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eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 10:16 PM
Hey a vampire RP That I made I don't kno why I like Vampire RPS they are so much fun well this one's about the war between Vampires and demons from the underworld.

The rules are: Rated PG 13 only but you can have alot of blood if that is what you like...and maybe some romance too.....


Name: Suki

Female

Type: Vampire

looks:http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p170/Sessgurl23/Winghearts.jpg

hates:Other demons that get in her way

likes:blood and other vampires



Name:Naraku ((Yeah I no it's from Inuyasha))

male

Type Demon

looks:http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p170/Sessgurl23/067.jpg

Hates:Suki and other vampires

loves:killing

midnight walker
11-02-2006, 10:26 PM
I want to play.

Name: Yori

Im a vampire

Likes to scare people and kill bad guys and love to laugh

Dislike: rude people

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 10:29 PM
((YAY a Person))

(hey i will be on in a lil while okay???))

midnight walker
11-02-2006, 10:45 PM
Okay. I be waiting.

NinjaMouse
11-02-2006, 11:16 PM
Name: Draka
RAce: Vampire
Gender: Female:
Likes: unkiwn
Dislikes: Annoying people, the elder clan memeners.
Looks: short White highlighed black hiar, blue eyes. she wears a black tanktop with black pants and black boots and a trech coat. Draka also wears a fang necklace.

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:19 PM
((KK I am back))

kuronuekourmie
11-02-2006, 11:19 PM
Name: shadow
RAce: Vampire
Gender: Female:
Likes: gettign rid of scum bag vampires
Dislikes: getting cheap **** jobs
Looks: long dark indego hair and eyes and dark crimson short sleevless top, blaxck trip pants, chain coller/wrist bands.

mind if i join in?

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:23 PM
((KK just maybe a few more))

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:30 PM
Um let's start everyone!!!))

kuronuekourmie
11-02-2006, 11:33 PM
good idea wheres the setting

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:37 PM
(um let me think ...well we live in a mansion and the demons live in hell so we live in a old town where humans live and the demons...hell))

kuronuekourmie
11-02-2006, 11:39 PM
that makes us sound like bro and sis.....

midnight walker
11-02-2006, 11:43 PM
Hey?!! We could be a coven!!!!

vampire_goddess2006
11-02-2006, 11:44 PM
Name:saki

Female

Type: Vampire

looks:http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n12/dogfox2676/1158372102_mal_21sqyb.jpg

hates:preps,light,demons

likes:blood,other vampires,halloween,boy,nihgt

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:44 PM
(well actuly my girl is a vampire and my boy is a demon. Anywayz we are a clan of vampires so we all live together okay??))

kuronuekourmie
11-02-2006, 11:45 PM
ok im squarwe ^^

vampire_goddess2006
11-02-2006, 11:48 PM
saki sat of her bed.her favortie bands posters everywere.she was playing around with her bass as lyrcs came to her head. she grabed a notebook and jot them down alonge wiht her bass cords.

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:48 PM
ok im squarwe ^^


What does that mean??))


Suki walked down the road it was night time and she was hungry*

Celestrial Angel
11-02-2006, 11:48 PM
Name: Luna

Female

Type: vampire

looks:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e120/Willow_creek/1133665513_eslostsoul.jpg

hates:Alot

likes:very little

the_lost_little_girl
11-02-2006, 11:49 PM
( can i join?... )

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:50 PM
((sure you can join!!))

kuronuekourmie
11-02-2006, 11:51 PM
sory guys got 2 go :(

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:52 PM
(it's okay talk to you some other time))

the_lost_little_girl
11-02-2006, 11:53 PM
( thanks! )
name:Beth
age:16
race:vampire (just turned )
looks:http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m119/SillyXoXJilly/Anime/Anime%20vampires%20and%20what%20not/7fbbaee7.jpg
hates:demons

likes:to stay with john (the one who turned her) and her new powers

vampire_goddess2006
11-02-2006, 11:56 PM
she rehresed her song and at the end she crved for......blood.she layed her bass on her bed and walked out of her room and out the masion she walked around for a while.

the_lost_little_girl
11-02-2006, 11:57 PM
name:john
age:17
looks:http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g290/heroineofearth/Vampires/animevampireguy.jpg
hates:humans
likes: killing things and beth

eclipiseAngel
11-02-2006, 11:58 PM
Suki kept walking intell she saw Saki she walked up to her

"So your looking to?"

