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Caine-Ghest128
04-06-2009, 01:13 PM
So this is how my life will end.
Fighting for the thing that few can mend.
I am but a man without a home.
As I watch you groan.
This life you have must be so hard.
You have the things like that yard.
While I am little more than lonesome wanderer.
You dream of traveling yonder.
To worlds of trees and seas.
I am stuck here fighting disease.
Yet it is hardly fatal to most.
To that why don't you raise a toast.
My sickness is jealousy and rage.
I watch my one love in that cage.
You call her your wife.
I call her my whole life.
So As I watch what should have been mine.
You just see something that used to shine.
So enjoy my last few words.
As they hook me to these cords.
I still watch your hate.
While you see me at Hell's Gate.
So with my last farewell.
I can't wait to see you in Hell.




This is just something I wrote awhile back.

White Horse
04-06-2009, 02:18 PM
It's not bad. A little bit confusing and to many periods, but other than that, it wasn't bad. :3