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Your little Whisper
09-29-2009, 02:33 AM
In another world, filled with goals, and demons, and sprites, there lived a small kingdom of humans. This kingdom though had an evil prince and an even more even lord who killed any one who was though to go against them. There was a teacher though who taught then young prince many, many things, and despite his argents and rudeness this young prince came to respect her. But the woman also had a daughter who lived with her out side the palace not once meeting the prince or lord but hearing of there horrible will from her mother. Now the sun was not even but simple was cold and had very little to no patience for any kind of foolishness or anything close to it or anything that might even kind of be seen as it. It would surprise any one how easily he got mad or and got some one in trouble. Now he kept himself calm but he did tend to yell at least once a day at some one.
Well one day the teacher was brought in falsie accused for betraying her lord to the elves. Her daughter was meant to come to the trial and when she came she watched as her mother became closer and closer to death. But then the young prince of 18 arrived and kept her from being killed, but she would have to part with the most meaningful thing to her, and like that her Daughter Alure became a slave in the kings home. What will happen? will her soft heart and qu9it voice soffin the young prince in time?... please help me know
now please know i am new and have some grammar and spelling problems.. but I love to write and I will always answer.
Your little Whisper
09-29-2009, 01:45 PM
any one?.....
Melody Hall
09-29-2009, 01:50 PM
any one?.....
{I like it. I would like to join as the mother if that is ok and if you want me to I can be the young prince as well. Is anime pictures ok?}
Your little Whisper
09-29-2009, 02:51 PM
can you play both please?..because the mother wont be there long she will have to leave
Melody Hall
09-29-2009, 06:12 PM
{um ok. Can you make a template}
Your little Whisper
09-29-2009, 07:07 PM
Name:
age:
Looks:
Peronality:
Role:
there we go
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 01:24 PM
so will you be making your two people?
Melody Hall
09-30-2009, 01:29 PM
Name:
Melody
age:
29
Looks:
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h143/crystal_heart_blue/fate%20stay%20night/rider/096868.jpg
Peronality:
Sweet, kind and caring
Role:
Mother
Name:
Yuki
age:
19
Looks:
http://i559.photobucket.com/albums/ss33/animeamber1/byakuya6.png
Peronality:
Misunderstood
Role:
Prince
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 02:36 PM
Name: Alure
Age:17
Personality: soft quite, she stands up for herself if she needs too.
Looks: she has very thick golden brown hair which she keeps in ponytai, hard-sih skin. golden eyes, som,e fricalls(im not sure how to spell tht) and she startnds at 5.2...
Would you like to start or shall i?
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 06:03 PM
hello?....are you there?
Melody Hall
09-30-2009, 06:25 PM
hello?....are you there?
I thought you were offline. I am sorry. could you start us off?
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 07:10 PM
ok just a momment please..
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 07:14 PM
Alure stands quietly at the main hall like she was told too. Being pulled from her mother was the most horrible thing to have ever happened to her but at least it was that and not her mother death. She could not only see her once a month at the very most and she might not even see her at all. For now Alure stands awaiting the prince too talk with her about her knew role as a slave. She kept her face calm even though her heart was pounding with fear and sadness and anger.
Melody Hall
09-30-2009, 08:01 PM
Yuki had watched as the girl stood before him. He could easily see what she was feeling by looking into her eyes but he didn't care. He had what he wanted. Yuki had walked up to Alure and said" What is your name?" His voice was cold and deep. His eyes should no emotion what so ever.
Your little Whisper
09-30-2009, 08:26 PM
"..I am Alure your magesty.." She says softly not looking him in the eyes but just past him, she would never look at him head on. She did not have the guts to look into his eyes.
Your little Whisper
10-01-2009, 05:34 PM
{{ are you there?}}
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 12:07 AM
{{ are you there?}}
{{sorry for not replying sooner}}
Yuki had walked over to her and cupped her chin. He had said making her looking him in the eyes. He had said" you respect me. That is good" Yuki had stared down at her for a few minutes more before he pulled away from her. He had said" you will do only as i insturct you. You belong to me and me alone. No one may touch you without my permission is that understood?"
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 12:10 AM
{{ its ok}}
He seemed cold and un-caring even though her mother taught him. But it was not so shocking. her mother had taught her along about the prince. the thought of never bing aloud to be touched unlesss he said so annoyed her a little though, She says softly her eyes gazing down at the floor.
"not even my mother?"
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 12:14 AM
{{ its ok}}
He seemed cold and un-caring even though her mother taught him. But it was not so shocking. her mother had taught her along about the prince. the thought of never bing aloud to be touched unlesss he said so annoyed her a little though, She says softly her eyes gazing down at the floor.
"not even my mother?"
{{ok.. I will try my hardest to reply as soon as possible. I hope I didn't make you think I didn't want to roleplay with you}}
Yuki had walked towards his bedroom and motion for her to follow him. He had said coldly" not unless I give you permission" He knew that he was being cruel to the young girl but he had to show her no mercy. She was to be treated like any other servant he had. Yuki had his back to her and said" how old are you?"
