Eternal Winter

[Starry_Catastrophe]

You left me here in the cold
Only myself to hold a heavy heart.
The world closes in
And our hearts turn to ice.
Your eyes are hollow and cold,
like snow,
Never ending snow...
This is truly my own eternal winter,
You froze my heart and then broke it.

[Evanessa]

This reminds me of a song I heard in an anime called Full Moon o Saga****e. You should check it out. Nice poem.:D They blocked out a word for no reason! sagsa s.h.i.t.e. No periods!

[Starry_Catastrophe]

I reallyy want to write a song,but i'm afraid it will be bad ^.^""

[Charmless_Anachronism]

I like it. I really like the similies and metaphors, the entire comparison with coldness. However, for some odd reason, I don't like the last line. I think it's the "...then broke it." BUT I DON'T HAVE A REASON! I just don't like it. BUUUUT I do love the rest. A+!

[Starry_Catastrophe]

Yeah,it was just closing it,I would have done better if I hadn't thought it up in five minutes xD
Thanks Charm!