Don't Say Goodbye

[♫Extraordinary_Machine♫]

My body tremebles,
As I call out your name.
Since you've been gone,
My world just hasn't been the same.

I wish you didn't leave.
Oh why'd you have to go?
I miss you more than anything,
I thought you'd seriously hit your all time low.

I was mad as heck,
That you'd leave me this way.
All broken to pieces,
Oh I wanted to make you pay.

But I didn't hurt you,
I only hurt me.
Friends yelling and angered,
Trying to make me see.

It wasn't my fault,
I didn't do anything wrong.
I just wanted you to stay forever,
You had already stayed for so long.

I'm still missing you,
Even on this very day.
My heart is still hurting,
So there is still things I've yet to say.

I wish you could've stayed,
I wish you didn't go.
Please don't make me,
Hit my all time low.

You make me scream,
You make me cry.
I only wish now,
That I didn't have to say goodbye.

Written By:
Extraordinary_Machine

So what do you think??

[♫Extraordinary_Machine♫]

Any comments? Good or bad, I don't care.

[Faceless|Child]

I liked it.

[G.J]

Snaps for you! I loved it!

However 7th stanza, first line. Spelling error, first word. You typed Is and I think you meant to put I. ;)

Is wish you could've stayed,
I wish you didn't go.
Please don't make me,
Hit my all time low.

[♫Extraordinary_Machine♫]

I liked it.
Thank you!

Snaps for you! I loved it!

However 7th stanza, first line. Spelling error, first word. You typed Is and I think you meant to put I. ;)

Oops! My bad! I changed it! Thank you =]]

[G.J]

Oops! My bad! I changed it! Thank you =]]
Your welcome! :D