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 12:18 AM
She sighs annoyed with this and slowly starts to follow him She did not even have to do anything and yet here she was, a slave for a very cold prinec...but, it was better than her mothers death...
"15.." she lies calmly following him her eyes kept down on the ground.
sailorx161
10-02-2009, 12:19 AM
now please know i am new and have some grammar and spelling problems.. but I love to write and I will always answer.
(same here .....so cani join)
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 12:21 AM
((im sorry its a one on one..}}
sailorx161
10-02-2009, 12:22 AM
(sorry...........)
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 02:25 AM
She sighs annoyed with this and slowly starts to follow him She did not even have to do anything and yet here she was, a slave for a very cold prinec...but, it was better than her mothers death...
"15.." she lies calmly following him her eyes kept down on the ground.
Yuki had stop walking and glared down at her. He knew that she was lying because her mother talked about her none stop. He had walked up to her and said" you're lying. Need I tell you what happens to servants that lie to there masters?"
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 05:00 AM
She feels her heart sink and thinking about the punishmeant..
"they..get..there tongue's choped off.." she whispers lightly twiches a brow at the thought of it and lightly places a hand on her mouth her eyes trailing down.
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 06:07 AM
She feels her heart sink and thinking about the punishmeant..
"they..get..there tongue's choped off.." she whispers lightly twiches a brow at the thought of it and lightly places a hand on her mouth her eyes trailing down.
Yuki had said coldly" I see we have an understanding. Now I will ask you agian and this time I expect you to be honest with me. That is if you like having the abilty to use your tongue."
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 01:26 PM
She gives a small nod happy he was not crule enough to not just have it done then and there. Now she just waists quitly for him to ask once again.
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 06:28 PM
She gives a small nod happy he was not crule enough to not just have it done then and there. Now she just waists quitly for him to ask once again.
Yuki had said in his cold voice" How old are you?" His warm breath blew agaist her soft skin. He didn't care if she was his teacher's daughter. She was his servant and she needed to learn to respect him.
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 06:43 PM
" I am 17" she says quietly ehr eyes down. in about a month she would be 18. Her mother always cared more than she did but it almost hurt knowing now it would not matter.
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 06:48 PM
" I am 17" she says quietly ehr eyes down. in about a month she would be 18. Her mother always cared more than she did but it almost hurt knowing now it would not matter.
Yuki had eyed the girl up and down and shoke his head. He had said" shame.. you're to young... follow me" Yuki had lead her up a long flight of stairs and towards his bedroom. He had said" from now on you will sleep here with me. Is that understood?"
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 07:07 PM
"......with you?..and..too young for what??" she asks almost not wanting to know.
Melody Hall
10-02-2009, 07:15 PM
"......with you?..and..too young for what??" she asks almost not wanting to know.
Yuki had said" it's nothing" He had began showing her around his room. He showed her where she was to sleep. There was a small bed beside his. He also showed her where her clothing would be and where she was to bath.
Your little Whisper
10-02-2009, 07:17 PM
She ignores what he had said and simple asks again...
"....but..why am i to young?...what am i to young for?" she asks wanting to know badly.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 03:35 AM
((uh....hello?))
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 03:44 AM
((...i feel un loved T,T))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 03:50 AM
Yuki had looked at the girl and said" I don't sleep with girls younger then myself." He had turned around and said" shame really. You are a beautiful girl. You might even be good"
(why?)
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 03:57 AM
((because you were gone for two days><))
she slightly glares at him..
"i can asure you...i would not be good because not only am i do not go around looking for that kind of fun to free my time and not only that but i would fully refuse under any punishment.." she says folding her arms.
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 04:15 AM
((because you were gone for two days><))
she slightly glares at him..
"i can asure you...i would not be good because not only am i do not go around looking for that kind of fun to free my time and not only that but i would fully refuse under any punishment.." she says folding her arms.
{sorry hun. I work sadly and When I come home I check dw but go to bed.}
Yuki had stared at the girl and couldn't help but laugh at her. He had said" and what makes you think sleeping with me would be your punsinment? It would be a honor to bed with me"
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 04:22 AM
"..maybe for you.. not for me, ide rather take the dungeon.." she says giving him a small glare. This prince seemed quit vain...
((yea i understand..))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 04:30 AM
"..maybe for you.. not for me, ide rather take the dungeon.." she says giving him a small glare. This prince seemed quit vain...
((yea i understand..))
Yuki had said" that could be aranged" Yuki had pulled the blinds closed and said" you're daily dutties will be to maintain the cleanness of my room. If it is to my dissatifaction in anyway. You will be serverly punshined. Is that understood"
(I am sorry)
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 04:35 AM
(( its not you... i just have problems><))
"...yes.." she says softly thinking of what the punishments might be.
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 04:37 AM
(( its not you... i just have problems><))
"...yes.." she says softly thinking of what the punishments might be.
{like what?}
Yuki had walked over to his bed and began to disrobe. He had said" amoung you dutties you will wake at the break of dawn where you will go down to the kitchen and prepare breakfast for me."
