premiumdancer
05-13-2009, 01:22 AM
Sorry for repeatedly bringing all these bad vibes into the Creative Corner, but here's another poem. Any interpretations, comments, criticism, whatever are welcome! :D
"Something Else"
A dark shade of secrets--
unbearable silence.
A misunderstanding blown
to poison her heart,
stoke those voices,
never satisfied.
He wanted her long ago--
Then senses returned
and the mirror and the photographs
all seemed to ring true.
He was a human,
she was something else.
His life carried a resilient charm,
hers a bitter endlessness.
He was beloved,
she was--
an unspeakable thing
with a sense of justice,
a tolerable smile,
but no other attractions to speak of--
something else.
"Something Else"
A dark shade of secrets--
unbearable silence.
A misunderstanding blown
to poison her heart,
stoke those voices,
never satisfied.
He wanted her long ago--
Then senses returned
and the mirror and the photographs
all seemed to ring true.
He was a human,
she was something else.
His life carried a resilient charm,
hers a bitter endlessness.
He was beloved,
she was--
an unspeakable thing
with a sense of justice,
a tolerable smile,
but no other attractions to speak of--
something else.