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Suvet
09-10-2008, 01:43 AM
A few random character ideas or story ideas...i have...yeah
The boy and Eve are for a different story than the rest.

The boy
The boy is in a comatose sleep in a hospital somewhere. He always has been sick and overly worried about. He meets a familiar person in his "dream.." he meets Eve.

Eve
A feminine boy who is crippled and couldn't walk since birth. Creating his own world where he could walk he met the boy. They share similar views on the world but hope for different outcomes....These thoughts have morphed Eve's world into a world of their dreams...together they meet and together they fall...

Eli
A boy of 17, a self made insanity came over him. Wanting himself to be something he is not, creating alter-egos to live by. His alter egos are supposed to show him who he really is without actually proving the inevitable; Eli's insanity is not fake...

Kia
The person Eli always dreamed of as a child. A protector, a best friend, a lover. He is always there for him like his shadow. Are Kia's feelings for Eli as real as his sanity or is this just one giant hallucination...

Gray
Created after Eli's grandmother passed away, an elderly woman who looks very youthful. "Age is in the mind, not on the body," She always says. She has a sense of humor to keep Eli happy, but sometimes that takes him to a place he doesn't want to go...his past.

Matthew
Eli's father. In Eli's mind, Matthew has treated him badly but in reality he just shows his love. Eli insists that he was treated badly to make his "self made insanity" and to cast himself into that world where he judges himself. Matthew, had an affair with another woman than his mother, and that he witnessed everything that went on....is this true or just another one of Eli's hallucinations...

Elder
Eli's older brother. The only one that understood Eli as a child. He never cared about Eli, and abused him quite frequently until Eli started to abuse himslef after his brother died. In reality, these instances happened and may have caused the trauma for Eli.

The girl....
The mysterious voice in Eli's head. She doesn't get a physical form or a huge role but she is supposed to be the feminine aspect of Eli. She sometimes voices her ideas and thoughts through Eli...leaving people confused and worried about him. She can be sadistic at times, or completely innocent but her mood relies upon Eli's. She is the only one that knows about Eli's past.

shewholuvesGaara
09-10-2008, 02:54 AM
Wow...
Just wow.
I really love this and would love it if you make these. Both of them.

If you have the writing talent to keep up with these characters, that is. I would probably still read it anyway.

-Applauds-
Great character work.

Suvet
09-10-2008, 02:59 AM
Wow. That is very flattering. I still don't believe I am that great but hey, thankies.
I hopefully will keep writing this. :]]

shewholuvesGaara
09-10-2008, 03:06 AM
Good. Keep on writing and you'll get even awesomer :3
Send the writing to me when you're done with a section. I need something good to read once in a while. And this just seems like just the thing I would want ^^

SiriuslyRemus
09-10-2008, 05:42 AM
I agree with Gaara. These charecters are very interesting, you've got talent.

Suvet
09-12-2008, 09:49 PM
All of you are very sweet.

Sad Eyes
09-13-2008, 12:44 AM
Hm...May I be the girl or Kia...I can't choose....?

Suvet
09-13-2008, 12:46 AM
The girl most definitely. I have to think about the Kia one though...its complicated. Do you have any questions about them?? :]]

Sad Eyes
09-13-2008, 12:47 AM
M'kay I'll play the girl...no need for me to play two. ^^ . I must say they have an AWESOME concept behind them...a little freaky but in the end awesome.

Suvet
09-13-2008, 12:49 AM
Wow that makes me so happy to hear that. Well I will play Eli, and we will obviously need more people. :]] Thankies though ^.^

Sad Eyes
09-13-2008, 12:51 AM
Your welcome. ^_^ . You should start advertising if you need more people. And maybe get pictures for the characters if you don't have any. I could help if you wanted them handrawn but I only draw Manga style.

fireangel2405
09-13-2008, 12:55 AM
That is really good.

Suvet
09-13-2008, 01:00 AM
Thankies, would you like to roleplay as one of the characters, besides Eli and The Girl...

scorpio grl
09-13-2008, 05:49 AM
>> *Coughs* I absolutely love this plot.... MayIpleasepleasepleasepleaseplaysomeone? *Huge eyes*

Suvet
09-13-2008, 04:13 PM
((Yeah you definitely can. Who would you like, everyone but The Girl, Eli, and Kia are available.))

fireangel2405
09-13-2008, 05:05 PM
Can i play Kia?