the_lost_little_girl
11-03-2006, 12:00 AM
john looked over at Beth as she sat up. she looked around seeing thigs much diffrent then before.
"wh... what happened?"she asked as her helped her to her feet
"lets go!"john smiled
"go where?"beth asked
" to the masion!"john said as he opened the car door to let her in
"what's going on?"beth asked
"you'll see soon!"john smiled as he started the car

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:01 AM
"yeha...oh when we get home i whant to show you my new song i just made"she said as she looked around spottng a nightclub,"whant to have some fun"she said with a grin.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:04 AM
*She smiled sure"



Naraku paced his room "We must stop them!" They must not be allowed to live any longer they take our food so they can drink their blood!" Naraku watched though the looking mirror at once special vampire.....Suki*

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:12 AM
*Suki walked into the nightclub spotting some of her old friends from highschool she walked over to one of them and started to talk*

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:13 AM
she grined as they walked tword the club ready to fest.they cut thought the line and whent thougth the doors looking for victems

midnight walker
11-03-2006, 12:14 AM
Yori was already in the nightclub. Wearing her plum colored dress. She was on the dance floor dancing, she love the flashing lights and the dance music of the club. Mostly she like reading the humans minds will dancing. She suddenly turnes toward the door. She saw saki and suki just walk in. She smiled.

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:15 AM
she knew no one there so she sat down at a table.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:18 AM
Highschool boy:Suki how have been and why are you so pale?"


Suki:never mind me how have you been?

HB:I been fine I guess

Suki:that great

HB:want me to by you a drink?

Suki:sure *suki' staried into the boys eyes

HB:drops glass and starts moving toward her lips

Suki:holds his lips and tells him no not right now follow me and we can really see how we've been"

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:24 AM
*Suki drags him into a private room*

She starts kissing him and he returns it and she go's lower for his neck when a burst of light hit Suki's eyes*

"Suki how dare you take my meal!'"

Suki:Naraku i see you returned. well to bad he's mine she smiled at the boy*

Naraku:Suki my dear why aren't you listening to my orders?"

Suki:I stopped following your orders a long time ago.."

Naraku: Suki you are such a fool he moves his hand and the boy snaps out of her trance


Naraku:well then starve for all i really care.." Naraku takes the boy to the underworld

Suki: Damn you!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:29 AM
she got in a mod to dance so as "miss murder" from afi(aka her song) she hoped off teh char and started to dance.all eyes were on her.as she caught a boys eye.she looked at him as he walk tword her dance and came clouse to her lips.the osng ended as she led him to the girls bathroom and sank her fangs into him.after she was done she put him in a stale and wpied she blood off her mouth and whent to a pool table.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:33 AM
Suki came out into the open mad and tired and really hungry

She walked up her vampire clan "Guys we have a problem Naraku the demon is back and he's going to start taking our food now I am going home for tonight you guys have your fun but be on the lookout for him and please try to bring me home something to
eat."

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:39 AM
"no probluem"she smiled looking for suki's dinner.she caught one and broght him hoome,"suki i found a stray"seh said wiht a smile.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:42 AM
*When she got home Asuki was already asleep in her rose red coffen*

*Naraku was apperd right beside Suki's coffen and he laughed "Suki tonight will be your death!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:45 AM
"suki"seh yelled as the boy sat down.she walked up staries into her room seeng marku."you"she muttered.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:49 AM
Naraku laughed "Ah I see your here as well Saki." "NAraku apperd came behind her*
He touched her neck "I've missed you he turned her around and kissed her on the lips then a knife in his hand went into her gut*

HE apperd next to suki's coffen "Watch you beloved clan sister die!!!"

midnight walker
11-03-2006, 12:50 AM
''Sure'' said Yori. She gave suki a farewell. She was getting very hungry herself. She look around the club. She notice a very cut guy. He was by himself. He had shoulder length black hair, a lip peircing and his arms were folded in front of him. He suddenly looked up as sif he knew she was staring at him. Yori smiled at him and went toward him. She notice his pretty blue eyes. He started to talk to her. They had some things in common. Next thing you know they were kissing each other. Yori slid her lips towards his neck and drank from him. When she was finish feeding she laid his head on the table. It looked like he was sleeping. "Ahhh, It's time to catch to catch one for suki'' said Yori as she walked off.

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:52 AM
"damn you"she said as she whistle hoping her clan wasnt to busy so they could hear it and rush here.she looked at the blood on her hand as her gash started to heal slowly.

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:54 AM
"narku i used to love you..you loved me...then you turned to this mosnter....how could you"she said looking at him with tears.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:56 AM
Naraku opened Suki's coffen where she laid sleepling peacefully*

*He played with her hair and she opened her eyes slowly thinking it was one of her pray and she had just fallen asleep*

Naraku then lifted her out of her coffen and he kissed her she kissed him back She then relized who it was..Naraku!

