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kewi2012
07-26-2008, 12:10 AM
okay so i used to write poems all the time
well someone blamed me for plagorising(sp?)
so i stop for awhile
i was soooooooo crushed because i kno i worte that poem
because i wrote it about a specfic friend
and it meant alot to me

well so heres my point
i worte a new poem just now.

tell me what you think...

(untitled)

when you said you loved me
did you heart think so too

when you hugged me tighly
did you know how i felt about you

or did you just want to see me fall
telling me this but then you never call

i thought i knew you
i thought i could trust you too

but maybe after all
you are not my wonderwall.

Lost&Alone
08-04-2008, 07:12 AM
I like it.

The Green Butterfly
08-04-2008, 08:24 AM
very nice. i like it. hey if someone says you plagerised ask them where they got their information from. don't let those mean *says some bad words under breath* get you down. i would want to see the peom they say i supposedly plagerised.

kewi2012
08-10-2008, 01:16 AM
thanks. umm let me find it and ill PM it to you. :D