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::BlAcK~hEaRt::
10-05-2008, 09:00 PM
I stood infront of the gates of Konoha.They towered above me,and I couldn't help but observe the symbols painted on them.I thought them sort of 'pretty',if you will.I was here,with my two teammates,for the Chunin Exams.They were determined,but I was unemotional.I was going to move up to Chunin,there was no doubt about that.
Let me take this time to explain mayself.I am Aika.I am a demon.No,not a demon holder,but an actual demon!I have been the outcast of my village,The Village Hidden in the Storms, since I was born,and I feel no shame.I feel nothing.Emotions are a weakness,and I perfer to have no weaknesses whatsoever.
My teammates, Raiden and Ryuu,are twins.They come from the Amami clan,a clan that deals with lightning,and thunder. Raiden is thunder,and Ryuu is lightning,in a sence that is.Raiden is quick and agile,and loves to show off;whereas Ryuu is loud and obnoxious,and loves to show off as well. They come very close to my killing them almost everyday, but I don not,as I do need them to enter the exams...stupid rules...
Our sensei,Hotaru,is pretty much like the twins,only combined.She acts just like a little kid!I sincerely hate this squad...
"Aika!Pay attention!"Hotaru called from her spot near the gates."We're going in now!"
I just nodded,growling a little.She instantly backed away and went back to her buisiness.I casually followed my team inside the village,sending angry glares at the people guarding the gate.I scared most people,including my own family.This was only because of my powers,and,I think,my looks.
I paid no attention to the strange looks that I was getting as I walked passed the villagers.They were all shocked that something like me could exist.
You see,I have snow-white hair that goes down to my shoulders.The tips of it are black.My eyes are a scary onyx black color,and most people think it's because of my demonic heritage.I am around 5-foot-tall,and am sort of thin.The most defining thing about me though,was not my hair,nor my eyes.Not even my body build.It was the large bat-like wings that extended from my back.Most people would just sit and stare at them,as if afraid to blink.
I followed Ryuu and Raiden through the village,noticing that Hotaru had gone off to notify someone that we had arrived.Up ahead I noticed a small gathering of people.There was a spikey-haired blonde boy yelling at a guy in a cat-like suit that was holding a small boy by the shirt.A pink-haired girl was standing near the blonde,also trying to get the cat-man to put the small boy down.I then noticed an older-looking blonde girl with her hair in pigtails.And just as cat-man was about to hit the small boy,a rock was thrown at his hand.I glanced over in the direction that it had come from,and spotted a raven-haired boy.Upon closer inspection,I could tell he was an Uchiha.
Seeing as I couldn't care less,I walked passed my teammates,who'd stopped,and past the small group.Most of them held shocked expressions when they saw me,but I just glared at them.
"It's not polite to stare."I said quietly,but loud enough for them to hear.
The blonde boy snapped out of it first."Hey!You have wings!"he shouted,pointing at my wings.
"Yeah,what of it?"I asked angrilly,glaring at him.
He instanly backed away."N-nothing..."he said shakily.
"That's what I thought.Raiden,Ryuu,Come on!"I called,and the twins ran up next to me.I turned to walk away,and they followed suit,when I spotted a red-headed boy,with the kanji for 'love' tattooed on his forhead,hanging upside-down from a treebranch.

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This is the end of Chapter one.I will include a picture of Aika,Raiden,and Ryuu in the next chapter.Feedback would be nice!

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
10-17-2008, 11:43 PM
Oh come on!I couldn't be that bad,could it?

myhorses1011
10-17-2008, 11:49 PM
I think its very very good. Make more! :3

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
10-17-2008, 11:56 PM
^^ Thankies!

I'll get the next part up soon.

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
10-18-2008, 09:15 PM
::Forgot to mention in the last chapter,but there will be mild swearing in this story::
(Want a recap?GO AND READ THE LAST CHAPTER!^^ Anywho,this story will follow the plotline of the English dub[and some of the original Japanese] anime,with things of my own creation added in.I would go with the original,but I can't find any episodes online that had English subtitles,so...yeah...ENJOY!)

