Poems

[Labyrinthgirl]

(I wrote two poems today and wnated everybody's opinion
First one is called Black Moon and Purple Sun

Sunshine and flowers bloody powers black moon and purple sun gothic night not silent night I'm alone in the world of light I know no hope I know no love I live alone alone everynight of my life all alone


And the second one is called Blood Rose in my hair

A flower by no other name dear flower I know not your name what I do know is people refer to you as The Cursed Rose are you truly?They say Eighty people have died after touching you I'm not scared I welcome death with open arms so I ever so gently place you in my hair and walk around with a blood rose in my hiar now I see their scared faces I laguh at their fear I shall never take you out for you are the blood rose in my hair



By the wya I am not a goth I just write gothic stuff

[premiumdancer]

I refuse to read these "poems", as they are written in badly-punctuated prose format.

No offense. :D

[itjust_another_lovestory]

i really like the first one the second one reminded my of dasiy head masiy by dr.suses (or how ever you spell his name)