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 04:48 AM
"..how will i wake up?... i.. normally dont wake up for hours later.. i dont know if i can force myself awake.." she says softly glancing at the window.
(( i dont know..>< but im sure their there..))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 04:50 AM
"..how will i wake up?... i.. normally dont wake up for hours later.. i dont know if i can force myself awake.." she says softly glancing at the window.
(( i dont know..>< but im sure their there..))
Yuki had laid in his bed and said" that is not my problem. All I know is you better find a way or else"
(don't beat yourself down like that}
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 04:53 AM
(( im nnnoootttt><...))
She looks at the small bed next to his and asks quietly..
"..does..that mean i can sleep?.."
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 05:06 AM
(( im nnnoootttt><...))
She looks at the small bed next to his and asks quietly..
"..does..that mean i can sleep?.."
(yes you arreeeee!}
Yuki had said" you can aslong as you wake on time!" Yuki had rolled over to his side and began to close his eyes.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 05:16 AM
((lies!!>< all lies!!))
She sighs and lays down and just stairs into the darkness. she does not even bother to pull the covers on her, there too small for them to even do anything for her even though it was a little cold. She frowns a little and wishes to just fall asleep and wake up it all a horrible dream. But its not... its real and she is stuck in it. She end up not even falling asleep. All the horrible thoghts of never seeing her mother again and the punishments that were sure to come kept her awake the whole time.
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 05:20 AM
((lies!!>< all lies!!))
She sighs and lays down and just stairs into the darkness. she does not even bother to pull the covers on her, there too small for them to even do anything for her even though it was a little cold. She frowns a little and wishes to just fall asleep and wake up it all a horrible dream. But its not... its real and she is stuck in it. She end up not even falling asleep. All the horrible thoghts of never seeing her mother again and the punishments that were sure to come kept her awake the whole time.
(no agruing with your elders!)
Yuki had soon fell into a peacefull sleep. He had never been one to worry or have problems sleeping. He rolled over in his sleep and lightly mubbled in his sleep.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 05:26 AM
(( your not that older><))
She sits up when she sees the sun barly coming over the hills and feels like crying thinking of sleepless night she had. She says and weekly stands too her feet feeling sore right away. She leaves his room lightly closing the door behind her then thought of something horrible...she has no idea where the Kitchen was... she had never been in the castle before.
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 05:37 AM
(( your not that older><))
She sits up when she sees the sun barly coming over the hills and feels like crying thinking of sleepless night she had. She says and weekly stands too her feet feeling sore right away. She leaves his room lightly closing the door behind her then thought of something horrible...she has no idea where the Kitchen was... she had never been in the castle before.
(want to bet?)
Yuki open one eye as heard the door close. He had sat up and smiled as she left his room. It would appear the girl did wake up on time. He had stood up and walked towards the door. He had wonder how she would do finding the kitchen on her own.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 05:42 AM
She sighs and leans against the wall next to the door lightly places a hand on her face. She feels her lip lightly twitch as she almost started to cry right there but she forces it away, her mother did tell her to be brave, and she will still be able to see her in a month. Unless the prince said otherwise..
((yesh!!><))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 05:44 AM
She sighs and leans against the wall next to the door lightly places a hand on her face. She feels her lip lightly twitch as she almost started to cry right there but she forces it away, her mother did tell her to be brave, and she will still be able to see her in a month. Unless the prince said otherwise..
((yesh!!><))
Yuki had followed after the girl. He watched as the girl almost began to cry. He didn't understand this but then again he wasn't trying to. He had watched as she lean against the door and didn't say anything.
(ok sweetie. Tell me you age and I will tell you mine. I will tell you the truth. I promise)
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 05:52 AM
(( tehe..your 19 and im 17^^))
She takes a breath and rubs her eyes and whispers...
"... im sure no sleep is going to help me....of course.." she sighs and whispers staying at the ground..
"the rude heartless new ruler of mine certainly helps....alot.." she whispers referring to he helps with the pain and the tiredness she had.
((im going to bed real soon))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 05:59 AM
(( tehe..your 19 and im 17^^))
She takes a breath and rubs her eyes and whispers...
"... im sure no sleep is going to help me....of course.." she sighs and whispers staying at the ground..
"the rude heartless new ruler of mine certainly helps....alot.." she whispers referring to he helps with the pain and the tiredness she had.
((im going to bed real soon))
((see no respect your elders!)
Yuki had listen to the girl talk to herself. He knew he was cold hearted and he knew all of the things he had done was cold but he looked at the girl and felt a ping of gult. He had sighed and thought about allowing her to sleep in. IT wouldn't hurt right?
(ok get some rest)
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:01 AM
she takes in a quiver filled breath showing her keeping back the cry that wanted to escape her throat as she started to walk away whispering to herself..
"... i hate existing.."
((><....only by two years..and im turning 18 soon T,T))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 06:09 AM
she takes in a quiver filled breath showing her keeping back the cry that wanted to escape her throat as she started to walk away whispering to herself..
"... i hate existing.."
((><....only by two years..and im turning 18 soon T,T))
{still one year}
Yuki had walked from where he stood and said" and why is that?"
