Mind, thoughts, and lives change...But love never will.

[Nona Stolen]

These are the characters cause I feel that I will be writing more on this subject!Also you'll have to clicky on the sites below because i have no worldly idea how to put them on here because im technologically challenged that why :3...so cha!

First of all we'll start with Ichigo:
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/dragonmistress151022/Anime%20Pics/AquaGirl.jpg

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q192/hotskiez/mumimbored.jpg

I could only find two that i really like and Ichigo is, yes, a girl.

Next is Chiyo:
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o164/Screamin-My-Heart-Out/Anime/Boys/BlackHairBlueEyes.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m50/kairi0020/Ouran%20high%20school/kyoya.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e372/TrueSoul/Anime%20Boys/Cool.jpg

And this is them together before Ichigo and Chiyos parents died(thier brother and sister):

http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t98/Akurei_Hyuuga/Random%20Anime%20People/Anime%20Co-ed/2r75aue.jpg

Yesh yesh Chiyo wears glasses!Oh and the main purpose for the first and smaller picture is for the sake that his eyes ARE blue!Also Ichigo used ot have black hair and no chiyo and ichigo arent twins!I'll probably have the first of it out later tonight or tomarrow!Buh bye

[Nona Stolen]

Haha!Never thought i'd put anythign did cha?WELL BOOSHAH I AM NOW!BWAHAHAHHAHAAA*cough cough hack hack*well..on with tha short story

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Short Story part 1~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ichigo watched her beautiful brother, a small smile playing on her lips.He looked so-so..Extrodinary!He was always smiling and always happy, ready to go and make people smile.Ichigo loved her brother, Chiyo, more then anything in the world.He was all that was left of her world.

Ichigo was almost seventeen, and she was supposed to be out in the world:making a difference, dating, and becoming somebody, but she couldnt see herself ever doing that.Her life was right there, in a quiet little suburbian haven, in the gated community of Sakura Lake.Her occupation set on being a house teen, her heart set on her brother.Ofcourse her brother, who shared her affection, was the only one who could possibly love her.She wasnt the beauty she used to be.Her long black hair had long since turned a white-ish silver due to lack of sun, and over-exposure of stress and depression.The same went for her white washed skin which used to glow in a peachy complexion.

Ichigo looked at her brother again, this time he was smiling goofily up at her, sitting in the most painful looking position she had ever seen, reading one of her fantasy novels.Ichigo laughted a little and turned to look in the kitchen, which she had been cleaning most of the morning, only to find that she still had to set the table up."Aw fudge monkeys..."Ichigo muttered crossing her arms over her chest with an annoyed huff.

"Whats wrong Ichi?"Soft warm air caressed the sensitive flesh of Ichigos skin as strong loving arms enveloped her increasingly small waist."Oh its nothing Chi,"Ichigo sighed tiredly, "I just have to set up the table before I can take a break."Once again warm air hit her skin, only this time it was Chiyos laughter that caused it."Dont laugh at me you monkey!Or you'll be cleaning the house for the rest of you life!".

"Now you wouldnt do that to me!Would you Ichigo?"Chiyo asked turning his little sister around.Standing a head taller then her he had to take one step back to look at her fully.Ichigo looked so frail and tiny compared to her loud mouth and happy attitude, the deat hof their parents had changed her personality and looks so much!She used to be so quiet and calm and careful, now she was so out there and crazy.Chiyo shook his head knowing her hadnt changed a bit on the outside or anyone the inside that he nor his sister could notice, though he felt different he couldnt find why he did.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ENDY~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I know I Know i suck and im sick cause i have brother on sister but hey!Their only half-brother and sister(people:ITS STILL SICK YOU PERVERT! Me:WAAAAT!I THINK ITS CUTE!People:YOUR SICK!Me:Shove it up yo a**)Buh bye

[the_lost_little_girl]

Keep writeing!!!! i wasnt to know more abouts them!!! lolz

and it is a little sick but i dont care. lolz just keep up the good work :p

[Nona Stolen]

LOL!thank you

[gimmethattop]

Call me weird, but I have no problem with incest. I do have an issue with the way the story is written, though.

. The paragraphs are oddly framed. It makes me wonder exactly why you put this sentence here and another there, but the next in a completely different paragraph.

. The punctuation is pretty spontataneous, which isn't a good thing. Why the exclamation point in the following: "Ichigo was almost seventeen(17), and she was supposed to be out in the world!Making a difference, dating, and becoming somebody, but she couldnt see herself ever doing that."? That all would work better as one single sentence, too. Did you forget the basics? "Ichigo was almost seventeen, but she couldn't see herself out in the world: making a difference, dating, and becoming somebody, like she was supposed to be." sounds much better.

. I don't understand what the whole point of this part is. I suspect it's to introduce them, but I caught little of it besides that they're in love, she's getting sick, and he likes hugging her. A little plot would be nice. Might want to make their dialogue and actions a bit clearer, while you're at it.

[Nona Stolen]

RAWR!I dont mind the fact you find nothing weird about incest cause neither do I(it runs in my family aswell as it runs in the story)

What I put up 1st was just a test run and I was planning on going back when i got a little more written to continue with.Sorry it messed you up.

[XXbexXX]

HIIIIIIIII NONA!!!!:D love the story

[Nona Stolen]

Hewwo and tanka