Suvet
09-13-2008, 05:59 PM
Kia is dificult to...eh...I need to get to know you before I give the character away. I am sorry.

fireangel2405
09-13-2008, 06:01 PM
how is she dificult. not to be mean or anything but Kia is sorta like me but if you want me to play someone else i will.

Suvet
09-13-2008, 06:04 PM
Kia's a guy. But I created Kia a long time ago, he means a lot to me. I am scared someone might (no offense) ruin him or change him badly. You can be anyone other than Eli, kia, and the girl for now...let me get to know you first. k? Sorry

fireangel2405
09-13-2008, 06:12 PM
it's ok. well i can relate to Kia exept for that he is a guy because one of my best firends in accualy like Eli. i've tried to help him time and time but nothing worked so i just let him be the way he is but i'm still friends with him. although i don't know what to tell you so what do you need to know?

Suvet
09-13-2008, 06:49 PM
Just how well you can rp, if you plan on doing this for a while, and if you can rp as Kia...so far I can see that you can.

fireangel2405
09-13-2008, 09:02 PM
yeah. i always do rps as long as i can until i can't think of anything else witch is very rare for me.

scorpio grl
09-14-2008, 04:30 AM
Ha ha, yaye~ And I would not mind rping anyone at all--just give me someone no one wants, and I shall be fine. ^^ I honestly just want to participate in a well-done rp.

Suvet
09-14-2008, 11:42 PM
Well Scorpio girl, you can be Gray. She is pretty amazing. Any questions let me know.
Fireangel, you can be Kia *sighs* I trust you. Hehe.
Thankies so much everyone.

haseo592
09-14-2008, 11:47 PM
Wow. All the characters sound amazing. You've got some really good characters.

Suvet
09-14-2008, 11:57 PM
You are too sweet, thankies though :]]

fireangel2405
09-15-2008, 12:17 AM
Thank you.

Suvet
09-15-2008, 12:22 AM
Just a few more people and we can try to start this odd psychological fantasy :]]

fireangel2405
09-15-2008, 12:23 AM
alright. i'll ask some people. how many do we need?

Suvet
09-15-2008, 12:25 AM
Well we have Eli, Kia, Gray, The Girl, and we need the father(Matthew), and the brother (Elder). i would appreciate it if you helped ^.^ THankies

fireangel2405
09-15-2008, 12:26 AM
no problem. i'll start asking.

haseo592
09-15-2008, 01:48 AM
What all characters are open?

Suvet
09-15-2008, 02:08 AM
Matthew and Elder are the only ones unless you wish to play as someone new, maybe Eli's counselor. Up to you?

Suvet
09-23-2008, 04:35 AM
Is anyone still interested in this?? ://

scorpio grl
09-23-2008, 04:36 AM
Meee... *Raises hand, using you as pillow*

Suvet
09-23-2008, 04:41 AM
Then we should get everyone set up. We have Eli (me) and we have Gray (you). We need to get the people who called the other ones, set up now.
Thankies again for agreeing to play Gray.

scorpio grl
09-23-2008, 04:42 AM
OK, and no problemo--but can we please, please do it tomorrow? I'm seriously about to crash so hard; I'm exhausted. 8[

Suvet
09-23-2008, 04:43 AM
Oh definitely.. I need sleep too. So, we shall start this tomorrow...yay!! *sighs*

Sad Eyes
09-23-2008, 08:52 PM
((What about me?))

Suvet
09-23-2008, 09:22 PM
Good now we have "the girl" thankies for remembering.

Sad Eyes
09-23-2008, 09:27 PM
((I'm known for memory. ^^;; ))

fireangel2405
09-24-2008, 01:14 AM
i'm still here.

Suvet
09-24-2008, 01:15 AM
YAY! Good. We shall start either later tonight or tomorrow.

fireangel2405
09-24-2008, 01:17 AM
tomarrow. i am about to leave.

Suvet
11-09-2009, 06:29 PM
Anyone still interested? ://