She tried to move but felt paralized by his kiss she couldn't move "Suki die!" He whisperd in her ear

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:58 AM
she grabed something near here....a knife."de narku"seh screamed she trew it at him as it pirced him.he let out a bloddcurdling scream and vanished.she got up and caught suki before she fell,"are you alright suki?"

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:58 AM
"Saki I loved you all.." I loved Suki this very woman right here right now paralized by my very kiss but she has betrayed me so she must die and he stabbed her in the chest inchs away from her heart*

midnight walker
11-03-2006, 12:58 AM
Yori was about to shout that she was back home when she smelled blood. She rushed to the room where she smelled it. She yelled ''whats going on!''

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:03 AM
Suki started to cough up her blood and her eyes had the icy cold death look to them "Naraku dam you.." She said coughing up more blood

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:09 AM
Naraku laughed "You all will die!"


Suki's chest then started to close up the wound she got up "Looks like your powers are becoming weak naraku.."

NAraku: Suki how can you be alive?"

Suki:Simple you didn't stab me in the heart!

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:18 AM
NAraku laughed he grabbed ahold of Saki and smiled "You wouldn't hurt Saki would you?"

Suki:Let go her!!!

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 01:24 AM
"get your slimy hands off me"saki yelled

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:29 AM
Naraku made a portal and he grabbed Saki and they went into the underworld

Suki tried to pass though with them but couldn't she looked at Yori "We have to go get her back

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:33 AM
Naraku let go of her as they came though the underworld portal*

"Don't even try to excape my guards will kill you in an instent if you do" He walked in and they all bowed*

"Take this girl to the prison hold and make sure she doesn't excape"

Demon:yes sir"

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 01:36 AM
"damn you you i will escape"she yelled.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:41 AM
Naraku walked up to Saki and held her chin "You will be my bait for them."

He then kissed her on the lips again her not being able to fight back because her hands being held onto. *He smiled and walked to his quarters*

The gaurd dragged her to her prison cell*


Suki sat there "good thing I have lived down there or else we would be screwed"

She then prayed and a circle of light came around her and Yori.
Tey landed and everyone looked at her and they also bowed One of the demons walked up to her and kissed her hand "Nice to see you Qween Suki"

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:51 AM
"Listen to me well my guards of the underworld where is the prisionor that Naraku had I want to see her!"

Demon:But my qween he advised us not to have any vistors."

Suki:I don't care Let me see her or you will all die!

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 01:53 AM
she sat in the prision hoping someone would get her

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 01:56 AM
Naraku I son't care for that man anymore so why do you follow him?"

Demon: he was the master long before you

Suki: why sould that matter I am still you qween she then begain to walk though a path that the demons created she walked to the cells

Suki spotted Saki "Hold on I'll get you out!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:05 AM
"you better hurry"she siad getting up and walk to the door.(hey add me ashleymilr@msn.com))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 02:08 AM
Naraku:well well isn't it my little Suki?

Asuki broke the bars with her bare hands*

Naraku if it's me you want then take me not my friends."

Naraku: I not only want you dead but I want all vampires dead!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:10 AM
she jumped out and walkd near suki,"but that is not going to hapeen"she siad,"and whats you deal with the whole kissing thing?'she siad whilping her mouth.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 02:13 AM
Naraku laughed

Suki: "He's a pevert!"

Naraku slamed Suki against a wall*

he held his hand towards Suki's neck

Suki felt like her neck was beinf sqeezed she couldn't breath

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:16 AM
she jumped on narkus backas she dug her nails into his face as blood ozed outshe bit him and kicked him were there is no light he feel as she kiked his head.(did yo add me yet?))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 02:19 AM
((yeah i added you))


Naraku got up mad and Suki still pinned to the wall*

"You fool ." He did the same thing to Saki as he did to Suki

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:21 AM
oh well ill add you)) she tried to breath.she knew it was the end.she let out a little wistle then she pasted out.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 02:25 AM
Suki fought it* she was finally relesed as Naraku's power couldn't hold her much longer*

suki attack Naraku by a simple slap "You idiot I hate you and she was ready to punch him when he held her hand back twisting it*

*He forgot about Saki

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:26 AM
i just sent you a message))

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 02:31 AM
she wolk back up and looked at naku.she kciked him and ran.he let sukis grip go,"come on"she said running and grabing sukis arm.