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:12 AM
She almost jumped out of her skin. Hearing his voice right behind her was NOT a good way for her to wake up. she turns slightly to him and says..
"..its.. nothing... i.. didn't really mean it..." she says softly turning from him and starting to walk off... fast...
((night!! ^,^))
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 02:33 PM
(( im back^^))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 02:36 PM
{welcome back}
Yuki had watched as she walked off and followed after slowly. He kne the girl was lying to him and if it was one thing, he didn't like being lied to. He had walked behind the girl easlily catching up with her. He had said" you're lying"
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 02:38 PM
She suddanly feels stupid, she never noticed how much she lied until now. She turns to him and says softly putting her fingers tips on her lips..
"...are..you going to have my tongue cut off?" she asks a worried look on her face
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 02:45 PM
She suddanly feels stupid, she never noticed how much she lied until now. She turns to him and says softly putting her fingers tips on her lips..
"...are..you going to have my tongue cut off?" she asks a worried look on her face
Yuki had closed his eyes and said" I won't only if you tell me the truth. Why did you say that"
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 02:49 PM
She feels her stomach tumble. Stuff like this was NOT something yuo would tell a prince. She did not want to tell him with almost EVERYTHING she had...
"....please... ide rather..noy..." she says quietly her eyes tracing down to the floor.
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 02:53 PM
She feels her stomach tumble. Stuff like this was NOT something yuo would tell a prince. She did not want to tell him with almost EVERYTHING she had...
"....please... ide rather..noy..." she says quietly her eyes tracing down to the floor.
Yuki had looked down at the girl. Why wouldn't she tell him!? This was making his blood boil. He had let out a small growl pass his lips. He had walked up to her and tower over her.
"and why not?"
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:22 PM
"...because from what i have heard...you tend to use feelings against your slaves... that and anf my most lucky you wont care... then at that case not only have i wiasted my breath but i have shared something i dont want to just for you to not care in any way.." she says looking over to the side not wanting to look him in the eye.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:28 PM
((><..im back..for now anyways..^^ its lunch..))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 06:29 PM
"...because from what i have heard...you tend to use feelings against your slaves... that and anf my most lucky you wont care... then at that case not only have i wiasted my breath but i have shared something i dont want to just for you to not care in any way.." she says looking over to the side not wanting to look him in the eye.
Yuki had said" it is true I have used my servants emotions agaist them but that is only because they deserved it. I asked you out of concern but I will not beg you to tell me what is the matter with you. If you wish do be annoying very well."
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:32 PM
".. I do.." she says simple turning from him and starting to walk away, she could feel she was crossing a line deep in the pits of her heart and she hopped not to regret this later. But, with everything she had she truly did not believe he cared for ehr than the carpat under her own feet.
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 06:46 PM
(( i like luffy things..^^))
Melody Hall
10-05-2009, 06:49 PM
{huh?}
Yuki had walked the other way. He would never understand that slave of his. He thought about beating it out of the girl but knew that would get him no where. He had sighed and punched a hole into the wall behind him
Your little Whisper
10-05-2009, 08:15 PM
She walks down to the kitchen and gets glares by all the girls. But she does not even bother looking at him but instead gets some things and starts to make the Prince his food.
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 03:44 AM
(( hello^^))
Melody Hall
10-06-2009, 03:58 AM
Yuki had walked towards the dinning hall. He watched as the servants bowed before him. He simply nodded and sat at his chair. He began to read from his book and didn't speak.
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 04:04 AM
Alure soon walks in with never before seen food by the prince. she cooked from her own home country. She places the huge arah of food in front of him and says softly..
"i dont know how to cook the food from this country... only from my land from what my mother has shown me..." she tells him.
Melody Hall
10-06-2009, 04:15 AM
Alure soon walks in with never before seen food by the prince. she cooked from her own home country. She places the huge arah of food in front of him and says softly..
"i dont know how to cook the food from this country... only from my land from what my mother has shown me..." she tells him.
Yuki had looked at the food with mild intrest. He had said" it will have to do. I will make sure that you learn how to cook properly. I will make sure another servant girl teaches you. You are to do what every she tells you"
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 04:27 AM
She kept herself from twiching. She had only been working an hour for him to now be saying 'i will have to do.' she turns from him to keep herself from doing something she would regret later and says softly..
"...ok"
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 05:33 PM
(( hello...do..you wait for me to be on for you to answer?))
Melody Hall
10-06-2009, 05:37 PM
{I try to do that but sometimes I don't}
Yuki had didn't listen to the girl. He had began to eat the food. It did taste strange but it would be ok. He had said" whatever"
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 07:06 PM
"....jerk...." she mutters before walking out. As she leaves shse cant believe she said that. She was the quite shy girl and she was aleady feeling anger.
((><.do..you think you can also try and answer when im not online..because sometimes it shows me off line when im on..))
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 07:22 PM
(( iits all rainy today T,T))
Melody Hall
10-06-2009, 07:27 PM
{please don't take this the wrong way but I try to post as fast as I can. When I see a user that I have a roleplay with I reply to them frist}
Yuki had didn't mumbbled. He said what he wanted to lound an clear for the girl to hear him" troublesome wench" He made sure this was something she had heard before he watched her walk away from him.