I stopped in mid-step,looking up at the boy.Raising a brow,I studied him.He had an evil look in his eye,in my opinion,and it seemed as though he was quite powerful.I wanted to ask him his name,but refrained.I mean,what would a powerful demon girl,asking a guy his name,look like?Pathetic.And it would ruin my reputation.Wouldn't want that...
As if I wasn't even there,he looked to the blonde girl,and the Kat man,who's name I'd heard was Kankuro when the blond girl had spoken.
"You're an embarrasement to our village.Have you forgotten the reason we came all the way here?"he said.
The Kankuro spoke next;" I-i know,I-i mean,they challenged us.They started the whole thing really."he said with an nervous laugh."S-see,here's what happened-"He was interrupted by the red head.
"Shut up."the redhead said,glaring at Kankuro."Or I'll kill you."
By this time,I was leaning against the fence on the left,smirking slightly in amusement.
Kankuro spoke again."Uh...right.I was totally out of line...I'm sorry Gaara,I was totally out of line..."
'So,'I thought,'Gaara is his name....where have I heard that name before...?' I knew I'd heard it somewhere before...I just couldn't place the memory!
Gaara turned to look at the Konoha genin,and my team."I'm sorry for any trouble he caused."he said,before turning into sand,and appearing on the ground.
Ryuu and Raiden went wide-eyed.Ryuu's gold eyes sparkled in amazement,and Raiden's blue ones showed respect for the Suna ninja,Gaara.I scoffed,almost silently,rolling my eyes."Show-off..."I muttered to myself.
Gaara faced Kankuro man,and the blonde girl."Let's go.We didn't come here to play games."
"A-alright.Sure."Kankuro said,as he and the blonde girl turned to walk away.
Then,the pink-haired girl stepped foreward."Hold on.Hey!"she called.
Without turning,the blonde girl replied."What?"
"I can tell from your headband that you come from the Village Hidden in the Sand."Pinky said."Of course the Land of Fire and the Land of Wind are allies,but no shinobi can enter another's village without permission."she then took afew more steps toward them."So state your purpose,and it better be good."
The three Suna shinobi then turned to face her."Really?Have you guys all been living under a rock or what?"the blonde one spoke."You don't know what's going on,do you?"she then held up her passport."We have permission.Of course,you're correct.We are Hidden Sand genin.Our home is the land of the wind,and we've come here for the Chunin Exam.Get the picture?"
Of course,I'd already known their purpose in being here.It was the same as mine.After this,I'd tuned them out,trying to think of where I'd heard the name,Gaara,before.
After a moment,I was brought out of my thoughts when the Uchiha aske Gaara to identify himself.
"You!Identify yourself."the Uchiha said,pointing at Gaara.Of course,the blonde girl had thought he was talking to her.
"Who,you mean me?"she asked,pointing to herself.
"No,him.The the guy with the gourd on his back."he responded.
Gaara turned to face him."My name is Gaara of the Desert."he said."I'm curious about you too.Who are you?"
The Uchiha smirked."I am Sasuke Uchiha."
After that,everyone was silent,and I was actually considering breaking the silence myself.Hell,even Raiden and Ryuu were quiet!It's nearly impossible to get them to shut up!
Suddenly,the blond boy grinned,pointing at himself."Hi there.I bet your dieing to know my name,right?!"
"I couldn't care less."Gaara said.He then turned to face me."Who are you?"
Secretly,I was actually happy to finally be aknowledged,but I hid it well,behind an emotionless face,as usual."I am Aika."I responded.
He nodded,and all three Suna shinobi turned and left.
I then turned to my teammates,and nodded slightly,signalling that it was time to go.They turned and waved at the Konoha shinobi,then we jumped away,toward the Hokage's building,where we were supposed to meet Hotaru-sensei.Then,I realised where I'd heard of Gaara.Gaara of the Desert,the one that held the one-tailed Raccoon dog.The holder of Shukaku.

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As I promised,piccys of Aika,Raiden,and Ryuu!
Aika:
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc288/thekahonaninja/Edits/2007-06-21-60093.jpg

Raiden and Ryuu:
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc288/thekahonaninja/Edits/animetwin15.jpg
(Raiden is the one with blue eyes,and Ryuu is the one with the golden colored ones.)