kiki26:)
08-24-2007, 01:53 AM
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-Kiki26
premiumdancer
08-24-2007, 02:16 AM
I'm sorry, but...they judge you for who you be? I not be down with that, yo. I'm guessing you were just trying to rhyme with "me", but poems don't all have to rhyme. Some of the best poems don't. You could also argue that poetry doesn't have to follow grammar rules, but come on. They judge you for who you be? It just sounds so ridiculous.*
*Note: I am not trying to be mean. Please don't read this thinking that I hate you or something, because I honestly couldn't care less about you or this poem for that matter. I just felt I had to respond because whenever people talk about who they "be" I think it sounds ridiculous, and I don't want people's poetry to sound ridiculous. :D
premiumdancer
08-24-2007, 02:33 AM
Well, I guess that's just who you be. And I guess I'll just never understand, 'cause that's not how I be.