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[inuya1306]

ITS JUST A EMO LUV RP
real pics plzz

--------------------------------- MY CHARRI-------------------

name- alex
age-18
crush-Russell
likes- alot of stuff
dislikes- not alot
looks-http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee239/herbal_punk/Emo/emo-3.jpg
outfit-http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb5/sgirl04/Avril.gifhttp://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii85/iceskater_08/8ec0_1.jpg

[inuya1306]

come join plllzz we have cookies.. lol

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Name:Raven
Age:17
Crush:???
Likes:The dark, music, to dance, her pet mouse nicky and her frineds.
Dislikes: Bright lights, silence, rude people and birds ( how ironic)
Looks:http://www.kidzworld.com/img/upload/avatar/921394/thumb/emo_girl.jpg
Outfit:http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/images/uploads/Emotional%20Princess1182997037Emo_Girl_by_skelling ton13.jpg

[White Horse]

Name- Russell

Age- 19

Crush- N/A

Likes- Depending on his mood, everything-to-nothing.

Dislikes- Tomatoes, Onions, and Pink.

Looks- http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t45/ptiteessa/Emo%20Boys/13170678.jpg

Outfit- See "Looks."

[inuya1306]

{ thanx guys u rock we can start }

{ whitey can alex have a crush on Russell}


alex- * listening 2 her ipod while skatebording*

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven ran into her house trying to get away from her next door neighbor who was a prep. " I really need to find a better place to stay." She says to her self as she run into her room to play with her mouse nicky.

[White Horse]

{Sure. x3}

Sitting under a tree, Russell was drawing on his pants. He looked up when he saw Alex skateboarding and waved at her.

[Dragonblood21]

*** Kinda late entry ***

Name- Zacky

Age- 18

Crush- ???

Likes- Music, guitar, and generally anything that is black. Loves to skateboard as well.

Dislikes- Fancy things, as well as fancy upper class people.

Looks- http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/52/emo1md9.jpg

Outfit- See picture. Generally band shirts and jeans.

[AnotherSkip]

name- raven
age-17
crush-she isn't into anyone.
likes- breaking into places for the heck of it,music,writing,reading,chemesty,rocks,sweets,bei ng alone.
dislikes- bullies,being in a crowd,
looks-http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u256/starXzore9/anime/alone%20anime/alone.jpg
outfit http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s231/Blueman_group/anime/punkschool.jpg

[Dragonblood21]

Zack sat ontop of a hill that he always loved to go on. It overlooked the town and it was such a beautiful veiw. He could always get the best ideas for his songs on top of here, it seemed to be his thinking place.

The sun began to set and hide behind the hills, giving the sky a light pink and orange color, and a glimmering light over the city as it's final hour of daylight came to an end.

Zack sighed sadly. "It would be nice for just one day... to have someone to share this view with."

He rested his head on his arms and watched the sky...

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Ravne Looked at Nick " I think I need to get more friends. Don't get me wrong Nicky I love you but i cant take you to a lot of places." She replied slightly disturught and sad as she putted her mouse on the head.

[AnotherSkip]

Raven sighed,looking around"where should I go now,mabey I should go to the hill."She started to walk to get her faveriote spot.

"yay,almost there"she said with scarsam

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven sighed,looking around"where should I go now,mabey I should go to the hill."She started to walk to get her faveriote spot.

"yay,almost there"she said with scarsam

( Your character has the same name as mine XD)

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven put her Mouse Nick in to her pocket and walked out of the house and walk out to the park and sat on the swings holding her mouse in her hands.

[Dragonblood21]

Zack sat up on top of the hill a little longer. He was getting very hungry, but he had to at least wait for the sun to set.

He opened up the book and wrote a few things.

"I can feel hope is falling
Like a sun set falls over a city
Shedding it's light over all of us one last time
Then making us... feel so sh*ty"

He laughed at his ryhme. Hey, it was the first thing to come in mind, they can't all be winners he thought.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven smiled down at Nicky as she got off the swings and walked over to a park bench and sat Nicky on the table with a smile. " Do you think I'll ever find any one Nicky?" She asked softly as she looked up at the slightly purple sky *Nicky squeaks*.

[coeur]

name- Vladimir Lensky
age- 21
crush- Unknown
likes- European literature, the countryside, music, poetry
dislikes- Ennui
looks- http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii183/rachilde/odds%20and%20ends/83328_mathias14_122_1024lo.jpg
outfit- http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2905/35557485gy0.jpg

[coeur]

Vladimir ran the lighter down his leg; it unfolded with an obedient hiss: the lid unhinged, the flint rolled, the flame blazed. He lowered the cigarette between his clenched teeth; his cheeks collapsed as he puffed; his lips pursed as he blew. Then he dismissed the flame with a wave of his wrist.

The sun was ripe for setting; it hung low like fruit ready to drop. Vladimir had wandered to a grassy hill at the edge of the city to watch nightfall. He liked to think this spot was the best spot to watch the sunset in the city; truthfully, the park was the best, but it was located at the heart of the throbbing city and the buildings seemed to crowd him at all sides. The squish of cement was too much for Vladimir. He preferred the outskirts.

