♥ .::I can't believe I fell for a puppet::. ♥ {Naruto Story}

[Lovely_Mocochang]

OOC: This is my first story I've ever attempted to read. I'm not taking criticism, but if you have something nice to say. your more than welcome to comment or PM me. Just don't let it get to crowded in here.
Thanks.

♥ .::I can't believe I fell for a puppet::. ♥

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My name is Aya Kakumei. I look about fifteen years old, but infact I'm older than your grandmother. I know, it's weird. blame Orochimaru if you wish- he gave me this curse..well a demon to be exact. As many times I regret having this curse, it does have it's advantages. I know a lot of things that happened in the past, and love to tell people the story- the real truth. But that's all I'll put in my journal for now. The only reason I'm making this is because I'm bored, and I want someone to pick this up when I eventually die, and read the story of the girl who carried the immortal demon; The two tailed demon bat.
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After letting out a long sigh, I put my journal in my small back-pack. It was time to travel, again. It's been two years since I seen my friends in the leaf.
Sasuke..he was such a sweetie when no one else was around. Sometimes I think he likes me. Hehe, so kawaii. But the rest of the nine genin- or should I say eight now their alright.. Oh well. I'm hoping that the rumors weren't true- that Sasuke betrayed everyone for that jerk Orochimaru. If that's true, I'm going to stop Orochimaru and the other sound dorks. Okay, enough babbling. It's time to hit the road.
I opened the door to the small shack an old couple allowed me to stay in. Man, were they nice. I'll make sure I come back to visit them again. They acted like I was their grandaughter.. Heck, I think they believe I'm their foster child or something considering my parents were long gone dead..because of Orochimaru. I guess you could say I don't really care anymore. It's my nature, I'm usually careless and laidback. My parents have been dead for about twenty years.
But, it's time to head towards the leaf village. I'm sure most people remember me. I mean, it's not like everyday you see a woman like me with red hair, and three scars on her face. I'm one of a kind. Well anyways, as I walked I gave out a groan. This was going to take awhile unless I used my chakra to get there sooner. Or, there was the possibilty I could use my demons wings. Then again, I would get caught by the Akatsuki. Ah well, I'm sure walking is much better excerise then using wings as a cheat.


..End of first chapter..

Please comment to continue. I actually already have second chapter finished. ^w^

[Lovely_Mocochang]

..Anyone?

Am I that hated and does my story suck that bad?

I feel totally unwelcomed here.

[::BlAcK~hEaRt::]

I love it!Please continue it!

[SasukeChan]

Yes, do carry on. ^.^

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Thanks for commenting you two.
^^

Chapter Nii!
{Chapter 2}


"Finally!" I panted.
I was finally there- my destination..Konohagakure! Surprisingly, the guards didn't even have to ask my purpose. They allowed me in with a smile on their face. Though, as I walked in, I prayed that all my lovely genin friends survived.
Not even a minute into the village, I was tackled by an all to fimiliar blonde.
"Aya-chan! Your back! After 3 years your back!" Gawd. His voice was still annoying.
"Yeah, I'm back Naruto. Yay. Now get off!" I forcefully had to pull Naruto's arms from around my neck.
Naruto finally got ahold of himself, and rubbed the back of his neck nervously. It went quiet..sorta odd. I never spoke a word either, I studied the fifteen year old blonde and smiled.
"You actually grew." I finally say.
"Ah. Shut up. Oh! I have to go show you to Sakura! She has been dying to see you!" Naruto takes my hand and tries to drag me off.
We then arrived at the old training grounds, ah the memories came flowing back. Then that annoying voice threw me out of my thoughts.
"Sakura-chan, Aya's here!" Naruto shouted.
Why did he shout in the first place? Sakura was standing right infront of him.
Sakura gave Naruto a blank look, before rubbing her ear. "Obviously, Naruto. You don't need to yell."
My jaw dropped; mentally of course. I couldn't allow myself to look ridiculous in public. Sakura has difinitley matured from: "SHUT UP NARUTO!" and a punched to the blondes head to "Naruto stop yelling." although deep down I knew that she was still childish.
"So hows life treating you Sakura?" I ask, while crossing my arms.
"Good. Tsunade-sama has taught me how to heal, and..." Sakura babbled on, and on. Of course, I was interested..sorta.
"That's cool.." I then trailed off.
The rumors were right. He was gone. Sasuke had left. It seemed my rage filled the air, because Naruto and Sakura had their heads down. Obviously when both were upset..it was clear something was wrong.


