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Sasuke-Kun
07-13-2008, 01:17 AM
Hey, Hey, Sasu here in the creative corner... Lets cut right to the chase and i'll tell you what I want.


Being such an AWESOME writer, i write a Naruto OC story, There are NO, i repeat, NO original characters from he manga, except for the AKatsuki, And i only have... 4 characters, and I need a TON MORRRREEEE


So I ask any one that has a naruto character t o fill out the thing a majig below and that would be greatly appreciated (any he/she will be in a NARUTO storeh!)

Name: (FULL)
Age: (per time skip)
Gender:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
History: (Put he/she's life story)
Look: (descriptive or RPC is fine)
Crush: (one of the other made up if you WANT)
Other:


I'll post my four in a minute

Sasuke-Kun
07-13-2008, 01:53 AM
Name: Melody *unknown*
Age: 12
Gender: Chic
Likes: chocolate, Art, Loud nosies, Flowers, fighting.
Dislikes: Storms, Needles, Piercings
Personality: Melody has been known to cry when she was younger, Never meaning she was weak at all, she cried whenever someone cared for her, for the least bit, seeing shes an orphan. But now she more attackive and calm.
History: Melody's Parents and older brother died when she was four in a terrible Fire accident, burning down everything she had. She ran away from where ever they put her, Foster homes, adoptions, it didn't matter, she still ran away. She tended to cry when ever she was reminded of her family, or her brother. She became tougher over the years and didn't care what people said or thought about her. she began to make friends and be normal, In the future, She begins to be more curiose of her famil, doing everything she can to find out who they are. Itachi Uchiha then tells her that her real parents are The two leaders of the Akatsuki.
Look: One seeccc
Crush: Itachi Uchiha
Other: Has a demon, the 20 tailed Cat



Name: Naksuko Hazi
Age: 12
Gender: Dude
Likes: Silence, Sparring, learning new Justu, and Reading
Dislikes: loud people, Annoying people... The akatsuki
Personality: Shy, Very, He tends to keep tohmself, only speaking to his twin or Melody.
History: Maksuko grew up with his Father and twin brother, Daisuke. Their mother died when she gave birth to them. Naksuko holds a huge amount of energy, nearly enough to kill any normal human. Natsuko is a ladies man, and like it that way, the way he's so smooth. its amazing.
Look: One seeccc
Crush: Melody
Other: Has a demon, not a tailed one.
(yes this is my characer...)


I'll post the other two when my mind isn't NUMB

Rei
07-13-2008, 04:06 PM
Hey, Hey, Sasu here in the creative corner... Lets cut right to the chase and i'll tell you what I want.


Being such an AWESOME writer, i write a Naruto OC story, There are NO, i repeat, NO original characters from he manga, except for the AKatsuki, And i only have... 4 characters, and I need a TON MORRRREEEE


So I ask any one that has a naruto character t o fill out the thing a majig below and that would be greatly appreciated (any he/she will be in a NARUTO storeh!)

Name: (FULL)
Age: (per time skip)
Gender:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
History: (Put he/she's life story)
Look: (descriptive or RPC is fine)
Crush: (one of the other made up if you WANT)
Other:


I'll post my four in a minute

Name: Mizuki Aysel
Age: 20
Gender: Girl
Likes: moon, storms, cloudy days
Dislikes: being called albino, the sun, Suzu http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j221/TheDarknessWolf/rpcs%20and%20ocs%20for%20naruto/Suzu/TenTen-Card-1.jpg
Personality: happy
History: she ecaped from orochimaru, went to the sand, had a crush there(Daisuke) but oro killed him, stayed in the sand for 7 years, got kidnapped to the akatsuki, fell in love there
Look: http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j221/TheDarknessWolf/rpcs%20and%20ocs%20for%20naruto/mizukideidara-2.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j221/TheDarknessWolf/rpcs%20and%20ocs%20for%20naruto/cursemarkmizuki.jpg
http://thedarknesswolf.deviantart.com/art/Masks-89970098
Crush: Deidara
Other: she DOES NOT have a demon, but she has a curse mark. she has a kekkei genkai, she is able to grow sharp things out of her body, and she is great in taijutsu. weak in all the rest.

