My homework

[Varth]

This was written for my english class. it was done in two days so i dont know if its good or not waiting to hear some opinions besides my teacher's
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Should I forgive you?
I think not when.
I am the one you forgot
You still owe me time.
And for these you are not forgiven

I dont know about my brother.
But my mother feels the same.
You've missed out on him.
Me I could have cared less but for him.
You dont deserve to be free.
You cant be forgiven.

I have given all the time I can.
There is no left to spare.
I cannot fogive someone who is not here.
Why should I forgive you?
Because your my dad.
I dont care.
We could have been close like it should have been.
But you get up and leave.
You arent an adult, your only a child.

And you know what. for all that you've done I Hate You.

[hyperanimeluva12]

Its good.
I like it.
I sense voice in it. You let your voice come out.
Depending on the topic that gave you the idea of it of course.
But otherwise, besides a few mistakes like "No" should have been "Have none left to spare."
But those are easily fixable.
I enjoyed it at the most.
I like it.

[Varth]

ill fix those when it come to it, but im glad you liked it

[Natomie]

I liked it! I got the idea of it and other then a few mistakes in poem grammer it was great! The problems are easy to fix though.

[Varth]

ya i just wish i turned it in but i passed the class anyway

[Natomie]

That's good news! So you didn't turn it in? Then how did your teacher think it was good?

[Varth]

she never thought it was good because she never saw it

[Natomie]

... Oh!! Silly Natomie!! *hits own forhead* sorry I read that wrong!))

[Varth]

*hugs* dont hit yourself.

[Natomie]

thanks :) I hit my forhead all the time... I do alot of mistakes.

[Varth]

still thats no reason to hit yourself

[Natomie]

True, true... off subject here but would you like some evil pie? Made it my self! ^_^

[Varth]

yay pie... and not just any pie evil pie yay

[Natomie]

I know! ^_^ *hands Varth evil pie* there you go!

[Varth]

go me! evil pie!!

[Natomie]

I shall get my own evil pie! One sec........... yay! I got some! *eats some of it* ..... I have an unnatural obbsesion with evil pie!))

[Varth]

there is no such thing as 'unattural'

[Natomie]

oh well... I still love evil pie! *eats more* yummy!

[Varth]

*eats some pie* yummmm pie

[Natomie]

hmm........ the evil pie is gone... well I'll make some more! One sec!

[Varth]

*gasp* no more pie *goes in a corner and rocks back and forth*

[Natomie]

No!! It's ok! I made more!! It's fresh! *shows Varth the evil pie*

[Varth]

Yay!!!!!!!!!

[Natomie]

Alright here you go. *hands him the best evil pie EVER made* enjoy! ^_^

[Varth]

yesness more pie!!

[ninjaborn]

Hehe i am sorry to interrupt your pie (lolz pie). I simply wanted to say that i love your poem. It made me think what it would be like to live in a family where the father had walked out. Maybe a good sequal would be one about a family where the children know their parents are illegal immigrants (therefore they kinda are to).

[Varth]

Hm maybe i might. If i do make it ill post it here

[ninjaborn]

Hm maybe i might. If i do make it ill post it here

WOOT!! isn't it a cool idea though lol. i was surprised that i even came up with it when i was sitting at my computer haha cuz normally i am extremely brain dead.

[Varth]

lol well once i am grounded again ill see if i cant work on that

[ninjaborn]

HAHA wow i was grounded for the two weeks before spring break but i don't want to get into that. lol at least it gave me time to read the twilight series now i am caught up with Lilly.

[Varth]

no of course im grounded the day before spring break -_- and now by the end of spring break i will again have nothing to do

[ninjaborn]

poor you! makes me wana give you a hug! WANT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!

[Varth]

Yes I be Lovin the hugs

[ninjaborn]

YAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! Sammie gets to give hugles!!!! *hugs varth* hehe i love people here on dollwizard we be extremely awesome persons

[Varth]

Yay HUGS!!! *hugs ninja* yay i got to hug a ninja

[ninjaborn]

lol YES YOU JUST HUGED A NINJA *holds microphone to varth* how do you feel


((check it out this was my mommas belly dance company and ashley was amazing at bellies for life last year http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZM6ZlCqN8y0&feature=user))

[Varth]

Like ill do it again *hugs ninja again*

[ninjaborn]

Like ill do it again *hugs ninja again*

HAHAHA lol omg ashley was good though

[ninjaborn]

OMG i found my best friends deviant art http://armyoflampposts.deviantart.com/

[Varth]

Yay art!!!!

[ninjaborn]

i know!!!! i love art almost as much as i love music!!!!!!

[Varth]

they both are da shweetest

[ninjaborn]

YES!!!:griningmonkey

[Varth]

ya :coolmonkey