There were a few other people lingering to see the sunset: a mournful-looking young man and a ****y young woman. Vladimir had wedged himself between two narrowly-set branches of a hearty oak. From his spot he could see the hideous buildings that lined the city like crooked teeth.

It was a terrible city; it was a city that eclipsed the stars. Vladimir had always preferred the countryside to this bustling pen of stalling, two-legged animals. The sunsets were riper in the country. The wine was headier. The city seemed to drain all the joy out of life. Vladimir particularly missed the noble horses he had owned. There were giant creatures, but tame, kind. There was no tameness in the city--or kindness--there was just a corseted silence.

Vladimir endured the shortcomings of the city one cigarette at a time. The city was less horrible when there was smoke in his lungs. Vladimir leafed through his novel and wondered when the sun would set.

[AnotherSkip]

((funny,I didn't notice that,I'll change her name to Emmy))
Emmy then leaned on a tree,she was wearing shorts under her skirt and decided it would give her a good idea of where she would break into tonight.
Emmy then noticed someone,being upsidedown on a branch.Sadly,she went to tap them on the head.then fell out of the tree,almost squishing said person.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven looked over to the hill she knew people were up there but she didn't think she would go cause she was slightly nervious. "Nicky you think I should go up there."she asked. *no Sqweak* "Nicky??" She repates as she looks over for her mouse who is now gone. "Nicky!!?? Were are you??" Raven called aou as she looked around the spot were Nicky was but she could not find her. Raven let out a sigh and then walked around the park looking for Nicky sadly with tears in her eyes.

[Dragonblood21]

Zack turned around as he heard "thump" from somewhere behind them. What in the world? he thought, and span around not quite knowing what to expect.

A man who was somewhat formaly dressed was laying with his back down on the floor with a tree above him and a young girl with a look of "did I do that?! Ooops..." on her face. Zack tried not to burst out laughing but couldn't contain himself.

I apperently have some people joining me today, a rather odd group as well... Zack stood up, tucked the small book and pencil in a large pocket in his pants, and walked over to the two.

He stood above the man who got knocked out of the tree and asked "Are you alright?" before turning his eyes to the girl, who still had that funny look on her face, and laughed a little. "Thankfully it wasn't a high tree, huh?" he said to her.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven walked throuhg tthe park very worried about what could have happend to her mouse Nicky as she walked she didn't notice that she was walking away from the park and over to the hill. Still very upset she looked arounf in the bushes on the hill knowing her mouse could not climb the tree.

[AnotherSkip]

Emmy said"I've fallen from much higher."She got up after.

[coeur]

The fall wasn't as bad as it sounded: the snap of spectacles, the crunch of cigarettes, and the fizzle of hot embers. Nonetheless, Vladimir groaned as his spine met the ground; he supposed it was just for good, acoustic measure. He rose to the sound of people laughing.

He ignored them--there was no apology in his cheeks--and straightened the crease that had formed over Madame Bovary's face. Vladimir vaguely heard someone ask if he was all right; he couldn't quite tell from the ringing that filled his ears after his fall. He looked up. He found two people hovering over him--the young man and woman he had been sharing the hill with.

The young woman seemed arrogant to the point of petulance. There was a curve of her lip that did not strike him as appealing. The young man... Though Vladimir could not think of him as handsome, there was a jut to his cheekbone that intrigued him--it was a minor detail, but it seemed somehow significant.

"Excuse me," said Vladimir to the young man. "Would you mind if I took your photograph?"

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven gave up her search and finally looked around her suronding and noitced the small group of poeple on the hill and she slowly crept away from them and looked out in to the setting sun still crying " Nicky why did you run away??" She asked sadly as she looked down at her blakc convers as the tears droped to the grass below.

[Dragonblood21]

"Ouch, that sounds like that would hurt falling out of something much higher..." he said sympatheticly to the girl.

His eyes darted back the man who fell off the tree. There is something very odd about him... he thought. He comes to a hill like this, all formaly dressed, and now as he lays there, it seems as though he doesn't even really care that he fell, or that he is on the floor. I know if that was me I would be stumbling up pretending like nothing happened, but it's almost like... he enjoyed it in some sort of odd way...

He saw the man give the girl a look of almost dislike... do they know each other?

Zack still awaited his response to whether or not the man was alright, but instead much different words came out his mouth than "I'm alright" or "I'm okay." Instead they were.... "Excuse me, would you mind if I took your photograph?"

Zack blinked his eyes at him wondering if he heard him right. Wait, now he's a photographer?! This guy is certainly throwing me for a loop. I'm normally good at figuring people out... but this guy... I wouldn't be surprised if he pulled a unicycle out of no where and started juggling bowling pins...

"Uhm, I don't mean to be rude sir, but I would like to know why first?"

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven looked at the sun set on the town and then looked over at the group.'Should I go over there??'she asked her slef as she looked over at them with a soft sigh. " What am I to do i just lose my best friend and now I'm alone on a hill with people." Raven said to her self as she stood up and looked at the sky Not noitcing her mouse Nicky in the bush next to her.

[coeur]

Vladimir scoffed. "'Sir'? Who do you think I am--the Prince of Wales?"

