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<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 10:37 PM
October 10th 2006
I toss and turn in my sleep, Screaming for help, but no one hears.
I sink deeper and deeper in my depression, putting up my walls to make, my friends think I'm happy.
I fall to the ground while fingers entwine themselves in my hair, yanking me back, hurting me.
I try to get up but I'm thrown back down, verbally beaten, but there is nothing, anyone can do to make me truly happy.
I need help really i do But i've never told anyone I've never looked anyone in the eye when i tell them what i did last night.
I pretend to be happy I try to seem real, even though I feel so fake and long for someone to know the real me. I know no one will ever find the real ME beneath all my depression.

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

October 9th 2006
Rip my heart out i know you want to
I have sat here many times watching you tell them you loved them
You told me that to and like a fool i believed you
Then you thrust me away when someone hotter come along
I dont know what you are aiming for
Maybe to see how many girls hearts you can collect?
I thought you were perfect but i geuss i was wrong
I cry into my pillow everynight thinking of how you had looked at me
and now you look at her that way
should i warn her of whats to come?
Or will she push my warnings aside thinking i want you back?
Anyone who knows me knows that isnt true
I feel cold and alone
And its your fault i am this way

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

11-4-06
Trees bend in the wind
Lightning flashes
Thunder booms oh so loud
I cuddle underneath my blankets
Staying very very warm
Thinking about you
I wonder if your crying
I wonder if your missing me
I wipe away my own tears
Wishing you were here to do it for me.
I wish you'd never moved away
That you'd come back to me
I know it'll never happen
I can still dream right?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

10-10-06
I'm so broken and confused
So lonely and cold
I watch as all the happy people
pass righton by.
I look at them
Sorrow in my eyes
Not one looks down
For they do not care
Tears have worn a path
On my sorrow filled face
Why can no one hear my cries
As I thrash at things
No one but I can see?
Nightmares flood my dreams
Of past regrets, and evil yet to come
I crawl away and hide
To a place no one will fine me.
I will be safe here
Where no one can hurt me....

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

5-16-06
ALL FOR YOU
Sometimes I just need to get away
Leave everything behind
Your hurtful words
Your burning eyes
Your hatred for me
Running high.
You compare me to
Anything that has gone bad
Just because of a
Mistake that happened
Over a year ago.
I cry myself to sleep
Everynight this happens
Wishing on the only star
That I'd never wake up
And you'd once again be happy
This is all for you
Ya know?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

5-14-06
YOUR NOT SO PERFECT
Your perfect
In many ways
You just dont know
I wish I could show you
Everything you've done for me
You've given me
Someone to believe
A shoulder to lean on
My world revovles
Around you.
But now your gone
Left me for her
I can barely contain my hurt
That's why I'm sitting here
Writing this poem
My dads cherished gun sitting
On my pillow.
Ready for me
To pull the trigger.
All of this
Is your fault
How can you live with yourself now
Knowing you caused and ended
My pain?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

Ok there ya go there are SOME of my poems I have 57 left lol. These are all written this year in fact i will go put the dates on them now....ok there we go. Anyway if you are going to write these down please tell me, i dont like people stealing my work. It upsets me, i dont even know if these are good. lol but yeah leave some comments...........

Panic

Crave
11-10-2006, 10:43 PM
October 10th 2006
I toss and turn in my sleep, Screaming for help, but no one hears.
I sink deeper and deeper in my depression, putting up my walls to make, my friends think I'm happy.
I fall to the ground while fingers entwine themselves in my hair, yanking me back, hurting me.
I try to get up but I'm thrown back down, verbally beaten, but there is nothing, anyone can do to make me truly happy.
I need help really i do But i've never told anyone I've never looked anyone in the eye when i tell them what i did last night.
I pretend to be happy I try to seem real, even though I feel so fake and long for someone to know the real me. I know no one will ever find the real ME beneath all my depression.

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

October 9th 2006
Rip my heart out i know you want to
I have sat here many times watching you tell them you loved them
You told me that to and like a fool i believed you
Then you thrust me away when someone hotter come along
I dont know what you are aiming for
Maybe to see how many girls hearts you can collect?
I thought you were perfect but i geuss i was wrong
I cry into my pillow everynight thinking of how you had looked at me
and now you look at her that way
should i warn her of whats to come?
Or will she push my warnings aside thinking i want you back?
Anyone who knows me knows that isnt true
I feel cold and alone
And its your fault i am this way

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

11-4-06
Trees bend in the wind
Lightning flashes
Thunder booms oh so loud
I cuddle underneath my blankets
Staying very very warm
Thinking about you
I wonder if your crying
I wonder if your missing me
I wipe away my own tears
Wishing you were here to do it for me.
I wish you'd never moved away
That you'd come back to me
I know it'll never happen
I can still dream right?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

10-10-06
I'm so broken and confused
So lonely and cold
I watch as all the happy people
pass righton by.
I look at them
Sorrow in my eyes
Not one looks down
For they do not care
Tears have worn a path
On my sorrow filled face
Why can no one hear my cries
As I thrash at things
No one but I can see?
Nightmares flood my dreams
Of past regrets, and evil yet to come
I crawl away and hide
To a place no one will fine me.
I will be safe here
Where no one can hurt me....

