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myhorses1011
12-13-2007, 08:51 PM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z288/jerry_angela/AnimeMeLogan3.jpg
Alone time ago a girl and a boy where best friends but the boy moved and now they are 16 and they go to the same school she likes him but she doesn't know its him he just thinks she is crazy he doesn't its her will they found out and fall in love or will they find out and just go back to being friends or will they never find out?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a367/juney2/Anime/SpyingInPE.jpg


Please tell me what you think I have been working on it for alone time and by the way sorry about the spelling

Twilight_Moon528
12-14-2007, 08:32 PM
I think its sounds really cool.I wrote a story like that once ^.^

xxShyGrlxx
12-14-2007, 09:36 PM
I think its a pretty good idea. But for people to understand it more, you should probably use capitalization ( I dont even know if i spelled that right, its a big word. ><). But other than that i still like the idea, but it seems a bit un-original. Im not meaning to criticize, if i offend you in any way, im sorry.

SiriuslyRemus
12-15-2007, 12:13 AM
Isn't it good if it's origenal, Shy? Do you mean, un-origenal? I didn't really understnad the way you phrased "he likes him but she doesn't know its him he just thinks she is crazy he doesn't its her will they found out and fall in love or will they find out and just go back to being friends or will they never find out?" I figure you meant that the two little children end up at the same school, now 16 years old, nd meat but do not relize they are meating their former friends. But there's still a bunch I don't understand about it. It sort of sounds interesting, if I could just figure out what all of it meant.

myhorses1011
12-15-2007, 12:28 AM
If you didn't get it its cuz i'm not good at spelling and stuff thanks for posting something

SiriuslyRemus
12-15-2007, 12:48 AM
No, it's not the spelling, it's just... like what did you mean by, he thinks she's crazy? He thinks she's crazy why?

myhorses1011
12-15-2007, 01:08 AM
Cuz she is always talking to him and blusheing

Twilight_Moon528
12-15-2007, 04:30 PM
I understood it..perfectly..
((hey horses,were did you get that cute pic at the bottem of your siggy??))

vinilar
12-15-2007, 04:51 PM
*rasies hand* I'd join ^_^

myhorses1011
12-15-2007, 05:35 PM
I understood it..perfectly..
((hey horses,were did you get that cute pic at the bottem of your siggy??))

photobucket I think I put in cute banner it think


*rasies hand* I'd join ^_^

o.o really? cool I'm going to make it right now

vinilar
12-15-2007, 05:41 PM
photobucket I think I put in cute banner it think




o.o really? cool I'm going to make it right now
Woot........

Twilight_Moon528
12-15-2007, 05:46 PM
ok thank you ^.^

myhorses1011
12-15-2007, 05:59 PM
Its done

http://www.dollwizard.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1964773#post1964773

If anyone wants to join :)

Your welcome Moon