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 02:36 AM
*They were both out on a run*

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:07 PM
they ran and saw that narku was no followng do that little crcle thign and ban it ffor the underworld can not come

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 12:12 PM
((hey, do you mind if i join and if your playing as inuyasha characters, is anyone inuyasha??))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:20 PM
((go ahead :))))

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 12:25 PM
((ok so, are we making characters or using pre-made ones?))

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:25 PM
woooohhhooooo nuyasha is sooooooo hot....DIBBS))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:26 PM
((making chara!)) Naraku is a demon in this one and I Suki used to be his lover)) ((witch it gross))

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:27 PM
and i play saki and i use to be his love 2..again gross)))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 12:28 PM
((Guy I g2g so just get me home safely and make sure I get alot of rest!!))

vampire_goddess2006
11-03-2006, 12:31 PM
suki made a tunnle that sent the to home.when they got home she used a banning spell so none in the underworld cna come with out suki or saki's permission."suki you better get to bed"she sad seeng that the food she got her has left.suki whent to her coffen and slept.then saki got on her computer and singed on to msn.she saw that narku was online.she started at her computer.

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 08:20 PM
((ok, umm heres the guys profile and he is the guy))
name: inasharu
age: 18
Bio: unknown
gf, crush:none at the time
likes: fighting, blood, death, fire, girl
Dislikes: almost everything else but mostly humans..............
power, fighting style: fire, swordsman, feet user
race: demonic angel ((he lost his wings))
looks: http://www.nnm.ru/imagez/gallery/other/andel7-anime_wallpapers_full.jpg

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 08:31 PM
((okay that's cool!!))

Suki laid there not being able to sleep the advents that just happend were bugging her

Naraku got on msn mad at what had happed he was sure he would kill them he was sure he would destroy them**

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 08:35 PM
((oh i want you to give him a nickname ok?))
((the guy i made is up for grabbs if anyone wants him relationship wise on the rp))

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 08:38 PM
((KK I will get to kno him okay?))

Suki finally got up not being able to sleep she looked outside it was raining*

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 08:41 PM
((k))
suddenly a spiral of fire apperaed and then shortly after, died out.
on the ground there was a guy with white hair

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 08:44 PM
Suki ran down the stairs and out into the pouring rain she looked at the guy with white hair*

eclipiseAngel
11-03-2006, 08:46 PM
((Sorry g2g be back on later okay???)))

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 08:48 PM
he was slowly dying but still managed to stumble to his feet
his clothes were torn and singed but it didn't matter he just had to make it to that nearby tree and he bearly did

dotdotdotdot
11-03-2006, 08:49 PM
((ok seeya later eclipse))

eclipiseAngel
11-04-2006, 01:11 AM
((okay I am bac))

dotdotdotdot
11-04-2006, 01:53 AM
((k whats up?))

eclipiseAngel
11-04-2006, 02:10 AM
Suki looked at the boy in the pouring rain and she tried to help him up and take him inside*

dotdotdotdot
11-04-2006, 02:16 AM
he looked at her and replied "wha-....why....." then he passed out

eclipiseAngel
11-04-2006, 02:19 AM
Suki then lifted the boy amf took him inside laid he on the couch

dotdotdotdot
11-04-2006, 02:27 AM
((what happens next?))

eclipiseAngel
11-04-2006, 02:32 AM
* sits down and falls asleep watching him*(((eh....i g2g c ya ill be on tomarrow ......mabey!!!))))

dotdotdotdot
11-04-2006, 02:53 AM
((ok byes))

eclipiseAngel
11-06-2006, 12:56 AM
((Kay kay back))

Suki laid there still sleeping she was shaking ((She was cold))


she talked in her sleep: " No please don't hurt them take me instead please don't!!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-06-2006, 09:57 PM
saki got off msn and srech the town in her mind for her sister.cople minutes later she found her and by magic she was right beside her,"hey sister whos this"she said with a smile looking at the boy.

eclipiseAngel
11-06-2006, 10:27 PM
Suki laid asleep in the chair she was shivering.

vampire_goddess2006
11-06-2006, 10:39 PM
shse lloked at her sister then the boy seeing they were askeep.she sighed amd whent to the kitchen for some chocolate.shes waved a pice under her sisters nose to get her to wake up.

eclipiseAngel
11-06-2006, 10:42 PM
Suki awoke startled*

She looked at her sister with surprise *

Then looked over at the boy asleep*

"He fainted in my arms and he's not human."

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 12:21 AM
"were not either"she said eating a pice of chocolate and looking at the boy,"but he is pretty hot"she said wiht a smile

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:32 AM
Suki laughed at her sister's comment*

She walked over to him and her eyes glowed a bright blue and she then relized his aura around him it was red so that ment he was a demon*

She turned and looked at her sister "We may have a problem he's a demon."