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

5-16-06
ALL FOR YOU
Sometimes I just need to get away
Leave everything behind
Your hurtful words
Your burning eyes
Your hatred for me
Running high.
You compare me to
Anything that has gone bad
Just because of a
Mistake that happened
Over a year ago.
I cry myself to sleep
Everynight this happens
Wishing on the only star
That I'd never wake up
And you'd once again be happy
This is all for you
Ya know?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

5-14-06
YOUR NOT SO PERFECT
Your perfect
In many ways
You just dont know
I wish I could show you
Everything you've done for me
You've given me
Someone to believe
A shoulder to lean on
My world revovles
Around you.
But now your gone
Left me for her
I can barely contain my hurt
That's why I'm sitting here
Writing this poem
My dads cherished gun sitting
On my pillow.
Ready for me
To pull the trigger.
All of this
Is your fault
How can you live with yourself now
Knowing you caused and ended
My pain?

BY CHELSEA AKA PANIC

Ok there ya go there are SOME of my poems I have 57 left lol. These are all written this year in fact i will go put the dates on them now....ok there we go. Anyway if you are going to write these down please tell me, i dont like people stealing my work. It upsets me, i dont even know if these are good. lol but yeah leave some comments...........

Panic
There um wow I would cry but I cant do that..

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:00 PM
There um wow I would cry but I cant do that..

is that a bad thing or a good thing that you could cry at these? I dont know if it is or not lol

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:01 PM
is that a bad thing or a good thing that you could cry at these? I dont know if it is or not lol
Its a good thing! I think

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:03 PM
Its a good thing! I think
lol i am not so well right now...

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:04 PM
lol i am not so well right now...
Oh whats wrong?

~HowToSaveALife~
11-10-2006, 11:05 PM
Those are really good but sad :( I hope you are ok :(

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:08 PM
Oh whats wrong?

Its him........Ben........that guy i thought was SOOOO great....he's....just UGH....he musta pretended to feel ANYTHING for me, he ignores me now, i think he doesnt like my attitude.....and it really hurt me.....

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:09 PM
Those are really good but sad :( I hope you are ok :(

i am good i geuss i have a lot weighing me down

~HowToSaveALife~
11-10-2006, 11:10 PM
i am good i geuss i have a lot weighing me down
Aww, i'm going through the sane thing kinda, just try and talk to someone, it helps withs me.

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:10 PM
Its him........Ben........that guy i thought was SOOOO great....he's....just UGH....he musta pretended to feel ANYTHING for me, he ignores me now, i think he doesnt like my attitude.....and it really hurt me.....
Oh... was that the one with the myspace?
I dont know him but He's an idiot!

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:18 PM
Oh... was that the one with the myspace?
I dont know him but He's an idiot!

lol he is. That is what i get though for trying to go for a popular guy i should stick to the ones that are not that well known, that way they dont have to worry about what their buddys think. Its cos of my etnies i know it, its cos his friends think i am a skater chick ( i kinda am ) and they dont approive so he is letting that decide for him.....i hate how people cant date outside their cliques for fear of being outcast........

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:23 PM
lol he is. That is what i get though for trying to go for a popular guy i should stick to the ones that are not that well known, that way they dont have to worry about what their buddys think. Its cos of my etnies i know it, its cos his friends think i am a skater chick ( i kinda am ) and they dont approive so he is letting that decide for him.....i hate how people cant date outside their cliques for fear of being outcast........
My school just got the ghetto kids and the wannabe kids but some of my friends are like that..Is ort of told um about dollwizard and you..they have this thing with white people and I dont know why.Since Im puerto Rican they think I should just go out with spanish people...and do I listen to them? Hell no!

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:25 PM
My school just got the ghetto kids and the wannabe kids but some of my friends are like that..Is ort of told um about dollwizard and you..they have this thing with white people and I dont know why.Since Im puerto Rican they think I should just go out with spanish people...and do I listen to them? Hell no!
lol i hate it when people try to tell their friends what to do!!!! Its so irrogant! And stereotypes and all that stuff i hate it. hmmm whatcha tell em about me?? ;) lol

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:26 PM
lol i hate it when people try to tell their friends what to do!!!! Its so irrogant! And stereotypes and all that stuff i hate it. hmmm whatcha tell em about me?? ;) lol
lol that Ilike you alot and other stuff..:D

<3panic!atthedisco
11-10-2006, 11:27 PM
lol that Ilike you alot and other stuff..:D

lol sweetie!!! :o

Crave
11-10-2006, 11:28 PM
lol sweetie!!! :o
Heehee:D :D :D