It's probably to short. But I'm real tired. I'll make next chapter longer. ^^

[SasukeChan]

Interesting. ^.^ Keep going.

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Arigatou gozaimasu. (Thank you very much.)

I've been unable to write third chapter. It may take some time.

[SasukeChan]

Take your time. I know how that is.

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Whew. I'm glad you understand. My cousins are coming over tomorrow and I have to do everything I can to keep them occupied. x_X

[SasukeChan]

Well, like I said I seem to be on permanent Writer's Block. I'm guessing your cousins are pretty young.

[Ban]

i didn't like it boooooooooooooooooooo............................. ......................................... XD i was jokeing i loved it

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Thanks Ban. All the writting is based off my thoughts as myself being an anime character. If that makes sense.

Sasuke- Chan: Nah. One cousins about 9 the other is 14. They just get bored easily. xD

[SasukeChan]

Cool. All my cousins are way older than me. Which makes me glad.

[Ban]

kewl you should become a wrighter..when i'm not making music i wright short stories.

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Haha. I don't think I could become a writer.

[SasukeChan]

But you already are a writer. ^.^

[Lovely_Mocochang]

<<;

Not a good one in my oppinion. I don't know big words. ><

[Ban]

you don't need to know big words to wright....you can make up your own XD

[SasukeChan]

So? You don't need to know big words to be a good writer. Besides, I think your writing is good. Really good actually.

[Lovely_Mocochang]

True. Then people would be like.. "What the heck does that word mean?"

[Ban]

you could do this Ex.

"This is stupid and (1)barow Phillip"

(1) barow=uncool

[Lovely_Mocochang]

But barow sounds like 'Borrow' when someone lends you something.

[Ban]

it was just an example >.<

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Oh. Lol. ^^;

[Ban]

Xd >333333

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Chapter..San?
{I'm sure that means three. <<; }

"Why?" I whisper.
I know, I didn't need a reply. I already knew what was going on. But..that's the only thing that managed to come from my lips. Many thoughts ran through my mind. Did Sasuke make that decision by himself? Did Orochimaru and the now deceased sound 4 brain wash him? Then again..that curse mark might've got ahold of him. Ah..The shame. I'll get the boy back.

Then out of nowhere, I felt a hand on my shoulder. Quickly, I look back and saw Kakashi.
"Kakashi-saaan." I smiled and hugged him tightly.

This old man right here was like a big brother to me. He knows all about my demon, my life (sounds scary but it's not) and he always says: "Don't worry Aya, I'll protect you."

See? See?! He is like a big brother.

"How have you been? And my, you gotten a bit taller!" Kakashi exclaimed, obviously smiling behind that annoying black mask.
My eye twitched slightly but nonetheless I smiled.
"Oh thanks, and you've gotten much older I see." I chuckle.
My mind had already began to forget about the serious situation about Sasuke. Soon enough I'll remember what I was so angry at before. But right now, I knew I had to see everyone else I knew and haven't seen in three years. It'll be like a big family reunion.. Yay!
Then the angry voice knocked me from my thoughts off winning this insult game.
"I haven't aged. I am still handsome." Kakashi retorted.
I only laughed, and punched him playfully on the shoulder.
"How old are you Kakashi? Like..26? Yeah..that's old to me." I nodded.
That's when he was close to having his head ripped off:
"Well look at you..your ol-.." he paused. He knew he was about to say something he should never say infront of anyone else. Not even me.
"Don't go there Kakashi, please.." I whisper, before walking away.
Before I was distant from the three I looked back and smiled.
"Well, who would like to come with me? I'm not quite sure where Ino, Shika and the others are.."
Naruto quickly smiled and caught up to me, while Sakura just walked a little behind. Maybe she was tired or something..Ah beats me I don't exactly care. As we walked, Naruto began to talk about his three year long training with Jiraiya. It sounded interesting, though since Naruto was talking so fast you couldn't understand a darn word he was saying. Luckily, Sakura told him to slow down. Of course I just stayed quiet, smiling like a little child who just made two bestfriends.
When we arrived at the Ichiraku ramen shop, a fimiliar blonde, fatty, and pineapple head sat eating ramen with their sensai. I told Naruto and Sakura to hush, and they did. Quietly, I sneaked behind Shikamaru and whispered: "Boo." right in his ear. With quick reflexes I stepped back and watched Shikamaru fall backwards and into the dirt. Everyone busted out laughing; but Choiji who was too busy eating. Go figure.
"Aw man, what was that for Ino?" Shikamaru asked while sitting up.
"Huh?! It wasn't me!" Ino, Shikamaru, and Asuma looked back.
"Konnichiwa!" I wave, and quickly got glomped by Ino.
I patted her back, and smiled at Shikamaru who stood up with a real smile.
"Long time no see deer boy, fatso and Piggy and Asuma!" I then backed away really quickly.
Ino's face grew red and had to calm herself down from attacking me. Now, if I look to my left, I'd see a very ticked off Akimichi.
"Who are you callin' fats- HEY! Aya!" Chouji smiled.
Uh..clueless much? What in the world just happened? Angry to happy? Bipolar? I shrugged, it didn't matter. I wasn't going to get attacked- yippie!
"How are you guys?" I ask while sitting down.
"Good," they all said in unision..except Asuma who was in space; not literally folks.
The next few minutes..or should I say hours, me, Naruto, Sakura, Shikamaru and the other two began to talk. Mostly about the past, how we met and secretly making fun of Neji and the other two. That's what I call the gossip group. These kids were awesome. I love them..like a family. I am actually considering moving here in the leaf..