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 07:30 PM
(( im sorry if it seems like im bumping you..... i was just trying to make small talk..but i wont put up any more posts other than just mr rp answers...and..if you forget i wont bug you..))
She leaves and sighs leaning against a wall. What was she suppose to do now? clean? and with what? he had never shown her where the cleaning things were.
Melody Hall
10-06-2009, 07:33 PM
{I don't mind a friendly reminder because I do tend to forget things. All I ask is be a little patcient with me because I am can be a very rude person and I don't want to hurt anyone feelings}
Yuki had finshin eatting his food. He had looked at one of ther servants and said" you. I want you to show that girl how to clean my room properly." The servant had nodded and ran out the dinning hall. He had walked over to the girl and said" follow me"
Your little Whisper
10-06-2009, 08:40 PM
(( yea im sorry...and is he talking to alur or the servant girl?))
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 12:28 AM
(( hey.. would you rather not rp with me?... i dont have many rp'rs and i can see your buessy with others...and its kinda just weird wating at my computer while to do my homework.. not getting answered..><... its ok if you'de just rather not rp with me.. ide understand...i can see you like that dragon one more than mine><))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 12:32 AM
{o.o um ok Hun I am sorry I am not replying as fast as you would like me to. I do want to roleplay with you. I am sorry that it seems that I am not intrested in your roleplay. I am. Like I said before this is one of the rare times I play some one cold. I still fail to see why you think I don't want to roleplay with you all because I am not reply real fast.}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 12:35 AM
((..im sorry... its just even on the internet i always seem to be last...and i guess it kinda hurts my feelings to know people are much mmore buessy with all there other rp's which they answer the same one over anf over and i try not to bump them but then days go by and they tend to just forget about me... but its ok.. im really sorry.. i know im annoying... hey dont worry about it.. just keep on the dragon one and ill just play like tektek and stuff instead.. im sorry though.))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 12:39 AM
{I am sorry. I don't mean to make it seem like I am ignoring you. I don't like seeing people hurt or upset. I am just on person and there are tons of people on dollwizard that reply fast. I am really sorry if I hurt your feelings. I promise I didn't mean to)
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 12:42 AM
(( its ok.. i have lots of problems so i understand... hey but its ok dont worry about it. This stuff hapens to me more than it should and i know its me.. so dont have to worry about this rp anymore.. its ok i understand how you feel..))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 12:43 AM
{I never said I didn't want to roleplay with you nor did I say that I wanted to stop roleplaying with you. If you want me to stop I will but like I said I am not ignoring you. I am not trying to upset you.}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 12:48 AM
((..well.. i kidna guessed you did not want to and you were lying so i wouldent feel bad><...))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 12:54 AM
{-blinks- not everyone is a jackass you know? I do know how it feels to be treated like the last person. Beside why would I lie? If I didn't want to roleplay I would simple ignore the thread period. I keep posting because I want to}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 12:57 AM
(( ok.. im really sorry for being os annoying..))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 01:02 AM
{don't be. You really want to roleplay. I should be sorry. I could reply faster but i sometimes get into the place where I don't feel like replying and leave without saying goodbye. So please don't be sorry}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 01:06 AM
((..well... i know how annoying i am...er..what girl did he ask to follow him?))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 01:10 AM
{well actualy Yuki scent a guy. I thought it would be cool if I brought in a guy to make Yuki jealous}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 01:15 AM
((tehehe...and..did he go to Alure?))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 01:18 AM
{{mhm I even have a pic of him.
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh290/scarletbloodpassion/anime/Bishi_165.jpg }}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 01:19 AM
(( tehe..when i made this that is just what it houht the prince to look like..until you put down his real picture><...thats great^^))
She gives a small not choosing to say nothing as she follows him to the princes room.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 01:28 AM
{I got to go}
The man had looked at the girl and said" my name is Ryou and you are?"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 01:29 AM
She lets out a small sigh being called wench..
"I'm Alure.." she says softly looking at the ground and not him.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 02:52 AM
Ryou had said" Alure... a beautiful name... will you follow me please?" Ryou had walked down the halway and made sure not to walk to fast. He didn't want to leave Alure behind.
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:03 AM
She gives a small smile, the first one in months. Other than her mom not one person from this place has ever said something kind to her. And oddly enough it felt quit good.
((hi^^))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 03:07 AM
::howdy ^.^::
Ryou had smiled at Alure and walked ahead of him. Ryou had looked over at her. He had said" are you ok?"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:13 AM
"...yea...im..fine.." she says softly even though in truth her life sucked right now and she was very ,very un fine.
(>< im sorry againf or being annoying)
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 03:19 AM
{Don't be}
Ryou had stared down at Alure and said" you're lying. Why won't you tell me what is brothering you? Is it something that the prince sad"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:20 AM
She shakes her head..
"i wont let that petty mouth of his get inside my head.. he is rude to every one because it makes himself feel better about his own self worth... he is just a child in high comand..."
