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the_lost_little_girl
12-19-2007, 01:26 AM
So tired of trying
Can’t hold back this crying
Why does it feel like I’m dieing
Didn’t you see me crying?
You walked away and left me in pain
Why now on this day?
I cared for you in every way.
Why am I the one who has to pay?
So tired of trying
Can’t hold back this crying
Why does it feel like I’m dieing
Didn’t you see me crying?

natureday
12-22-2007, 08:46 PM
That is really good, but so sad.
You shoudl listen to some Abraham Hicks.

SiriuslyRemus
12-22-2007, 09:03 PM
I like it, I suppose. But it's hard to read because the letters are so big, They aren't drawing attention, they're just making this look sloppy. tiered I believe you meen, Tired.

the_lost_little_girl
12-25-2007, 12:32 AM
thanks for the feedback guys.

White Horse
01-06-2008, 11:49 AM
Ah well... I liked it... I know how it feels... How did you come up with the title for it?

Nona Stolen
01-06-2008, 03:13 PM
I really liked it and i think almost anyone can relate to it, well unless their sheltered rich kids who dont have a clue to what life is really like.Ofcourse that my opinion doesnt matter!I liked it anyway!<3