{I'm pretty sure Chapter three is real crappy. I just type way to fast. I made this in only ten minutes. I just want to fast forward and get to the good part! Oh, and I pretty much failed to make it humorous right?}

[Lovely_Mocochang]

CHAPTER FOUR?!

As before, I had a very long conversation with a few of my buddies. I'm positive you remember who they were. Sadly, I was unable to see my other friends; Neji, Tenten and Rock lee to be exact. Why? Well, since awhile ago I was considered part of Team seven, I was sent on a mission with them. Being be I sort of forgot which Ranking. Nothing to hard for me though.

Not only were me, Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi going..But Rock Lee, Gai, TenTen and Neji were to! Yay, that's a bit better..We were to leave immediatley tomorrow morning. Luckily, Sakura allowed me to stay at her house for the night.
She let me stay in one of her guest rooms. Of course once I got in that room I brought out my journal and began to write..


After my arrival in the Leaf village. It seems all my friends were all still alive and happy. Though..Sasuke was gone. My best friend. My heart filled with rage when I found out the so called rumors were true. But luckily Kakashi helped me forget all about it. Now, I am stuck going on a pretty high ranked mission with Team 7 and another team. Shamefully I forgot their team number. Haha. That's all I'll write for now. I'm very tired. Night!
I shut my journal and stuck it back in my bag. After I collapsed on the bed, I was fast asleep.
.....
Birds began to chirp as the sun shined right into my eyes. But that's not what woke me up..Sakura did. She poured water on me! Not only was I very angry, I was soaking wet. Ugh. But I'm guessing there was a reason for her doing that.
"Why?" I groaned, while slowly sitting up.
"We have to get ready for the mission. Or were going to be late." Sakura replied while placing a hand on her hip.
I stood up, stretched and yawned at the same time.
"I'm ready. Just give me an apple and I'll be all set to go!" I gave thumbs up, and trotted downstairs with my bag.
Sakura followed, making sure I didn't mess the house up trying to find an apple. Luckily, there was a basket full of apples! Oh happy day! Greedily I snatched one, rinsed it and began to eat it.
"Shall we go, Sakura?" My mouth was full, and I'd be surprised if Sakura understood.
"..Uh..Sure..?" Sakura questioned.
I only nodded and headed outside. Good thing Sakura knew where we were going because I forgot completely. When we finally arrived outside of the leaf; infront of the gates, it seemed everyone was waiting on one other person..Naruto. So while we waited, I decided to ask:
"Why are we all going on this mission again?"
"To save Gaara from the Akatsuki.." Kakashi and Gai replied in unision.

{I am on a roll! I must stop though. I got a headache. I hope everyone is enjoying it so far. BTW: It's a Sasori love story and a little bit of Sasuke. Idk yet..}

[Lovely_Mocochang]

{Hm..No likey? :/ }

[Lovely_Mocochang]

CHAPTER 5!


"They got ahold of him?" My voice was calm, but inside I was growing very angry.