evanscense4
07-13-2008, 10:32 PM
((sounds cool.^.^))
Name: Kana Ai Yuuikoi
Age: 13
Gender: female
Likes: Training,taking walks,sweets,learning new jutsus.
Dislikes: Orochimaru,being helpless,being underestimated.
Personality: Can be impatient,cold,sarcastic,and always has a good come back up her sleeve.She only shows her true sweet side to Daisuke.
History: Kana was always known to be..different.Growing up as a child she never had any friends,except Daisuke.Everyone in their clan and village would run away from her or throw rocks at her while saying to leave the village.The reason why was because she has a deadly demon locked inside her.Vyuuzi,a shadow kitsune that used to terrorize the Yuuikoi clan and village.Daisuke was the only friend she had besides her parents.Kana didn't know a demon was in her.Whenever she asked why everyone hated her,her mother would simply cry while holding her.At the age of six,Orochimaru sent his henchmen to attack the Yuuikoi clan,desiring the Vyuuzi powers.That was the day Kana learned the truth.That day,everyone in the Yuuikoi clan was slaughtered,including Kanas' parents.Except Kana and Daisuke.the two managed to escape.Around the age of 11 they joined Akatsuki.
Look: http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/RPCs/fullview2-1.jpg
Crush: Daisuke
Other: Kana's strongest area is in Taijutsu,she's about as strong as Tsunade.She has a bloodline limit called Genshougan.Her and Daisuke are on stage three:[http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/RPCs/Genshougan.png
Vyuuzi:http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/Demons/31020.jpg

Name: Daisuke Li Yuuikoi
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Likes: Training,learning new jutsus,protecting Kana.
Dislikes: Being weak,anyone who dares to harm Kana,being too long apart from Kana.
Personality: Sarcastic,always up to cheer up Kana,very protective of her,cold to anyone besides Kana,calm most of the time.
History: Daisuke met Kana when he was six and she was five.He knew what was inside her but still wanted to be her friend.He would always protect her whenever she was being picked on.It wasn't unusual for the two to be found sleeping together in the woods.Daisuke always had to be careful when it came to Kana.His parents forbid him from seeing her,but that didn't stop him.After the slaughter,Daisuke swore to avenge Kanas' parents.In his opinion,they were the only ones who deserved to live.
Look: http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/RPCs/anime_boy2.jpg
Crush: Kana
Other:

Ban
07-13-2008, 10:35 PM
(i'll put mine up in a bit...hay nice sig i love the anime ^^)

Name: (FULL)
Age: (per time skip)
Gender:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
History: (Put he/she's life story)
Look: (descriptive or RPC is fine)
Crush: (one of the other made up if you WANT)
Other:

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
07-13-2008, 11:23 PM
((OHH COOLIO!))

Name: Sayuri Kaguya
Age: 21
Gender: chic!Do you see any guys with the name Sayuri?
Likes: the rain,the moon,the dark,training,SUGAR,ductape
Dislikes: weaklings
Personality: usually quiet,cold,but will be loud and hyper when you get close to her.
History: Sayuri was born in the Mist Village,into the Kaguya clan to be exact.She detested her clan,and didn't participate in the foolish act of war on the village.After they got themselves killed,she went to Konoha and became a ninja.Her skills grew quickly,and was a jonin in only a few years.She grew bored with the village,and joined the Akatsuki at the age of fourteen because they valued her power.The one thing that no one except herself knows,is that she has a demon.She wont tell anyone,in fear of the Akatsuki turning on her and extracting it.
Look: http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc288/thekahonaninja/RPCs/SayuriKaguya2.jpg
Crush: Itachi
Other: she has the 15-tailed wolf named Raiden.She also has a special jutsu called the Lightning Eye because of Raiden.It allows her to control lightning,move at the speed of lightning,and make lightning out of thin air,and turns her eye electric blue.It drains her chakra a little though,so she only uses it when in battle.
Raiden: http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc288/thekahonaninja/anime_wolf_fullbody.jpg ('cept with 15 tails)

Sasuke-Kun
07-14-2008, 11:05 PM
((sounds cool.^.^))
Name: Kana Ai Yuuikoi
Age: 13
Gender: female
Likes: Training,taking walks,sweets,learning new jutsus.
Dislikes: Orochimaru,being helpless,being underestimated.
Personality: Can be impatient,cold,sarcastic,and always has a good come back up her sleeve.She only shows her true sweet side to Daisuke.
History: Kana was always known to be..different.Growing up as a child she never had any friends,except Daisuke.Everyone in their clan and village would run away from her or throw rocks at her while saying to leave the village.The reason why was because she has a deadly demon locked inside her.Vyuuzi,a shadow kitsune that used to terrorize the Yuuikoi clan and village.Daisuke was the only friend she had besides her parents.Kana didn't know a demon was in her.Whenever she asked why everyone hated her,her mother would simply cry while holding her.At the age of six,Orochimaru sent his henchmen to attack the Yuuikoi clan,desiring the Vyuuzi powers.That was the day Kana learned the truth.That day,everyone in the Yuuikoi clan was slaughtered,including Kanas' parents.Except Kana and Daisuke.the two managed to escape.Around the age of 11 they joined Akatsuki.
Look: http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/RPCs/kanami12.jpg
Crush: Daisuke
Other: Kana's strongest area is in Taijutsu,she's about as strong as Tsunade.She has a bloodline limit called Genshougan.Her and Daisuke are on stage three:[http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/RPCs/Genshougan.png
Vyuuzi:http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/Demons/31020.jpg

