baby_gal_1714
08-29-2007, 03:17 AM
plz read this and tell me if you like or dislike this, and if you happen to dislike this plz break it to me gently.(hehe lol) thank you.
I slowly opened the door to my car and stepped out. I was about to shut the door when i noticed a picture of my fourteenyear old daughter on the floor of the car. I reached over a grobbed the picture and shoving it into my pocket. I shut the car door and notice for about the hundredth time that the door didn't shut right. "Stupid P.O.S. i muttered uder my breath. I had taken one step when i suddenly heard a "SNAP." I spun around and saw a man running up the driveway faster then seemed possible. He was wearing tattered clothes and no shoes as his feet slapped across the pavement right in my direction. I screamed as i spunb around heading toward my house. I'd taken about fifteen running steps when he grabbed me from behind. He locked his arm around my body holding my arms to my side and try as i might i could not seem to losten his grip on me. He used his other hand and roughly shoved my head to the side. His teeth lengthen and then i felt two pricks of pain in my neck as he bit down. It didn't really hurt but i screamed never the less. I could here him gulping my blood as it flowed into his mouth. He then shoved me to the ground but he never released my skin so a piece of flesh was torn from my neck right over my juglar. I laid there bairly breathing as i watched the man run and jump over a twelve foot fench and into the next yard. I tried to scream for help but i couldn't seem to talk or even move. Then my vison became hazy and my eyelids became heavy and all too soon darkness consumed me.
I slowly opened the door to my car and stepped out. I was about to shut the door when i noticed a picture of my fourteenyear old daughter on the floor of the car. I reached over a grobbed the picture and shoving it into my pocket. I shut the car door and notice for about the hundredth time that the door didn't shut right. "Stupid P.O.S. i muttered uder my breath. I had taken one step when i suddenly heard a "SNAP." I spun around and saw a man running up the driveway faster then seemed possible. He was wearing tattered clothes and no shoes as his feet slapped across the pavement right in my direction. I screamed as i spunb around heading toward my house. I'd taken about fifteen running steps when he grabbed me from behind. He locked his arm around my body holding my arms to my side and try as i might i could not seem to losten his grip on me. He used his other hand and roughly shoved my head to the side. His teeth lengthen and then i felt two pricks of pain in my neck as he bit down. It didn't really hurt but i screamed never the less. I could here him gulping my blood as it flowed into his mouth. He then shoved me to the ground but he never released my skin so a piece of flesh was torn from my neck right over my juglar. I laid there bairly breathing as i watched the man run and jump over a twelve foot fench and into the next yard. I tried to scream for help but i couldn't seem to talk or even move. Then my vison became hazy and my eyelids became heavy and all too soon darkness consumed me.