Naraku coused his room his anger riseing a demon walked in

Demon:Naraku?

Naraku:What is it Kanna

Kanna: We can't pass to the human world the vampires they have put a seal on the portal

Naraku:Well break the seal

Kanna:we've tired..

Naraku":Well try harder!

Kanna back out of his way she hated when he was like this

((sorry it took me a while to talk back I am working on my website))

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 12:36 AM
she looked at the boy,"i say fallen angle...wings cliped"she said finshing the chocolate bar,

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 12:36 AM
max finally awoke
((max will be his nick name k??))
Max :what happened...........

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:40 AM
"I see your finally awake." Suki looked him over to make sure he was okay*

"Are you hurt and what happend to you?"

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 12:40 AM
"im saki"she said with a smile

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:42 AM
Suki lookeed at her sister*

"Yes this is my sister Saki and mine's Suki."

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 12:44 AM
max replied "well....i think i am.....hey....wait.......back off!!!" max said kicking off of the couch and landing on his feet,he pulled a blade out when he jumped and it looked extremly strong........ "are you the ones.........." he asked

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:47 AM
Suki looked at him strangly "What do you mean one of them?"

Suki looked at her sister with out a clue

"Would you please put that blade down I can't stand weapons being pointed in my face."

Suki's fangs apperd ((because's she mad))

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 12:47 AM
"...the ones"she asked ****ing her head

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 12:49 AM
max replied "so you arn't the ones who cliped my wings off.....besides.....your girls....the one who did it to me was a guy.....his name satarted with an N i think

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:50 AM
"If you are asking if we are demons no but we are vampires."



Naraku:Damn it Kanna get in here get Rikku too!

Rikku:What is NAraku?

Naraku: Rikku I need your abiltys we need your powers to break that damn seal to get back at those vampires

Rikku:but..

Naraku:do it now!!

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:53 AM
Suki lowerd her head*

"His name was Naraku wasn't it?"

"Damn him he's always causing pain!"

Suki held her soulder from Naraku's attack earlier

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 12:53 AM
"....narku"she muttered looking down then at the boy,"was it...narku wasnt hes trying to kill us curently."she said

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:56 AM
Suki then bent down in pain spitting up blood*

"Damn it I guess he did hurt me a while back." she held her chest*

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 12:57 AM
max looked at sukis shoulder then walked over to it. he put his lips on it then it glowed momentarily he removed his lips "well....that should do it "he said as the wound dissipeared

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 12:59 AM
Suki blushed "Thank you"

She held her shoulder a warm tingleing feeling she felt

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:00 AM
she lokede at him and her as what he did with his lips.she grew a little mad.she whanted him.

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:01 AM
max smiled "it is the least i can do after you saved my life.....besides....." max now said in wisper "your really cute....." he said to suki

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:07 AM
Naraku: Rikku? have you finished?

Rikku held out his hand a dark glow protruded from it

Rikku: almost


Naraku: hurry it up


Rikku: This takes time


Suki looked at her sis and smiled she walked closer to him "So how had you met Naraku?

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:11 AM
"well I was supposed to make a deal with him....at least thats what the guy told me......then next thing i now im on a wall chained,naked and wings ripped from my back......anyway....what about you??" he told and asked

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:11 AM
she heared what he said and stormed off to her room locking the door.she sat on her bed and looked at the cliling.(she has a bed instead of a covin)

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:12 AM
Suki blushed at his comment*

"Your welcome" she smiled


Rikku: I am finally done!

A bright light hit the under world

Naraku: good job and he enterd the light

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:13 AM
a tear ran down her face.

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:15 AM
"man i bet your taken by another guy already...." max said without realizing that he spoke it

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:17 AM
a tear ran down her face.
((wow....she must to really like him....))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:18 AM
Suki watched him

Um well I was in love with him intell he ripped out my heart! "I hate him he's done nothing but evil!!"

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:18 AM
duh,..... lol))

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:19 AM
she wiped the tear off and grabed her bass playing a sad melody.

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:21 AM
(( I guess so))

"Naraku he's so evil and no I am single at least for now, she smiled at him and blushed

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:21 AM
"wow....thats really sad....." max said then hearing music "hey....whats that noise??" he asked suki

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:23 AM
max stoped moving completly when he heard that "oh ****...i said that out loud.....didn't i...." he asked......