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:27 AM
(( im not bumping!!>< but do you know what would be funny and kinda sucked..if the prince walked in just as she said that..))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 03:28 AM
Ryou had gave a light chuckle and said" you don't have the slightest idea of how childish the prince can be" Ryou had held the bedroom door open for her.
{yes it would. and it would be bad on her part}
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:34 AM
She gives him a small smile and walks in saying..
"thank you..."
((maybe a slave heard it and told him><..you dont have too it just might be a good little twist))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 03:42 AM
::Oh I will have a twist don't worry about that ^.^ ::
Ryou had smiled and said" you are welcome. I have to warn you cleaning the prince's room will be anything but easy. There is certain ways he likes things and I will be more then happy to help you"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 03:45 AM
She gives a small sigh wishing she did not have to stay with the prince. He had to be the most picky human alive..
"thanks.." she mumbles softly feeling thankful but feeling more anger twords all the things that are happening to her.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 03:57 AM
Ryou had blinked and stared at Alure. He had blinked and said" prehaps I should clean up and you should relax. You don't look like you are ok. I can tell that you are angry with what the prince has done."
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:00 AM
She shakes her head and says softly..
"no... im sure you have your own things to worry about..just please show me where the cleaning things are and ill do it myself.." she says softly a calm yet said look on her face as she looked at the ground.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:05 AM
Ryou had said" right now the only to worry about is helping you and me cleaning up this room will be helping you. So don't worry about it"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:08 AM
She shakes her head..
"No.. i was told to do it and i will... i dont go against my word...and even if i really, REALLY rather eat or sleep im GOING to clean his room myself because i was told to.." she says giving a small sigh at the end. Alure was hungry and so, so tired but she wont let any one ells do her work.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:10 AM
Ryou had sighed and said" I see there is no point in aguring with you" Ryou had began cleaning up Yuki's beed. He had pulled the sheets and folded then neatly. He had walked towards the closet and began to make the bed.
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:13 AM
".....what are you doing?" she asks a small annoyed look on her face as she folds her arms. Her soul was too week to truly fight against another strong willed person and she knew at this point she would probably loose.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:25 AM
".....what are you doing?" she asks a small annoyed look on her face as she folds her arms. Her soul was too week to truly fight against another strong willed person and she knew at this point she would probably loose.
Ryou had said" to help you. You said you didn't want me to clean the entire room. I wanted to help you" Ryou had placed the sheets on the beds.
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:27 AM
She cant help but give a small smile. Some one being nice to her was quit odd. But, it felt good. She says nothing but starts to clean as well yawning every once and a while.
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:32 AM
(( im still on it just says im off..))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:36 AM
Ryou had finshin making the bed. He had walked over to the bathroom and said" have you seen the bathroom? I have to say it really is a site to see"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:38 AM
She takes a breath and walks in a good part of her did NOT want to see.
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:48 AM
She takes a breath and walks in a good part of her did NOT want to see.
http://www.idealvacationrentals.com/caribbean/mcka/clilacbath.jpg
Ryou had walked into the bathroom and said" this is it. I know it's not a lot but this thing can dirty as I don't know what"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 04:53 AM
"..wow.." she says shocked looking at it all.
"this is bigger than my house.." she says her eyes tracing around. But that also meant more cleaning...
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 05:02 AM
Ryou had smiled and said" it is beautiful though. You should see it when I am finshin cleaning it. I spread rose petals all over the bath tub"
Your little Whisper
10-07-2009, 05:04 AM
"...rose petals?...." she asks raising an eye brow. He made it sound like he had a little something ells going on with the prince. Even though she knew it was not true.. it was funny..
((im going to go to bed after your next answer..so good night^^))
Melody Hall
10-07-2009, 04:38 PM
Ryou had gave a light chuckle and said" the rose petals actualy are good for the skin It keeps it nice and soft. You should try it once in awhile"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 02:21 AM
She could not help but give a small laugh..
"yea.. with all my free time..and my own bath..and my roses.." she jokes knowing she had nun of those.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 02:38 AM
Ryou had smiled and said" well you have free time now. IF you like I can prepare you a bathe. Do not worry about the prince. He will never know and I will give you your privacy"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 02:44 AM
She thinks about it. It sounds so so nice but finally she sighs and shakes her head no muttering..
"...no... he already does not like me... i dont want to chance anything bad happening.. and.. im.. not really the type to go against what im told.."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 02:51 AM
Ryou had sighed and said" I see but I still think after everything you have been through you do deserve to take a nice bath. I mean the servants are intitled into grooming themselves and keeping from smelling horrible"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 02:54 AM
"..ill take a bath when i am aloud to and have time...and really when it come to deserving things...they only alow it when you deserve bad things.." he says looks down and she says quietly a little sadness lased in her voice..
"..never the good things.."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 03:54 AM
Ryou had let out a small sigh and said"well then I suppose it is time for a change don't you agre Alure?" He didn't know why but something in him wanted Alure to be happy and smile.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 04:16 AM
She shakes her head...
"its fine... ive always learned to deal with things i dont like....so dont worry about it..." she says pulling her back curly hair back into a pony tail..