Vladimir brushed the dirt from his knees and straightened his collar. He replaced the glasses on his nose. He rummaged for a cigarette; stuck a tattered wrinkled one between his teeth; and lit it with a deft swipe of wrist. Everything was replaced. It was like he had never taken his tumble.

He studied the young man before him. The sun was already setting behind him. The rays curved around his skull; it created the illusion of a halo--or an eclipse. The light was hitting his face in just the right way to cause a sense of eerieness to run down his spine.

Vladimir stared for another few seconds before walking to the other side of the tree. There was a hole gaping in the trunk. He reached his arm into the tree and pulled his camera out. It was a plastic camera--old, antiquated--that was painted a hideous, electric blue; yet, there was a charm to it despite its clumsy appearance.

"I want to take your picture," said Vladimir, "because I take pictures of things that fascinate me. And, don't take it the wrong way, but I find you fascinating."

[Dragonblood21]

Zack laughed a bit at his joke. Okay, maybe calling him sir was a bit much.

He looked at Zack with a face Zack just couldn't put a finger on how to describe. Like he was looking at some painting on a wall that he wasn't quite sure if it was beautiful or just another mess of colors.

Zack looked away directly and instead looked from the corner of his eye, he didn't like direct eye contact for long periods of time, especially with another male. With a girl it's a little bit different of course.

While the man grabbed his camera, Zack noticed a girl from far down the road, he wanted to make sure that she didn't notice him noticing her however. She's just staring at us... not even sure if she wants to come up here... surely she can't be that shy?. He wanted to see if she would come up herself, so it's best to make it believe like he doesn't know she's there.

The man had his camera now and responded to him... calling him fascinating? Now that's not something I hear everyday, what in the world could he find so fascinating about me? . He tried to not let his facial expression show his shock.

"Oh, sure thing then." he replied "I would be fine with being photographed, just not too many please, one or two, I don't like to really be photographed."

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

*sqweak* Raven looked over at the bush and smiled " Nicky." She replied happily as she picked up her mouse. " I think I'll go over there." She said as she put Nicky in her pocket. Raven slowly made her way over but she remember that she had been crying ' my mascara must be running and my eyelinver must be messed up ' she thougt to her self as eh slowed down if tha was even possible to do at her slow pace.

But after a few momnets of moving like a snail she finally walked over and sat by a tree that was alittlcloser to the Kida that were already ove there.

[coeur]

"You will have to hold still for a while," said Vladimir. "My camera has a manual shutter and no flash; therefore, I have to expose the film longer in order for it to catch in this light." He motioned to the twilight; the first stars were beginning to show faintly, as if peering through gauze. Vladimir tinkered with the knotches of his camera for a couple of seconds--aperture, focus...

There was something lost with technology. Vladimir thought this as he pointed the lens toward the young man. The viewfinder was not connected to the lens; Vladimir did not bother looking through it. He knew the photograph might not turn out well, but that was what was lost with technology--spontaneity, unpredictability... There was a certain romance to the unknown. Vladimir pressed the shutter; he held it for fifteen seconds; he allowed the the film to soak in the meager light.

"Okay," he said. "You're done."

He turned the wheel. He replaced the lenscap. He placed the camera around his neck.

"Oh," he said. "I'm Vladimir, by the way. You are..?"

[Dragonblood21]

Zack noticed the camera was fairly old, well actually, incredibly old. He was expecting something such as a digital camera, but once again the man shocks him with this thing. Like a magician pulling tricks out of his hat, you really don't know next what this guy will say or do.

He noticed the girl down the road slowly approaching. Well actually, she didn't look like she was approaching at all, if it wasn't for her feet moving he would have guessed she was completely standing still. I think I've seen glaciers move faster.... He also noticed that her mascara was comming off, like she was crying. Immediatly a song popped in Zack's head "Bleeding mascara" and he began to tap his feet in beat of the song. He felt sorry for her, for whatever reason it is that she was crying. When I'm done talking to these people, if she doesn't come over here, then I want to see what's wrong with her... I don't like to just ignore people who are upset..

While he was distracted with her and thinking of why she's still over there, he barely noticed the man taking the picture of him.

"Okay, your done." Zack heard him say, and that snapped him back to the fact he was having his picture taken. Zack nodded pretending like he wasn't thinking about anything else.

Zack stuck out his hand for a handshake upon hearing the mans name, "Vladimir". Go figure, the name isn't exactly what I would call normal either. Is there anything normal about this guy at all?

"Hi, am I Zack. Pleased to meet you Vladimir. That's some special camera you got there." Zack pointed at the thing hung around his neck. "I kind of like the old fashioned cameras, although I have to admit, they aren't as convinient as today's".

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven looked from the spto she sat at the sall group and took Nicky out of her pocket and petted her.

Nicky had other plans. Nicky scampered out of Raven's hands and ran over toward the group. Raven quickly got up and tried to catch Nicky before she got to close to the group but it wa too late. Nicky stood next to a young man who Raven notice had notice looking at her before. Rave slowly walked over near him and scooped up Nicky with out making eye contatc.

