in your room?”

helpme848
06-19-2007, 01:41 AM
I will post here too! Aha! ^-^

Go on!

Gooooooo on!

mj_in_wonderlandXO
06-19-2007, 01:55 AM
i must first write the second chapter! ^_^ hehe

helpme848
06-19-2007, 01:57 AM
i must first write the second chapter! ^_^ hehe

You better be writing away right now.

Rawr.

mj_in_wonderlandXO
06-19-2007, 02:21 AM
ok ok here's the second chapter, kind of short but yeah ^_^

I stared down at the box of razors Matt had thrown on my lap. I couldn’t believe it. My mouth hung open as I opened my mouth to say something.
“Save it.” My brother sneered.
I tried again to say something, but I was once again interrupted.
“Show me your wrists…now.” he said sternly.
“Matt…I-“
“Hanna!” he snapped, leaving me silent to his outburst, “Show me your damn wrists, Hanna!” he yelled at me, teeth clenched.
“I didn’t do anything!” I yelled back, backing away from him. I felt tears slide down my face as I stared at him. Matt had never yelled at me for anything, he was so scary when he was mad. Matt’s look softened as he calmed and looked at me.
“Hanna,” he said quieter, “Please…just show me your wrists.”
I still cried as I angrily pulled up both my sleeves to reveal two unmarked arms, free of a blemish or cut. “****ing happy?” I asked eyes puffy as I turned away from my brother and put my feet on the dashboard.
He let out a heavy sigh and started driving down the street, both of us staying silent half of the way to meet Starr and her brother. I glared out my window at the passing scenery. Suddenly, Matt stopped the car next to the park. The motor died down and the car stopped. My brother turned his head to me, both hands releasing the wheel. “Hanna?” he said in a miserable voice that cracked when he talked, he had been crying too, “I’m sorry.”
I sighed and slumped further down in my seat, breathing in uneasily from crying. I wiped my stinging eyes and just glared out the window.
“Hanna,” he repeated, “Please talk to me.”
In my stuffy tone of voice I replied, “Why can’t you just trust me?”
“Hanna,” he said, placing a friendly hand on my shoulder. I smacked it away hatefully. “Hanna, you’re my baby sister, what am I supposed to think when I find a box of razors underneath your bed?” he said to me in a calm, caring voice. I knew how much Matt worried about me. “You’re like my prized possession, Hanna. With mom always busy at work, the only person I have left is you.” He said to me, hearing his hand brush his wet cheek, “When dad walked out on us, you were just a baby, but I remember mom saying to me ‘Matty, honey, daddy’s not here to protect Hanna anymore. Promise me you’ll always protect her’. And that’s what I intend to do, I will never walk out on you, Hanna, never. You’ll always be my baby sister and I will always be there for you. I can’t even imagine why you would ever want to hurt yourself.”
“I didn’t.” I said quickly but quietly, turning to meet my brother’s eyes, “I wouldn’t hurt myself, Matt. The razors were there for a project for school a long time ago, I forgot to get there out from under my bed, I’m sorry.”
A small smile came about my brother’s face, “I’m glad to hear that, sis.” Just then, Matt pulled me into a tight hug , “I’m always here to talk to, remember that.”
I smiled a little and patted him back as we released.
Matt put one of his hands over mine, “I love you, sis.”
“I love you, too, bro.” I replied gently as we hugged one more time, “Now, c’mon, your lover and her brother must be wondering where we are.”
Matt smiled and nodded his head. He started up the car and drove to the coffee shop to meet Starr and her brother.