No one takes away a friend of mine- especially the Kazekage. Without another word I quickly ran forward. Of course, I knew where I was going. It's not like I haven't been their before.
Oh yes.. I was apart of the akatsuki before. Then I left, realizing that I was being used for my demon, since they cannot extract it from me. Not only that, me and a certain puppet had began to grow feelings for each other. That's when I left. Of course it left him broken hearted and me nearly depressed out of my skin but I'm sure he's over it now.
"Aya, slow down!" Voices called from behind me, but I did not reply.

I guess I wasn't the only one who was fumed, Naruto seemed pretty ticked off as well. As much as I knew this mission would take awhile because it was a long run, I was to determined to stop for anything. I had to save Gaara before it was to late. I know exactly what the akatsuki is doing. First Gaara.. I gazed towards Naruto who was a bit further than me. Naruto would be next..
Not only do I have to save Sasuke from a horrible fate, save Gaara, and protect Naruto. I had to destroy the akatsuki. This was all such a hassle but it had to be done.
-- The arrival at the Akatsuki Base --


After about a day or so, me and the two teams finally arrived at the front of the akatsuki base. As much as I wanted to tell them every detail on them, I couldn't. I could not allow them to find out I was apart of the Akatsuki.
"The seal on the door is located in three other different places. Seeing as Team Gai is probably the smartest we should allow them to unlock the seals." I explain, leaning against the large rock with a seal on it.
"How do they do that?" Naruto asked.
"They all have to rip the seal off at one time. It's quite simple, but that's not the rest.." I trailed off.
With that everyone seemed to lean in, obviously wanting to know more.
"Once that seal is pealed off, each must have to fight a clone of themselfs. A rock clone, water clone, sadly I forget the others. You must fool them, therefore they know your every movement because they are you." I calmly say while opening my eyes.
"Alright!" Gai said with determination. "Luckily I have got three headphones so my team, and I can communicate!" He said while pulling out about five headphones. Gai handed the last one to Kakashi. Which irked me because I'm the one who should've got it. But anywho, we need to get finished this mission before it is to late.
When I finally snapped from my thoughts, everyone was still talking.
"Your still standing here? We're here to save Gaara, now go Neji, use byakugan and locate those seals!" It wasn't a exclamation, it was a demand.
Getting shocked looks from everyone, Neji simply nodded and did as he was told.
"There." Neji said before he gave exact details on where these seals were exactly located. Quickly, Gai's team was gone. A few minutes later, everyone was at their seal. Me, Naruto and Sakura did our best to wait patiently. While I waited, I then realized an old woman talking to Sakura. My face grew pale.
"Chiyo-baa-sama.." I whispered.
Sakura and Chiyo both looked towards me. Sakura looked back and forth between me and Chiyo. Obviously there was a rivalry that she noticed.
"Ah, Aya. It's been quite awhile. I see you actually grew." Chiyo smiled.
"Don't push your luck you old hag." I growl, and cross my arms.
I heard her chuckle, and that was the end of that. I have no clue why she was on this mission. Maybe I missed something. Well, I did come here right before we left for this mission. I had to be missing some information.
"They pulled the seals," Kakashi exclaimed and looked towards Sakura.
Sakura nodded at her sensai, and stepped back from the rock. To my amazement, she punched her fist into the rock and the whole boulder came tumbling down. When the dust cleared, Naruto ran in and so did I.
"Looks like they finally arrived, un," A fimiliar voice rang through my ears.
I quickly looked over and stared in shock, yet happiness.
The two akatsuki members seemed quite surprised too, especially him. When I opened my mouth to speak, Naruto blurted out: "Give Gaara back you b.astards!" He growled. Kakashi put a hand on his shoulder. "Calm down, Naruto."
"He's already dead," Sasori said; being in his puppet mind you. His gaze stopped on me.
I bowed my head, and tried not to seem said. "Hm, look Sasori-danna. Doesn't she seem fimiliar, un?" Deidara smiled.
"Shut your mouth." Sasori growled.
"Both of you, quit your arguing. I'm only here for one reason and that is..to revive my friend. The Kazekage!" I look up at the two with my angry gold orbs. As much as it hurts to see Sasori and Deidara again, I couldn't let my emotions stand in the way again. I am going to get Gaara back and leave with my team.


{EDIT: When I posted this yesterday, it was perfect, everything wasn't messed up. But then most of it got erased and the font changed. I swear someone edited it other than myself. But. I fixed it!}

[Lovely_Mocochang]

Btw, I'm canceling this story. Apparentley no one likes it.

[::BlAcK~hEaRt::]

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