"..now.. im going to clean his room..."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 04:25 AM
Ryou had sighed and said" I will never understand women" Ryou had walked past Alure and began to clean the bathroom. He had muttered" Alure you are one strange girl"
(like the roleplay so far?)
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 04:29 AM
((^^ yesh...but not to be picky or bossy but try please not to get to caught up with them two..its about her and the prince..))
She starts to clean herself and says...
"im sure any one who works under him is strong... its possible to have your soul die while your body it still alive....ide rather that not happen to me.."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 04:37 AM
{I'm not.}
Ryou had glanced at Alure and blinked. He had shurged and went back to clean.
Yuki had walked down the hallway and towards his room. He didn't see Alure or Ryou. He had let out a small growl and began looking for them.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 04:42 AM
She gets on her hands and knees and starts to wash the floor saying to Ryou..
"hey he asked me to do this...you've already done what he wanted you to do...you can go.. ill finish.." she says softly already getting blisters.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 04:45 AM
Ryou had shoke his head and said" that is true but the prince wants me to show how to clean his room correctly. I do not want you to do something wrong and get hurt. So it would be best if I help you"
Yuki had head voices coming from the bathroom. He had walked to the bathroom but did not enter it. He looked to see Ryou and alure was both cleaning and talking.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 04:48 AM
" well i think he is just-" she then stops when she sees him at the door and feels her heart sink and she bites her bottom lip glad nothing too bad slipped out.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 04:54 AM
Yuki had walked into the bathroom and looked Alure over. He had said" you think what?"
Ryou had stood up and quickly bowed his head. He could only hoped that Yuki wouldn't harm Alure.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 04:56 AM
She sighs and pulls up just on her knees instead of her hands and knees and mutters quietly looking at the ground..
"im sorry..."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 05:08 AM
Yuki had sighed and looked over at Ryou. He had said" Leave us!" Ryou was slow to leave but he left. Yuki had walked over to Alure and said" stand up"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 05:10 AM
She stands up slowly and pulls her arms behind her back her eyes to the ground not wanting to look at him head on.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 05:24 AM
Yuki had walked over to Alure and cupped her chin. He had said" I want you to look me in the eye and tell what is you were going to say. Do not lie to me. I know that you were talking about me":
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 05:28 AM
She slowly turns her icey blue eyes up at him and says quietly hating that she had to say it in front of him..
"...i...was..going to call you a...selfish..." she cringes and her eyes slam down as her head goes down a little her whispering the last part..
"bastard.."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 05:35 AM
Yuki had pulled away from Alure and said" am I now? I mean I did after all save your mother from death. How am I the selfish bastard? I mean I could have raped you"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 05:39 AM
She puts her arms around herself and thinks of his words 'rape' that would have been simple horrible..
"..im sorry.." she says quietly her hair falling over her face blocking most few to her face. she hoped he would not punish her too bad, but punishment was inameant.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 05:45 AM
Yuki had said" I have had many chances to punshin you and I have not. I could have made you sleep with the servants but I did not. I should punshin you now. I should make you sleep in the dungenon and treat you like any other servant"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 05:48 AM
She says nothing she just looks down. In truth because of her little no no sleep she has had in the past two days she was sure she would be able to sleep just about anywhere. That and she never really wanted to stay in his room to begin with but the dungeon did not sound all that nice.
((><..do you think you can.. and im not trying to be naggy!!..just for him..can you make him a little less caring?))
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 05:54 AM
{o.O who said he was caring? He is guilting her and is about to punsihin her. He didn't say he wasn't going to punshin her}
Yuki had said" but I have other plans for you" Yuki had grabbed Alure by her roughly and pulled her down the hallway. Some of the servants looked up at Yuki as he dragged the girl down the hallway.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 05:56 AM
((>< ok sorry im jk...))
She keeps up with him in order not to fall looking at the slaves as she was pulled along..
"..where..are you taking me..?" she ask softly.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 06:01 AM
{{Heh don't worry hun. Such a eager young child ^.^}
Yuki had said in a deadly tone" You are in no postion to ask questions! You will not speak unless I say other wise!" Yuki's grip had tighten and it was tight enough to leave a nice brouse.
{now what kind of punshinment would be ok? I was thinking Lashes but I don't know if you are ok with that}
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:04 AM
((oh yea thats fine.. i would tell you if i did not like it^^))
She flinches slightly when he tightens his grip.
"....im..sorry.." she says again trying to pull herself out of the trouble she knows she is in.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 06:07 AM
{{Good. Because I don't want you to get freaked out}}
Yuki had pulled her into a dark room. He had pushed her to the ground and said" Sorry isn't good enough" Yuki had grabed her arms and chain them to the wall to make her back fully exposed to him. Yuki had said" you will recive ten lashes. If you cry out I will start over!"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:11 AM
She snaps her head forward as her heart sinks. Horrible fear takes over her body and she already feels like crying. She fists her hands together and closes her eyes quietly saying in a quite week fear filled voice..
"..ok.."