[coeur]

"It's an original Diana camera," said Vladimir. He patted the camera's body. "Diana cameras were made in the sixties and seventies as 'toy' cameras--they were one or two dollars back then; these days they sell for several hundred dollars. But the photographs are always interesting: light leaks, strange shadows, darkening in the corners, intense colors, hazy focus... Its unpredictability makes it much more exciting than a digital camera. Though, I admit, there is a certain convenience to seeing the picture immediately after taking it."

Vladimir adjusted his glasses--they were a little loose from the fall. He took them off and blew on the lenses to remove a few pieces of grass that had been caught there. He noticed something moving over Zack's shoe while he cleaned his glasses. It was a small, gray, furry thing. It was cute, maybe even lovable, and by no means ugly. It was a mouse.

"There's a mouse by your foot," said Vladimir. "It must be someone's pet. You don't see mice around here very often--just rats."

A young woman snuck after the mouse as quietly as the mouse had snuck after Zack. She seemed as meek as a rodent to Vladimir--though she certainly did not resemble one. Kohl was bleeding down her cheeks in clumps; her cheeks still glistened with tears. Vladimir thought she was rather endearing.

"Excuse me," said Vladimir. "Can I take your picture?"

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Ravne looked up at the young man that asked for the Photo. " you want my picture??" She asked softly as she looked at him. but she nodded slghtly " hum alright?" she replied questiongly as she petted her mouse.

[Dragonblood21]

Zack listened intently on what he was saying about the camera. But as soon as he said there was a mouse near his foot he immiediatly jolted a little and looked downward. Surely enough, there was a mouse at his feet, and the girl who was walking incredibly slowly was picking it up.

Okay, the girl I expected, but the mouse? Can't say I saw that coming.

The girl was trying to be careful to not make eye contact. You would think she would say something after her mouse was all over my feet? Like maybe, watch out? Or sorry for that? But before the girl could respond to him, she was asked for her picture to be taken.

Zack laughed a little and looked at the girl. "Don't worry, he asked me the same thing, it's no big deal." He said with a smile. He realized then she probably wouldn't want to take a picture with her make up the way it is. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small amount of tissues wrapped in plastic. "Here you go, these might help with your make up. That mouse of yours gave me a bit of a scare, cute guy little guy though." He bent down and looked at the mouse face to face and waved.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven smiled alittle " hum thank you but I think he wanted to take my picture with my face like this." She replied as she lifted the mouse alittl higher. " Sorry about her giving you a scare she didn't mean any harm her name is Nicky." Raven replied to the boy as she took the tissues and put then in her pocket for later.

[coeur]

Vladimir nodded to the mouse before he began tinkering with his camera. He turned the film wheel; the film clicked its way to the next shot. He adjusted the focus and aperture. The light was fading quickly from the sky. It would become more and more difficult to expose the film to enough light.

Vladimir nodded to the girl; he was ready to shoot. "Just act naturally," he said. "Don't mind me."

Vladimir couldn't help but notice fineness of her jawline and the sharpness of her cheekbone. It was an odd thing to see, but it was what Vladimir was trained to do. He saw the lines and angles of everything--the colors, composition, and curvature. Everything was a possible photograph to Vladimir. Vladimir pressed the shutter.

Vladimir toyed with the functions again before taking another photograph. This girl was really quite stunning.

"You're a very pretty girl," said Vladimir as he finished taking her photograph. "My name is Vladimir. Your name is...?"

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven blushed "I'm Raven." She replied once he was done with the picture. She smiled slightly and then looked at the ground abd then at her mouse and smiled. ' Raven thought that Vladimir was in face very handsome but was to shy to say any thing at the momnet.'

[Dragonblood21]

The girl took the tissues but didn't want to use them for the picture. Well, I guess some people don't mind their picture taken with their make up like that, zack gave a little shrug.

"Hi Nicky" he replied to the mouse. He stood back to allow the girl's picture to be taken. He then took his time to recap on the little group that decided to join him today.

Sooo, we got mouse girl, the magician guy who you can't tell what he's going to do next, and another girl who seems to be not saying much. The group is all different from each other, yet they seem to have the same aura around them, colliding them together in a some simalar way... perhaps even myself included.

Zack looked toward the sunset, which was now barely peeking over the mountains as it gave it's last moments of light.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven looked over at te sun and slightly freaked " I'm sorry to run but I have to got now but before I do can I ask your name." She said to the boy who handed her the tissues. As she smiled at him slightly looking back to the town every few miniutes.

[Dragonblood21]

Raven looked over at te sun and slightly freaked " I'm sorry to run but I have to got now but before I do can I ask your name." She said to the boy who handed her the tissues. As she smiled at him slightly looking back to the town every few miniutes.

Zack's eyes shifted attention to the girl

"Uhm, yes of course" he said smiling back. "My name is Zack, and your name is?"

She seems like she is in a hurry, worried about the time... I wonder why that's so important... an early curfue perhaps?

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven smiled at him "My name is Raven nice to meet you Zack." She replied with a sweet small smile on her face. She loked back over at the sun and waved " Sorry I have to go I wasn't even supost to be out here right now." She replied as she walked back down the hill.

[Dragonblood21]

Raven smiled at him "My name is Raven nice to meet you Zack." She replied with a sweet small smile on her face. She loked back over at the sun and waved " Sorry I have to go I wasn't even supost to be out here right now." She replied as she walked back down the hill.