Name: Daisuke Li Yuuikoi
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Likes: Training,learning new jutsus,protecting Kana.
Dislikes: Being weak,anyone who dares to harm Kana,being too long apart from Kana.
Personality: Sarcastic,always up to cheer up Kana,very protective of her,cold to anyone besides Kana,calm most of the time.
History: Daisuke met Kana when he was six and she was five.He knew what was inside her but still wanted to be her friend.He would always protect her whenever she was being picked on.It wasn't unusual for the two to be found sleeping together in the woods.Daisuke always had to be careful when it came to Kana.His parents forbid him from seeing her,but that didn't stop him.After the slaughter,Daisuke swore to avenge Kanas' parents.In his opinion,they were the only ones who deserved to live.
Look: http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff163/miss_daisy_lazy/team.jpg
Crush: Kana
Other:


THANKS EVERYONE!

Evan: I really like your characters, but I have a few problems with them.
-I would lov eit if you chould use your own RPCs, A coolio person Named Mari made both of those, could you RPC of of your own? and not just edit the part her hers please? Sorry to sound rude!
-The Name Daisuke is already in use (i got FLOOODEDDDD with pms) is it possible to choose another?

so could you please just fix those problems?

evanscense4
07-14-2008, 11:20 PM
Oh sure!Sorry about that.^.^

Nona Stolen
07-30-2008, 10:29 PM
Myo is my actual nickname at school(because its sounds like Meow) and I created this character on my own. If I had my stupid picture of her(it got deleted because of a virus) I would have used that instead of a description.... I hope its ok..

Name: Myo(Mee-Oh) Takashi
Age: 15 1/2
Gender: Female
Likes: She adores her Orochimaru-sama
Dislikes: Sasuke and being left alone.
Personality: Myo is a really upbeat kind of girl, always hyper and happy. Her moods change really fast though. Myo is rather loud and boisterous, but has a dark side.
History: Myo was born into a small clan, but was taken away by Orochimaru while still an infant. Orochimaru put her in the care of the Hyuuga family, leaving her on the door step to be found. She was raised along side Neji and Hinata, befriending the shy Hyuuga girl and charming her way into Neji’s heart. A few months after her 10th birthday Orochimaru came back, deciding to steal her personally, in the dead of night and used a sleeping jutsu on her and taking her back to the Sound Village.
Myo woke about a week later, with a tattoo that looked like a sun around her belly button. Orochimaru had implanted a demon(hasn’t been revealed as to who or what it is) inside Myo’s body, and the blonde is completely oblivious to it. Myo instantly took to Orochimaru; always staying close by, clinging to him, and hated the Uchiha immediately.
The Hyuuga’s came to believe Myo had ran away after having a fight with Neji, they looked for her for a little while, but soon gave up on ever seeing her again.
Look: Hair- Myo’s hair is mostly straight, with a curl or two around her ears and randomly in the rest of her hair. The color is that of golden blonde, about 3 inches worth of her hair is dyed at the ends, the bottom a dark purple and going up to fuchsia then to a sweet pea pink.
Eyes- Wide, almond shaped. Slightly slanted; Hazy grey(most the time) or baby blue(only on bad days).
Skin tone- Golden tan with freckles sprinkles across her nose, and
In depth description of look- Myo has a body that isn’t extremely developed and, when clothed, doesn’t have much shape at all. Her hips are narrow and her waist is small, Myo has a high waist. She is very light footed but often walks on her toes(like how cats walk), only walking normally on soft surfaces. The downfall to the way she walks is that causes the bones to weaken, making them easier to break, making her step cautious and measured.
Crush: Hm…
Other: Myo doesn’t usually wear shoes, no matter where she goes. She cannot fight, not only does she not know how, the mere sound of arguing can make her upset enough to cry. Myo is sensitive, and can be irrational and rather insane at times and doesn’t fair well under pressure. Myo never wears alot of clothing.