This is an unfinished poem by my cuzin and she wants to know what you think so far [Archive]

Pink Angel

11-12-2006, 02:20 AM

I want to die by your hands,
bring me to life,
then kill me again,
I want to live in hell,
I know this pain all to well,
love is a slow kind of suicide,
I don't know the reason why,
My life is depressing,
this I already know,
I live to die by your hands,
this I don't really understand

By my cuzin

Sweetie2393

11-12-2006, 02:21 AM

I like it alot.

Pink Angel

11-12-2006, 02:23 AM

I like it alot.
I'll tell her

AlcTrCKaD

11-12-2006, 02:40 AM

das a cool poem

Crave

11-12-2006, 02:41 AM

I want to die by your hands,
bring me to life,
then kill me again,
I want to live in hell,
I know this pain all to well,
love is a slow kind of suicide,
I don't know the reason why,
My life is depressing,
this I already know,
I live to die by your hands,
this I don't really understand

By my cuzin
ooooooooooo nice!

Pink Angel

11-12-2006, 02:42 AM

Jay Jay says: thanx

lildemonslayer07

11-12-2006, 02:43 AM

That Is So Cool!

Pink Angel

11-12-2006, 05:01 AM

That Is So Cool!
Pink's cuz: thanx

idk

11-12-2006, 05:03 AM

its prity good