rockerchic24
10-09-2007, 01:43 AM
What the heck did i just write... O_O I've been practicing to be more litarate but how the crap did i write this?! O______O
E___ hugged S_____ back. He could never remember being so happy. Only being filled with feelings of hatred toward his father and half brothers. He was the happiest he'd ever been. And the one to thank, was S_____. She was the cause, the reason. She was the reason his life turned around, his light, whiled he was trapped in this world of nothing but pitch black darkness of his heart. He had learned to love from her. He tighten his grip and breathed out, "S_____... Thank you, so much... I love you. You're the greatest thing that's ever happened to me, if you ever leave again. I'd... I'd never be the same, I'd die inside." He said, finally verbally proclaiming his love.
((I blanked out the names cuz i felt like it... XD))
Yeah, amazed how i just did that... I mean WTF?! When'd I get skills at writing...? Does anyone think its good? I think its good but very, very, corny... XD I just didn't think this would go in the creative section or the rping section so i just put it here. But if it's in the wrong section, by all means, go ahead and move it! ^_^ But, what'd you think?
E___ hugged S_____ back. He could never remember being so happy. Only being filled with feelings of hatred toward his father and half brothers. He was the happiest he'd ever been. And the one to thank, was S_____. She was the cause, the reason. She was the reason his life turned around, his light, whiled he was trapped in this world of nothing but pitch black darkness of his heart. He had learned to love from her. He tighten his grip and breathed out, "S_____... Thank you, so much... I love you. You're the greatest thing that's ever happened to me, if you ever leave again. I'd... I'd never be the same, I'd die inside." He said, finally verbally proclaiming his love.
((I blanked out the names cuz i felt like it... XD))
Yeah, amazed how i just did that... I mean WTF?! When'd I get skills at writing...? Does anyone think its good? I think its good but very, very, corny... XD I just didn't think this would go in the creative section or the rping section so i just put it here. But if it's in the wrong section, by all means, go ahead and move it! ^_^ But, what'd you think?