Phauxy's Poetry Palace

[Phaux Phantasmagoria]

Yes yes my children that is right! Phauxy is going to have himself here a little poetry palace of sorts. Here I will write/make up as I go poetry I have on the brain and it is your job as my faithful readers to critique me!

Here are two poems for your reading pleasure~

In The Middle of the Night (http://allpoetry.com/poem/4517689)

Whispers (http://allpoetry.com/poem/5155205)

So please tell me what you think!

[queen-of-meadow-lands]

Those were great!

[Phaux Phantasmagoria]

Well thankies, Queenie! Im glad you enjoyed them Ill be sure to write more then ^_^

[Phaux Phantasmagoria]

Well no new ones so far but it's so early! Im hoping to update once a week at the least, but here's a little something for you:

Not the same
Song and dance
This may be lame
But I must give it a chance

XD Thanks to any critique in advance

[queen-of-meadow-lands]

That's funny Phauxy. And your first poem is so true, the computer is addicting and you can't draw yourself away from it.

[Kovue]

idk why, but i liked the second poem better. It just kinda stuck to me. But they are all good!


<3, Kovue