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::BlAcK~hEaRt::
07-25-2009, 11:31 PM
This thread is for the sole purpose of me posting my poetry. You may give feedback if you want, but I don't want any theft of anything. I may post pictures, too, but I probably won't own any of them, unless I say otherwise.

-Currently Unnamed-
Standing on the edge, looking at the ground so far below,
This life has been hard.
I want it to end here.

No more pain,
No more suffering.

Smiling sadly, I sigh, afraid of what would happen if I fail.

People would be mad; people would be worried.
I would be hospitalized and then thrown into a mental facility.
I don't want that to happen to me.

So, I have to succeed.
I have to be sure that I don't wake up.
Make sure that people won't be angry.

Now I close my eyes, and I jump.

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
07-26-2009, 12:54 AM
-Insanity-

Who's to say that I'm not crazy?
I do believe this is the case.
As long as these men,
With their big, white, coats,
Decide to remain,
I was, I am, and shall forever be,
Insane.

ninja_panda
07-26-2009, 09:18 AM
Wow.. The second one is very deep.. Nice job.

Moon009
07-27-2009, 12:43 AM
I love them both. Especially the first one because that's how I felt when I first thought of wanting to commit suicide. I was scared because if I tried and failed, my mother would be said, my dad would be mad, and then I'd hate myself for being selfish enough to try to kill myself when they cared so much.

::BlAcK~hEaRt::
11-13-2009, 08:38 PM
Bah...didn't feel like making another thread for such a short poem.
*revives*

Happiness in Heartbreak

Complicated, over-rated, and out of style.
Love is as intangible as an idea;
There, but not enough to touch.

So, when people say that they’re
“In love”,
They’re really
In a world of lies.

Love isn’t something you can depend on,
Love is not something you can see.
But, you can bet that it hurts.
It never turns out all right in the end.

Constant pains of the heart,
Constant emotional distress.
It’s enough to make someone feel worthless.

So, I will stand tall,
Proud,
Broken,
Unloved,
Happy.