View Full Version : Pleasure for you and a bullet for me (first poem i've written in a while it migt suck
you're not what i expected.
you deceived, and made me cry.
the worst is i don't know why.
you whispered sweet nothings in my ear.
you even offered me beer.
it took a while for me to understand.
you never wanted me in the first place.
i walked to your house the next day.
i wanted to se if you were going to play.
i walked into your room, and saw to my horror.
you were doing the naughty with my best friend.
i ran straight home, put a bullet proof vest on, and shot my self in the head.
looks like thats the end for me.
but you're not done.
it's always new girls but the same pain.
its always pleasure for you, and a bullet for me.
Blade Master
09-15-2008, 06:46 PM
wow that is really good and sad at the same time
it really reminds me of myself to {i think you already know why}
Suvet
09-15-2008, 06:52 PM
That was so well done. I just love the meaning behind it, it sparks so much emotion and feeling.
ok thanks i thought it would suck.
Blade Master
09-15-2008, 08:11 PM
how did you get the idea for it
my girlfriend broke up with me about a week ago.
Blade Master
09-15-2008, 08:51 PM
oh sorry
did she cheat on you or what
yeah, and after i found out i beat the **** out of the guy she was cheating with then she broke up with me.
Blade Master
09-15-2008, 08:57 PM
hope his mother doesn't recognize him now
i put him in the hospital, and they had to re build his face and his bones and stuff.
Faceless|Child
09-15-2008, 09:06 PM
.... Wow, you're more aggressive than me, and thats saying alot! I loved the poem, seems like when I couldnt write you did... YOU STOLE MY WRITERS MAGIC!! HOW DARE YOU!! Anyway.... Very nice.
Blade Master
09-15-2008, 09:07 PM
nice job on breaking his face in dude
thanks....i almost killed him because i curb stomped him 5 times on the fifth time i heard bones cracking
Blade Master
09-16-2008, 08:40 PM
good, very good
Autumn_Dawn93
09-16-2008, 09:50 PM
you're not what i expected.
you deceived, and made me cry.
the worst is i don't know why.
you whispered sweet nothings in my ear.
you even offered me beer.
it took a while for me to understand.
you never wanted me in the first place.
i walked to your house the next day.
i wanted to se if you were going to play.
i walked into your room, and saw to my horror.
you were doing the naughty with my best friend.
i ran straight home, put a bullet proof vest on, and shot my self in the head.
looks like thats the end for me.
but you're not done.
it's always new girls but the same pain.
its always pleasure for you, and a bullet for me.
Gosh, that poem broke my heart, it's really deep
good, very good
lmfao
Gosh, that poem broke my heart, it's really deep
thanks srry it broke your heart
Blade Master
09-18-2008, 01:58 AM
imfao???????
Autumn_Dawn93
09-18-2008, 02:11 AM
LMFAO= Laughing my ****ing ass off
Blade Master
09-18-2008, 02:14 AM
ah i got ya thanks
yep.....i'm thinking of posting another poem on here but i'm not sure about that one >.<
Blade Master
09-18-2008, 12:40 PM
i want to hear it i won't judge i suck at poems
okay blade i'll put it on tomorrow seeing as i forgot my bag in my moms car >.<