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:25 AM
Suki smiled "Yes you did." "And that's my sis she likes to play music"

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:27 AM
she strumed some more as she thought of lyrics.sad lyrics..heart broken

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:27 AM
She looked the guy in the eyes "So what's your name?" You never told"

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 01:29 AM
can someone make a another guy for saki sence she cant have max?))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:29 AM
Naraku enterd the human world last time he did this he was sent somewhere else he smelt Suki's scent her blood was strong and he heart it was beating fast he wanderd what she was doing

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 01:30 AM
((woopse....umm give me a min))

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 01:30 AM
( ima joinin eclipise!!!!lol)))

Rikimaru Ichima
male
demon
looks:red hair blindfold, armor and a two sided blade on each hip, and pale complextion.

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:32 AM
((sure crow don't care :) ))


Naraku started moving for the mansion





Suki looked at Max still deeply in his eyes

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 01:37 AM
(((where do i hop in???)))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:38 AM
Then a gust of wind hit Max and Suki forcing them against the wall*



Suki hit the wall hard*

Naraku: Ahh my dear Suki why did you leave me all alone down there?

Suki: Naraku he's returned!

Naraku: have you missed me?

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:39 AM
((anytime))

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 01:39 AM
(((((.........)))))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:41 AM
((um your a demon right? Then your on Naraku's side because I am a vampire because The demons and vampires don't get along so come by Naraku's side or something))

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 01:42 AM
* a dark shadow was by Narakus side when he appeared*

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:45 AM
Naraku:Suki meet Rikimaru

Suki looked at the new intruder she then turned towards Naraku



Naraku then held his hand out forcing Suki to hit the wall again

Naraku: Rikimaru go have your fun

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 01:46 AM
" yes my master......." i stated to walk toward the ppl on the wall***

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 01:50 AM
Naraku then begain to walk up the stairs where Saki was


Suki held out her hand and scream: "Saki! Get out of here before Naraku get's to you!"

She then had her full attention of the demon walking before her she grabbed a knife from her boot and threw it hoping it would hit*

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:03 AM
i hopped in front and caught the knife* " nice try fool" i say as cold as a whisper*

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:05 AM
Suki thought to herself "This demon it's so fast what kind is it?"

Suki then though another knife at him*

"did I hit him?" she said in a whipering voice

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:06 AM
* i caught the other with no hesitation*" keep um comein" i started to laugh evilly*

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:10 AM
(((i look like this now...srry couldn't deside lol)))

looks...now:
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/friendofwolves101/bishibirdboy.jpg

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:10 AM
then she threw a fire knife out

"Die why won't you die! Your just like him! Your just like Naraku!!!

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:11 AM
" i am nothing like him..." i catch the knife(which is on fire)" you comparing me to him? how obsurd! i am powerfuler than that so called demon!" i turn on Naraku*

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:13 AM
Suki couldn't believe her eyes no one besides Naraku has ever blocked that attack!

She grew mad a ran after him head on.


Her eyes glowing their evil red

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:17 AM
Suki: What do you mean your nothing like him your a demon and that's good close enough!"

Naraku grabbed Saki knocking her out and coming back down staris looking at the fight he smiled at Suki "Suki are you having fun battleing Rikimaru?"


Suki growled " Naraku!"

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:20 AM
* i was focosed on something eles for some reason* i turned away and ran toward Naraku hiting him in the back * " i am better than him....no compaison!!"

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:23 AM
Naraku: Are you going to betray me Rikimaru?"

Suki: huh?

Naraku: Fine then." he held out his palm and in it was a dark orb***

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:25 AM
* i droped threw the ground un expetedly and appeared behind Naraku sticking my hand threw his back*" "die" i twisted my hand*

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:30 AM
Naraku fell to the ground dropping Saki's body.


Naraku: Damn you! then Naraku lay there dead


Suki ran over and grabbed her sister's body and backed up away from the demon.

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:33 AM
Suki: What are you? Who are you? she looked him in the eyes

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:34 AM
* there was a small red funnel that formed around me* something unexpected happened*i transfromed in to this:
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/friendofwolves101/boyoboy.jpg

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:36 AM
" my name is Riki for short and i am a demon....deal with it" i look over sharply" i suspect you do not like demons so i will leave now?"

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:37 AM
((that's hott lol))


Suki gasped

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:37 AM
((heh...)))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:38 AM
My name is Suki and I am a vampire I dislike demons I used to be the qween of the underworld I used to get along with demons intell Naraku

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:40 AM
" do not compare me to such demons......" I sharpen my eyes at suki

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:40 AM
Suki looked at her sister cheacking if she was even alive*

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:41 AM
* i start to walk away *

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:42 AM
**Suki looked up glaring back at him "Well do you think I sould trust demons after what he did to me?" She looked him in the eyes and stood limping her arm hurt "Should I

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:44 AM
* i stoped....* " thats your choice to make...not mine"i stand there waiting for an answer**

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:47 AM
She walked over to him "Hey I guess I can start with you." "I can get to kno you and maybe learn to trust demons ...maybe.."

