I should have left it at the bottom of the drawer

[Faceless|Child]

I bleed for what I think is right, you pray for what you think is wrong.
We have all have our opinions, but everyone says I am the one who doesn’t belong.

Who are you to persecute me for my beliefs, who are you to tell me it’s not right.
Who is really on the heavenly side of living, is it you? Is it me? Who could it be…?

Does the small line of religion, really make us enemies?
Do the lies you reads and the scars I put on myself, really make us rivals.

Why can’t we see eye to eye, are these cuts really a sin? Is your bible really true?

Who are you to persecute me for my beliefs, who are you to tell me it’s not right.
Who is really on the heavenly side of living, is it you? Is it me? Who could it be…?

Hell doesn’t exist, Heaven is just a myth.

The crucifix you so proudly display, you act like you’re better

But doesn’t your bible say…

Don’t persecute others for their beliefs; your right is their wrong.
Don’t judge lest you be judged as the same sinner.

We’re all going to Hell anyway because we’re all going to die; it’s not a selection of perfection.

Who are you to persecute me for my beliefs, who are you to tell me it’s not right.
Who is really on the heavenly side of living, is it you? Is it me? Who could it be…?

Don’t judge me, don’t hate me.
Just look past the way I live and see,
We’re going to burn in Hell together.
So why not forget everything we believe.

[Faceless|Child]

As my title so bluntly put it, I should have left this in the bottom of my dresser drawer and never looked at it again.

I wrote this forever and a day ago, I know its far from the best so dont bother pointing it out. I know I am taking all the fun out of reading my horribly crappy song/poem, but I am terrible that way.

I cheated, I used spell check and grammer check when editing this. It didnt do much. As you can tell from about everything I put on here, my grammar is lacking, and I am taking the fun out of it again.

P.S I have serious issues with my comma's... So if theres any advice for when not to and when to put those annoying things, I will gladly except.

[fireangel2405]

thats really good. that's really cool. good job.