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Vemo
07-26-2007, 03:11 AM
I have a story I'm working on and I posted it in the Creative Corner or whatever.
The title is 'My Story'. It's really not that hard to find.
Anyway, could you guys read it and give me feedback on it? I'd appreciate that.
Thanks.

1998enm
07-26-2007, 01:07 PM
i lovie your story!

Vemo
07-26-2007, 01:08 PM
Thanks!!
Anyone else?

star*
07-26-2007, 01:37 PM
I read whats there and I think it's really good. Kept me intertained:D

1998enm
07-26-2007, 01:38 PM
yeah it is good i love it!

Vemo
07-26-2007, 01:41 PM
I shall do my best, star!

zippythewild
07-26-2007, 01:45 PM
I have a story I'm working on and I posted it in the Creative Corner or whatever.
The title is 'My Story'. It's really not that hard to find.
Anyway, could you guys read it and give me feedback on it? I'd appreciate that.
Thanks.

i commented

star*
07-26-2007, 01:45 PM
I shall do my best, star!

haha. Thank you! Im sure it wont be to hard.

Vemo
07-26-2007, 01:51 PM
I know. I read it.

Do you entertain easily, like me?