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:48 AM
*i just stood there....*" why me...there are plenty of other demons?" i turn aroun and look at Suki in the eyes **

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:50 AM
Suki looked back " I don't kno maybe it's because You remind me of him she looked down..."

((she talking about her father don't kno his name right now))

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 02:55 AM
(((lol ok)))

........*i stood there for a moment in scilence*" damn my human instincts.....ok fine.....but its only short notice."ok?" i look away arms crossed**

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 02:57 AM
Suki for some reason smiled ((something she doesn't do to offen))

She looked at him and couldn't stop stairing

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 03:01 AM
" stop that!!!' i turned away and started to walk a t a fast pace*

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 03:03 AM
Suki started to laugh*

She then rememberd Max and she ran over to him and cheaked his pulse.

She sighed "Good he's alive!"

Suki then watched Riki walk away

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 03:05 AM
" wow your realy gettin to know me!!!" i yell" as far as i know, your being left behind! good for your reasoning!!" i start to laugh under my voice**

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 03:06 AM
Suki got up and ran after him*

"Wait for one thing where are we going?"

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 03:07 AM
" who cares!!!" i turn around and start to float into the air*we'll come back for your..... friends... later"

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 03:10 AM
Fine" Suki's black wings came out from her back*

"Just don't go back down to the underworld Naraku's little demon's will be down there wanting to kill us!"

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 03:11 AM
* i transformed *" been there done that" i kinda chuckled

crow_caller
11-07-2006, 03:13 AM
(((eh.i g2g its gettin late......i hate school........~_~its gay)))))buh byez!!!)))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 03:13 AM
"I got a ? for you"

"How did you get tangled up with a demon like Naraku anyway?"

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 03:20 AM
((g2g um good night???))

vampire_goddess2006
11-07-2006, 04:43 PM
i have a idiea how about saki and ramika or however yo spell his name fall in love but it cant happen because hes a demon and shes a vampire so narkus sends him to kill saki,suki,and max)) saki hered a crash down staries and ran down seeng narku she grabed her fan witchwas nere bye,"DANCE OF BLADS"she yelled cutting off narkus feet.

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 08:31 PM
((hey Naraku was just killed by Rikimaru so don't worry about that okay? And I am w/ Rikimaru right now and we are gone you have no idea where I am SO just fall in love with Max okay?))

dotdotdotdot
11-07-2006, 09:04 PM
((hi guys....sorry bout yesterday, my internet turned off for some reason....lol anyway.....max is now getting up off the floor so if anyone wants to rp, im in!!))

eclipiseAngel
11-07-2006, 10:25 PM
((sorry for me not repling I had to leave awhile ago Srry))

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:10 PM
((its ok....i had to leave also...lol...so wanna rp?))

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:12 PM
((ima here!)

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:16 PM
((lol.....where is eclipse...))

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:18 PM
She looked at Rikimaru "So you have no idea where we are going?" She looked annoyed

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:20 PM
" nope...im free now ill go where i want too....but...what about you, wat about your..OH we forgot your friends!!!" i spun around**

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:23 PM
"Omg I almost forget my sis and Max must be worried

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:24 PM
max get bored waiting so he dashes out of the house into a random direction which....little does he know...is exactly where the are going...however.....max is the fastest thing alive so he catches up in a split second tripping over one of them

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:26 PM
" what the hell you...heh..this is one of your ppl am i corret? i look at Suki scratching my head*

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:29 PM
"sorry.....i had to.." max suddenly wrapped his arms around himself as his shirt started to rip

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:29 PM
"Yeah this is Max." She smiled at Max blushing

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:33 PM
Max are you okay?" she ran over to him*

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:36 PM
* i bent over and looked at sukis face wandering wat the expression was***" well....uh now that your with your friends and all should i leave???" i just stand there wating for an answer**

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:37 PM
as max held his arms around himself... the scars on his back began to tear.....

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:38 PM
Suki looked over at him*

"No you stay I have to get to kno demons and since you are one of them you stay

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:42 PM
".........."*** i roll my eyes at her and cross my arms pretending to look at somthing else*

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:45 PM
Suki then ran to Max's side "are you alright??" She asked worried

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:47 PM
* i glance back over and start to move my hands like they where Suki talking**

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:50 PM
Suki gave a evil glare at Rikimaru*


"Rikimaru could you become useful and help me here!"