"That's a nice name, Raven." He said as she walked away. "I'll hopefuly see you around!" And he waved at her. Then turning towards Vladimir. "Well, I should get going myself, it was nice meeting you here, and I come here pretty often, so I don't think this is the last time I'll be seeing you."

[coeur]

"Same here," said Vladimir. He walked back to the tree where he dug a messanger bag from the trunk. He packed his camera into his messanger bag and walked back toward Zack. "Perhaps I will show you the pictures I took after I develop them. Bye."

Vladimir turned away and started walking toward the city.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven gave a small smile as she walked home hopeing that her father was not in yet ' Please let him be late. Please let him be running late. Last time I got in when the sun went down he almost killed me I can't have that happen agian." She though as he walked turned in to a run and her run into a sprint.

[inuya1306]

{ okk u stared without me... thanx guys now idk were we r}

alex- * still skateborading she stoped & walked over 2 russel * hey russel

[White Horse]

{But you had already given the starting post...}

"Hey," Russell replied, looking up at Alex before he slowly stood up and dusted his pants off. "Having fun?" He inquired, dropping his gaze to Alex's skateboard.

[inuya1306]

{ i know lol}

alex- heck yes .... what are u doing...* she walks over by him & puts a arm around him*

[White Horse]

Russell looked at Alex's arm around him before he brought his gaze up to her eyes. "Just drawing..." He murmured in a soft tone.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven got close to her house and saw that her father was in fact home " oh no he is going to kill me." she said softly as she walked by the windo to look in quietly. "I need some thing to get me out of this cause I have no were els to go." Raven said as she walked around to the other side of the house and started to climeb the tree and climbed into her room window.

[coeur]

Vladimir checked his watch; it was about seven o'clock. He thought that he should be hungry by then, but he couldn't find the desire to eat. Vladimir found that he had started eating much less in the past couple of weeks. He attributed it to his change in surroundings. His ceilings were smothering. The city was stifling.

Vladimir reasoned that it wouldn't be any good to go hungry. He walked around the outskirts of town until he stumbled across a cafe. He knew he shouldn't indulge his love of coffee--his had a weak heart--but he found he had no appetite for anything other than the taste of bitter, black, espresso.

He grudgingly entered the shop. It was better than eating nothing. Vladimir walked to the counter where a young woman with a clumsy, lopsided face was working. "An espresso spritzer, please, with a double--no triple--shot and dark, dark, dark like the pit of Satan's soul."

The girl giggled. Vladimir winked--then blanched.

Since when did he take it upon himself to flirt with unattractive girls? Vladimir blamed the city atmosphere: so much hustle and bustle and all for a pretty bit of ennui, a lofty slice of boredom. Vladimir was notoriously coquettish in the face of boredom--he would go to great pains to cause excitement, any kind of excitement, once he felt boredom start to set in.

It was how his heart had gotten to be so weak.

The girl finished making his drink. Vladimir paid her--taking care not to give a suggestive tip--and retreated to a corner to read a novel about a woman who was also ailed by boredom.

Vladimir turned the page. She was just about to ingest arsenic.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

"I think I've made it in but to be safe I should stay up here." Raven said softly as she put Nicky away. "RAVEN COME DOWN HERE NOW!!" A man yelled from down stairs. "Oh no he know's I'm home now I'm going to get it." Raven said as he walked down stairs and looked around. "yess??" raven said softly as she walked into the room. The man didn't even speak he just let his hand fly painfully agianst her cheeke. "WHY ARE YOU HERE SO LATE" He yelled as she stood over her ready to hit her once more "I'm sorry i lost track of time." She replied sadly as she held her ckeek.

[coeur]

Vladimir finished the chapter with a bored sigh. It was all frivolous. He hated this city. He missed his horses. He wanted to go back to the countryside. He wanted to die.

Vladimir didn't want to think about how those were his exact thoughts when he was in the countryside as well, how he would spend days on end sitting by the window sighing and lamenting the boredom of the vast countryside, how he longed for the city. His family had laughed at him for being petulant. They stopped laughing after his best friend had found him half dead from painkillers. They stopped laughing and made immediate plans to move Vladimir to the city.

But now the city was annoying Vladimir too. Nothing seemed to satisfy him.

Vladimir took a sip from his drink and looked out the window. He saw Russell and a young woman huddled together. Vladimir thought he could kill some time by speaking with them.

"Hey Russell," said Vladimir. "I didn't know you had a girlfriend." He motioned to the girl with his chin.

[White Horse]

Russell turned to Vladimir with wide eyes, quickly stepping away from Alex. A dark blush moved over his face as he coughed into his fist. "I-I don't," Russell toyed with the hem of his hoodie, staring at the ground. To quickly change the subject, he started on something else. "What... Umm... What are you doing here? I mean... What are you doing?" He chuckled nervously and glanced toward Alex from under his bangs, the blush deepening.

[coeur]

Vladimir frowned. Russell had been shaken by his words. Vladimir frowned and wondered if he should pursue the subject at Russell's expense or let it drop. He thought it would provide plenty of entertainment if he were to keep harassing Russell about the girl; on the other hand, he didn't want to blemish his own reputation as a brown noser. But Vladimir never cared much for his reputation, and he was awfully bored.

