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Soaki-chan
12-15-2007, 11:43 PM
That's right. Title's in japanese. 'Rikka' as in Rikka.
The protaganist's name.(Doubt i spelled that right. >:p)
'Furai' as in fly.
And 'mohaya' as in now. Can Also be translated
as 'already'.
Anyway, please enjoy the thrilling, comedic,
dramatic, and all-around-great tale of
a 10-year-old(You knew it was coming!)
shcool girl and her
IKIKANSHISHA!
(A.K.A "Ikisha")

Chapter one~ Let's fly!

"Migoto! Hurry up!" Rikka yelled. Migoto
Ran as fast as her legs would carry her, which wasn't that fast.
"Crap, we're going to be late! Hurry up, Migoto!" Migoto stopped and panted heavily.
"Idiot! Migoto, there's five minutes until school starts
and we still have 3 blocks to go! Get off your knees and RUN!" Rikka grabbed Migoto by her arm and half-dragged, half-carried her.
"R-Rikka-chan! Watch out!" They came across a bench,
but Rikka leaped over the thing with no problem with Migoto
flying behind her.
Migoto's feet were absolutly sore and throbbing with pain as the gates to the primary school drew in sight, already closing. Rikka ran even faster, and as she reached the gate, threw Migoto in and followed in after her.
"Rikka chan! The bell! The grounds are deserted..."Migoto pointed out.
"Duh! Now, get moving!" Once again, Rikka was off in a flash, leaving Migoto several meters behind her.

"Unabara! Koubashii! You two are late by exactly..." Hina-sensei looked at her watch.
"THREE MINUTES AND NINETEEN SECONDS! I should see you in here at lunch." The class laughed as Migoto turned pink and started to cry and Rikka just stood there.
"C'mon, Migoto." Rikka sat down at her desk, way in the back of the room with the rest of the brainiacs.

The bell rang for the lunch-reccess, and the children
ran out of the room to grab their lunches from the cafeteria and go and romp and gallop as they pleased.
Rikka sat down in her desk, arms folded, and eyes staring at the floor.
"Unabara Rikka. Unabara Rikka. You get in trouble almost everyday. But yet you are the most smartest girl in the fifth grade, not to mention the daughter of a great line
of sceintists. The Unabaras are famous for their intellegence, but I fear you won't be one of them."
Hina-sensei lectured. Rikka put her cheeck on her hand,
now staring at the desk.
"I don't want to be a stupid scientist." She muttered under her breath.
"And you, Koubashii! You are very sweet, but always let your friend here," She stared at Rikka for a moment.
"Get you in trouble! And you cry much to easily."
Migoto sniffed.
"I can't help it." She said quietly.
Hina-sensei just lowered her head and crossed her legs.
"I am very dissapointed in each of you. But, since it seems I can't do anything, go off and eat. You're dismissed."

Rikka walked out of the school grounds, with Migoto at her side.
"Migoto...please, can I be alone? I have alot on my mind."
Migoto nodded sadly, and walked away.
Who's place is it for sensei to tell me who I am? Ugh. My head
hurts. I've been feeling weird lately. It's strange...and I've also been having these strange dreams the past few nights. They all
seem to be about the same thing...me, and three others my age with
some sort of spirit person coming out of them.
Jeez. I'm just thinking about one thing, and then the next...
"OOMPH!" Rukia found herself, while lost in thought,
running into a tree. her head was now throbbing with pain.
"Crap...I need to get home. My head is killing me."
While in pain, she was completely unaware of a boy watching her from up in a tree.



I hope you liked the first chapter! Please
tell me your opinion!

Soaki-chan
12-16-2007, 04:29 PM
YOU WILL REPLY IF I HAVE TO STRANGLE YOU!

Yes. Now reply or else I shan't write any more.

renjineko
12-16-2007, 04:30 PM
Love It Plz Post More

Soaki-chan
12-16-2007, 04:40 PM
Thank you. If I get a few more replies I shall write chapter two.

Soaki-chan
12-18-2007, 08:01 PM
Chapter 1- continued.
Rikka fell, into darkness. The transparent ghost-like figure flew into her,
And she was suddenly floating, and landed onto a black floor. Three others were circled around her, but with blank faces. The ghost-like
figures all flew out, and every one dissapeared. Everyone but
Rikka. The ghost-like figure she has seen with her in the past dreams
flew into her, and she dissapeared into the floor.
Then, she woke up.

"Ugh...my head." Rikka muttered. She was in a cold sweat as she got out of bed, put on her slippers, and got some water.


Okay.

That's all of chapter one. I thought it just wasn't long enough.


Chapter 2- Untitled

"Hey, Rikka-chan!" Migoto yelled. She walked up to Rikka, her
orange hair flying along with the blue ribbon she kept it in.
"Migoto. Hi." She was spaced out, staring at the scenery.
"Hm? Rikka-chan? Are you okay?" Migoto asked.
"Y-yeah, I'm fine. Just had a rough night."
Migoto dosen't know...if I told her...she wouldn't
understand...but she's my best frined...
Damn...what should I do? Rikka thought.
"Oh! Did you have nightmares?"
Rikka shook her head.
"Uh, n-no. Just forget I said that, I'm fine!" She said nervously.
"Um, okay. If you say so, Rikka-chan!"
Rikka felt a prickle go down her neck, like she was being watched. She stopped for a second, and looked around. She blinked a few times, and continued on walking.

"I see you two are ontime today! Sit now." Hina-sensei said.





That is everything written down in my notebook so far, once I think of something else, I'll type it.