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:52 PM
max let out a scream...then 2 black wings ripped out of his back as he hit the floor

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 09:52 PM
" hey hes your friend...its not my choice!" i transform and take off***" i got things to do!!!"

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:54 PM
Suki: Fine

"Max are you okay?????" She asked holding his shoulder

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 09:57 PM
((remember 2 black wings ripped out of his back....))
max couldn't move yet.....he was unconcious

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 09:59 PM
She held him in her arms "Max you got your wings back but now I hope you'll be alright..." She hugged him

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:00 PM
* im in a nearby woods " i had nothing to do...what was i thinkin.....damn...." i was back to normal form
(lol im hott eclipise!)
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/friendofwolves101/boyoboy.jpg

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:02 PM
max woke moments later and barley lifted his arms around her and gently hugged her back "hey...." he said with his voice weak

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:03 PM
((lol yeah you are!!))

"Max are you okay?"

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:04 PM
(((lol hehe))

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:05 PM
"yeah.........I am now" he said as his eyes turned a sky blue color

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:10 PM
" now what do i do...where do i go?" i asked myself*" i have no home to go to.....no family..."* i flash hit my mind and i fell over*i layed on the ground

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:11 PM
"Max I was so worried." She hugged him

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:13 PM
* still laying*((( lol))))

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:19 PM
((lol nice...))
"Why would you be worried....i dont understand....." he said....he thout he was noone and that she wouln't care about him at all.....

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:28 PM
"Because I thought you got hurt getting ur wings back?"

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:33 PM
" wa... wa happened...???"

i sat up "whow!!!

demon: ill kill you once and for all Riki!!!!"

" bastard!!!" i transfromed and flew up...the demon fallowed*

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:35 PM
Suki got up maybe we better go find Rikimaru I think he was getting mad because I got mad at him

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:37 PM
"what do you mean getting my wings b-..."max saw the pitch black wings and gasped "umm...n..nno......im fine thanks.." then he forgot about them and his instincts took over as he pulled her twards him and kissed her

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:38 PM
" get away i don't have time to fight you Hoso!!!"

demon: but this time ill win!!!!" he laughed evily

i pulled out a wepon and slaiced at him but he was fast*

" get away"

(((where fighing in air)))

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:40 PM
Suki blushed and returned the kiss

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:43 PM
max slowly pulled away from the kiss engoying every moment of it "im sorry....i just....."

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:45 PM
"Oh don't worry it's okay.." She was still blushing very hard

She then spotted Rikimaru in the air fighting and she said"Maybe we better get over there

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:47 PM
"ok...time to try these out...." he said lifting and putting her on his back he took off twards them

eclipiseAngel
11-08-2006, 10:48 PM
g2g sorry))))))))))))

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:50 PM
" get away!"

Demon: but i want you Riki!!!!!! i want you!!!

" stay away!!!!"

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 10:52 PM
((ok...bye eclipse....if your on later....i might be too:D))

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:52 PM
demon/Hoso: looks:
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o270/friendofwolves101/dark_angel.jpg

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:54 PM
Hoso: come to me Riki!!! lets be togeter...forever!!!

" Hoso your out of your mind wat has happwened to you!!!!"

Hoso:" im more powerful now!!!!!" muhahahahahaha!!!"

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 10:57 PM
(((her/eclipise her real name is Lexi))))

crow_caller
11-08-2006, 11:00 PM
(((i g2g too!!!byezz)))

dotdotdotdot
11-08-2006, 11:03 PM
((cool and byes!!))

eclipiseAngel
11-09-2006, 12:41 AM
Suki hopped on his back and they flew to where Rikimaru was..**

dotdotdotdot
11-09-2006, 12:43 AM
((crow caller got off..........))

eclipiseAngel
11-09-2006, 12:46 AM
((I kno but we could do something))

dotdotdotdot
11-09-2006, 12:50 AM
((ok...ummm....ohh i got it))
max pulls his blae out and uses golden gun((you know, th one that inuyasha kills naraku with?))

eclipiseAngel
11-09-2006, 12:55 AM
((No I didn't get to see how it ends so are u talking about the tetsiga??))

dotdotdotdot
11-09-2006, 12:59 AM
((yeah, im using the tetsiga and the golden gunis inuyashas strongest attack))

eclipiseAngel
11-09-2006, 01:03 AM
((okay))


Suki wanderd what that was?**

She grabbed one of her fire knives and threw it

dotdotdotdot
11-09-2006, 01:09 AM
max just smiles while the demon dies "nice....."