"I was just out reading and enjoying the sunset," said Vladimir. "I was just having some dinner--" He pointed to his coffee "--when I saw this lovely young woman...with you." He said the words jokingly, sarcastically.

"I could scarcely believe my eyes. Russell--with such a pretty young lady!" Vladimir clutched his chest in mock surprise. "You can imagine my shock!"

Vladimir studied the girl. She was rather pretty. He wondered why Russell didn't snag her. It seemed like the most logical thing to do. But then, Vladimir had to admit, Russell always had been a bit slow when it came to women--agonizing, deliberating, and planning. He wasn't like Vladimir who plowed ahead with certainty.

But Vladimir was quite bored with women nowadays. Sometimes their nagging--especially his last lover, a married woman--was too much to bear. Plus, every woman seemed to have romanticism in their heads: fancy dinners, diamond rings, declarations of everlasting love... It was ridiculous. He was a college student. Did they really expect him to do all of that for a measly tryst?

"But, in any case, I'll be going to a party later--John and Joan's house, they're a lovely couple--and you and your friend can both come along. I'm sure they will be quite happy to have you. Besides, Russell, you're trembling like you've seen a ghost. A good drink will take the flabbergast out of you!"

[White Horse]

The horror that befell Russell's face could have been tangible. It glowed with a bright and warm blush. "Vlad!" He grunted in a dark voice. "I'm going to kill you~" He reached out to grab Vlad's neck before pausing. "A party?" Russell loved parties. ;__;

And it would be a good way to get closer to Alex, yes? Without embarrassing himself... He wasn't very good with women... Or people in general, for that matter; he was still shocked he had managed to get Vladimir as a friend, with how shy he was about the whole thing.

Russell looked back toward Alex and chewed on his lower-lip gently. "Would you... you know... umm... Like to go.... Party... With me?" On the last word, he squeaked, and quickly looked down, hiding his face behind his hair and hoodie.

[inuya1306]

alex- *thought for a moment..* yea...* grabbs russells hand smileing at him*

[Dragonblood21]

Zack didn't exactly return directly home, his parents never minded him going out and staying out late, so he just walked around the city for a bit longer, pasing by people who always seemed to be in such a rush. I suppose that is what the city is all about, the constant flow of movement.

Zack passed by a few fast food resturants, but he wasn't really that hungry and he certainly wasn't going to go into a diner alone, that would feel embarrasing. He remembered the last time he tried to do something alone, when he went to the bowling alley, getting asked by random people "Don't you have any friends? It's so much better with friends..." It makes him wonder, do people honestly believe that isn't insulting? Or do they just not care they are being insulting?

Upon realising Zack has no where to go in the city without anybod to hang out with, he decided to trudge on home. He arrived at his door, creaked it open, and walked in. My parents must be out... no lights on, no diner being made, no nothing. Not really a surprise, going somewhere without telling me.. He sighed and went upstairs into his room and set up on his bed.

He heard about some stupid party some of the kids in the neighborhood are going to. He never was one for parties, there were always things there that never interested him. Bad music, stupid sluty girls, drinking, things he wasn't really into. Zack picked up a dart on the floor and chucked it at the dart board. "It doesn't help any that I would like an idiot going alone" he said to himself and threw another dart at the board. "It's not that I don't have friends, it's that they are always 'busy' doing other things, I'm last on their list of who to hang out with or care about." he threw the last dart on the floor, and it ironicly hit the bullseye. He laughed, "even the frigging darts agree with me." He layed out on his bed and sighed. "Well, maybe some of the kids from at the hill today will be there, I mean... they weren't TOO bad... maybe I'll just stroll by there..." he said lastly, before he yawned and dosed off to sleep.

[inuya1306]

Zack didn't exactly return directly home, his parents never minded him going out and staying out late, so he just walked around the city for a bit longer, pasing by people who always seemed to be in such a rush. I suppose that is what the city is all about, the constant flow of movement.

Zack passed by a few fast food resturants, but he wasn't really that hungry and he certainly wasn't going to go into a diner alone, that would feel embarrasing. He remembered the last time he tried to do something alone, when he went to the bowling alley, getting asked by random people "Don't you have any friends? It's so much better with friends..." It makes him wonder, do people honestly believe that isn't insulting? Or do they just not care they are being insulting?

Upon realising Zack has no where to go in the city without anybod to hang out with, he decided to trudge on home. He arrived at his door, creaked it open, and walked in. My parents must be out... no lights on, no diner being made, no nothing. Not really a surprise, going somewhere without telling me.. He sighed and went upstairs into his room and set up on his bed.

He heard about some stupid party some of the kids in the neighborhood are going to. He never was one for parties, there were always things there that never interested him. Bad music, stupid sluty girls, drinking, things he wasn't really into. Zack picked up a dart on the floor and chucked it at the dart board. "It doesn't help any that I would like an idiot going alone" he said to himself and threw another dart at the board. "It's not that I don't have friends, it's that they are always 'busy' doing other things, I'm last on their list of who to hang out with or care about." he threw the last dart on the floor, and it ironicly hit the bullseye. He laughed, "even the frigging darts agree with me." He layed out on his bed and sighed. "Well, maybe some of the kids from at the hill today will be there, I mean... they weren't TOO bad... maybe I'll just stroll by there..." he said lastly, before he yawned and dosed off to sleep.

{ can u use shorter sentences .. plzz. and use less detail plzzz... }

[White Horse]

When Alex took his hand in hers, he dropped his eyes to the ground again, feeling embarrassed, though in a good way; he liked Alex, and having always been so shy, and then her holding his hand.... There was just so much one could take before they started to stutter and blush horribly. "Th-Thanks," he murmured, trying to keep his voice from cracking again.

[inuya1306]

alex-* blushed... she leaned closer to him as they held hands*

[coeur]

"Well then," said Vladimir. He felt awkward watching such displays of affection, which brought to his memory another great thing about the countryside--it was all one large free love commune: no jealousy, no monogamy, and no monotony. Vladimir though his head was going explode from the restless circling of his thoughts. He rummaged for a cigarette in his shirt pocket. He lit it with a sigh--much better.

"The party's at standard party time--ten o'clock--and the house is 1408 W. 16th St. It's a pretty little thing. It looks like a cottage. Knowing John and Joan, you'll be able to hear the party several blocks away. Don't drive. I imagine you'll be too drunk to by the end of the night. And try to bring a bottle or two for the hosts. It'll make you guys look less like party crashers. Besides, everyone likes the guy who brings the booze."

Vladimir paused to take a draw from his cigarette. He leaned in so the young woman could not hear what he was going to say to Russell.

"Also, I'd keep an eye on your lovely date when you go because I hear a certain Rodolphe will be there--and you know how he is with lovely young ladies." Vladimir winked at Russell, hoping that Russell would take the hint. He did not feel like elaborating.

"So I'll see you both there, I presume? I might be a little late--hitting the bars, you know, eight o'clock is one dollar drink hour at the Biltmore--but I'll see you both around eleven?" Vladimir checked his watch. "Oh, I've got to go. Being around you love birds makes me need a tall, stiff drink. Goodbye!"

Vladimir turned and walked down the street.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

After Raven's ordeal she walked into her room and grabed some of her things and put her clothes into a bag. "Nicky I'm leaving here I'll bring you with me as well. Raven grabbed her mouse and then she grabbed the mouses foodand put in in her bag as well. Before she left she grabbed her big hoodie pull-over jacket and then climbed out of her window and ran out in to the city with Nicky in her pocket. "Were am I going to go??" She asked her self as she quickly turned the corner down the street and walked towarda a cafe. ' I think I'll sit here for a bit. I am kinda hungry.' she thought as she walked over to the counter and ordered a small coffee and a chocolate muffin and then sat outside the cafe.

[AnotherSkip]

Emmy then said,halfway to herself"now I really have to go"Then added a bit louder"I have to get home,I have some chores tonight"She jogged off,Not wanting someone to try to stop her.Remembering a place she could sit in because they didn't have good way to figure out where someone was.

[Dragonblood21]

Zack woke up with a dose... he thought he had been sleeping for hours, until he looked at the clock, which read "7:09". Outside was now completely dark, and city was lite up like as it is every night outside, so pretty. The only time Zack really even enjoyed the veiw of the city was at night. When the beautiful lights scattered across the city like glitter.

He had an interesting dream when he was asleep. He was at a party, and met a girl there who didn't seem to belong. She was siting in a corner by herself, dressed in all black, colorless. She looked at the crowd like she wanted something, but it yet it no one in the crowd could give it to her. She really stood out in such a place as party, like a sory thumb. He walked over to her and asked what she is doing here. She said a weird reply like "I don't know... I guess I'm just trying to find myself in this crowd... because I don't know who I am, or where I am going anymore..." She had the voice that made you feel every word she said, and it's then Zack realised she looking at the crowd with lust for her inner self. And before Zack could open his mouth and tell her how he felt the same way... she and the room vanished, and he was staring at his bedroom ceiling.

The party... he thought. Maybe the dream was a reflection of the party... like god's way of telling me to go there and meet her. He stood up from his bed and looked out the window. Oh, who am I kidding? Girls like that don't exist, all girls are the same, there are no different ones like me. But still... I feel like I can't shake this feeling. Zack went downstairs and walked out the door into the city. Maybe a good walk will help me feel better...

{ can u use shorter sentences .. plzz. and use less detail plzzz... }

(I'll try to use less run-on sentences, but as far as using detail, that's just how I write. I write storys, poems, essays, whatever with as much detail and "feel" as possible to add to the story line so I can and make a person not just read what I write but experience it. If you want to take this any further, PM me, I will not spam up the RP thread with this anymore.)

[AnotherSkip]

Emmy sighed looking around the store"lazy people",that when the alarms went off.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

'There is nothing that I can do but wander for a while cause now I have no place to stay what am I going to do??' Raven thought as she ate the food quickly and then walked off out to the out skirts of town. "Why did I come here?? OH yeah there is some sort of party here isn't there?" she said to her self softly as she walked by the cottage. "I might as well go. I have nothing else to do or anywere else to be for that matter." Raven said as she walked over towards the cottage to see inside.

[coeur]

Vladimir read William Blake over a tall glass of Boddingtons and a cigarette. It was his third Boddingtons in an hour. He checked his watch. It was 8:45 PM. He still had fifteen more minutes to order himself another glass at a dollar's price.

Vladimir took a drag of his cigarette. He held the Marriage of Heaven and Hell in his hands. His eyes read: Excess of sorrow laughs. Excess of joy weeps.

Vladimir put down his book and ordered another Boddingtons.

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

" Hey Josh hey Joan can I come in??" Raven asked as she walked to the door. After they let her in she went and sat in a corner and sat near the back of the room and waited for the rest of the people to show up at the part.

[Dragonblood21]

Zack walked around outside deciding whether or not to head to the party. It seemed like the walk wasn't helping him clear his memory, that's a dream you can't get rid of so easily. Zack was lost in the abyss of his thoughts, not even really noticing where he was walking. What if a girl really is there like that? Oh stop, what are you, some future teller? But you could never know until you go there. Yea, and when you do you will spend an hour searching there and it will be a complete waste of time. I'll spend even more time thinking about this if I don't know!...

The argument in his head just continued to go on, until he found himself somewhere near where the party is supposed to be held. "Well... it looks like I walked here without even noticing it..." he said as he breathed in a breath of fresh ([i]Yah right...) air.

The place was a small little building. It had red neon lights that surrounded with windows and door with a very cool, welcoming look and design. You can hear the people and music easily from the other side of the street where Zack stood. It sounded like they were just starting to get warmed up, and you can see some people piling in of all kinds of styles. He noticed one particular guy dresssed in all black, with studded jewlery, peircing and with a mohawk that must have been at least a foot tall. Zack laughed a little bit Well, at least I know I'm not the only odd ball here....

He felt kind of silly looking at the party from across the street, like he was some sort of unsociable person who is on the outside looking in... then again, that pretty much hit the nail on the head. Zack let out one last sigh before making up his final decision to enter the place. It's a long shot... but I haven't got much to lose I suppose....

Zack looked around and didn't see a moving car anywhere in sight, and shuffled his way off the side walk and he began crossing the street to reach the party.It's a long shot... but I haven't got much to lose I suppose.... As he crossed the street, he heard a certain screeching far from what seemed like far down the road. Before he can try to make out what the noise was, a pair of headlights whipped around the corner and gleamed him right in the face. The lights blinded him as he froze and put his arms up desperatly as the bumper of the screeching car trying to break smashed him in the rib cage and he was thrown like a rag doll a few feet forward. The last thing he felt was the pain of the steel ripping him in his stomach, before complete blackness. Blood spattered across the pavement like if it was ejected out of a hose, and painted the area of the trajedy red.

The screams of the people outside to witness it filled the the air, as those who were inside the building ran out to see what happened. Many just had their hands over their mouths, some couldn't even look at the brutal scene and the blood that shed across the street and car. One boy immediatly called 911, hoping the victim still has a chance of living. The ambulance was there in minutes, and gathered around Zack as when checked his pulse, and the other checked his breathing. "He has a pulse..." replied one to the other, "As he is also breathing, he seems like right now he's unconscious, we don't know how much time he has though." They hastefuly put Zack on a stretcher and wrapped him up with a mask over his face, and placed him in the ambulance. The man he said, not even looking at the concerned crowd as he was entering the driver side, "He's breathing, he's alive for now." He hopped in the hospital truck, turned on the siren and sped away from the scene.

Moments later, Zack was at the hospital, still unconscious and was rushed into a special room. Zack was nearly running out of blood, and needed blood transfer. A blood transfer was done immediatly, as well as stitches for the wound. The doctors could only pray there was no eternal bleeding done in the organs. Once all things that can be done, were done while zack was knocked out, he was placed in his own room and labeled as "in a coma". All they can do now is keep him at the hospital, hooked up to the machines and staying alive, hoping he will wake up from this tragedy...

(I wrote an extremely long response involving my character in such a situation because I will not be online for possibly a week or 2 after this response. I am moving to a new home, and I am not sure when I will have a internet connection there. When I do, I will wake up my character and hopefuly continue him. Sorry guys, but this is the only thing I can think of that would work, rather than my character just "vanishing".)

[Shy_dark_shadow_wolf]

Raven watched as the ambulance took Zack away and she knew she would follow it right a away some thing pushed her to follow it. Once Raven got to the Hospital she looked around for the nurse and then nurse showed her were Zack was. "Oh Zack." She whispered as she looked at him she quickly walked over to the chair that was next to the bed and she took his hand and just watched him.

[AnotherSkip]

Emmy then ran from the group,they barely noticed her as she got away,they had just figured out nothing was gone.Emmy sighed,walking now,Then remember what her mom had told her this early before she left.Emmy walked into her house,noticing something eerie and said"mom,I'm home."she shrugged her shoulders and walked up to her room.

[inuya1306]

alex is talking to russell.. " sooo " she says

[AnotherSkip]

Emmy turned to face her mom's room and noticed everything was gone except a lump in the corner and some odd spots along the walls. She raised an eyebrow and walked in, turning on the light and saw the worst sight ever.Her mom. Dead.

((go turning points))