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 06:16 AM
Yuki had walked over to the wall and picked a whip. He knew this was going to get bloody that is why he picked this room. He had looked at the whip and before Alure knew it he brought the first stirke. It was fast but hard. The whip tore into her flesh.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e5/Cat_o%27_nine.JPG/800px-Cat_o%27_nine.JPG (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/e5/Cat_o%27_nine.JPG)(this is the whip he is using)
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:18 AM
((owch><)) she shuts her eyes tightly as pain swings threw her body. Tears start to run down her face but she makes no kind of sound. The pain was horrible and it made her wonder if it was really worth having her own feelings on things.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 06:23 AM
{You don't know the half of it. There is one with spikes at the in and it actualy would get caught into flesh and when the person pulled the whip back the were pulling mucles from bone. Queit fansatinting.}
Yuki had yanked the whip back and said" One" He had swung the whip down once again. He didn't use all of his strenght. He would wait until he got to 5 or such. The strike was fast and deep.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:26 AM
Her shin quivers in horrible pain and she starts to think of other things. Like when her mother and her went to the beach once. Or when a guy started flirting with her thinking she was much younger than her real age. Anything to stop the horrible pain.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 06:40 AM
Yuki didn't stop there. He had yanked the whip back harshly and slashed down at Alure's back with half of his strenght. The blow was had enough make a grown man scream out in pain.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:43 AM
She lets out a cough instead of a scream biting down on her lip so she wouldn't scream hard enough that her lip started bleeding. She sniffs as tears run down her face thinking of how right she was, he was even starting to seem evil.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 06:58 AM
(( hey^^ its looks like you left so im going to bed..good night..))
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 07:02 AM
{sorry I was looking for a picture}
Yuki was amazed at the girl. She refused to scream. He had didn't care. No matter what he was going to make this girl scream out in pain. He had slashed the whip down again and this time tore her flesh.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 07:06 AM
She whimpers quietly in pain and says in a shaky pain filled voice...
"..you just want to start over.." she whispers weekly her legs now feeling horrible week.
((its ok..night))
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 07:11 AM
Yuki had walked up to the girl and grabbed her by her hair. He had pulled it back hard and said" What I want is for you to scream in pain"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 01:26 PM
"....but...you said if i scream in pain...you'll starts over.." she says in a whispered groan her eyes shut tight in pain.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 07:11 PM
(( i have work to do so i dont know how long i can be on for today><..but i have no school tomorow..))
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 08:50 PM
(( im just telling you im on because i have to go soon><))
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 09:03 PM
Yuki had said" That I did but I want to hear you scream in pain." Yuki had shoved Alure's head down and whiped her once again hard.
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 09:05 PM
She makes a small sound of a cry and whispers quietly pain in her voice..
"please stop..im...sorry.. i wont say anything like that again...just.." she sniffs..
"please..stop.." she begs quietly.
((^^ thank yous..))
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 09:07 PM
{for what? if it for what I think it is you really have to thanking me or I will get a big ego}
Yuki had pulled the whip back and look down at the crying girl. He had said" I can not allow you to get away with disrepecting me. That will not be accept so I will not stop"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 09:10 PM
((><..i..dddoonnntt kknnooowww *wines))
She bites her lip and says nothing. She chooses to no longer beg, she would just take it and try not tocry out so he doesent start over...he was about hald over now and she does not want to do this hole things again already the pain to much to stand.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 09:22 PM
{*hugs* aww don't wine!}
Yuki had pulled the whip back and gave Alure her last slashes. He looked down at the girls back to see it was covered in blood. He had turned his back to Alure and said" you will remain in here until I say other wise"
Your little Whisper
10-08-2009, 10:01 PM
She gives a small nod as she licks the blood from her lips feeling like she is going to throw up as she slowly slides to her knees.
Melody Hall
10-08-2009, 11:50 PM
Yuki had slamed the door behind him and left Alure in the darkness of the room. He had walked over to a gaurd and told him now was to go in and out unless he said otherwise. The gaurd had nodded and Yuki walked towards his study.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 12:16 AM
She slows reaches her hand her hand back and feels is it completely wet. she pulls her hand in front of her too see her finger tips covered it blood. She groans at the horrible sighed and slowly lays forward on her stomach on the cold floor. she sniffs tears still running down her face. Now she would deferentially not say anything wrong... in fact she would basically switch off her personality. She was told by her mother to never never do so but she is going to now...now...she really will just be another servant.
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 03:17 AM
Yuki had stay in his study for the rest of the day. He did nothing but paper work. He was way behind on his paper work and there was tons of papers and documents that need his signature. Yuki had groan and thought there was no end to it.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 03:22 AM
Alure on the other hand was in great pain. She had not eatin or drank any water for almost tow days now, first she had to sit for a day to wait for the prince with out any food then this day where one again she had no food. She was also very cold ans shivering hard as she bled horrible from her back and soon it caused her to go into a seem sleep.
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 03:36 AM
It had been two days before Yuki had deiced to see if Alure had changed her attuitde. He had walked into the dark room to see Alure still chained to the wall. He had walked over to her and crouched down to her level. He had used two fingers to lift her chin. She looked so weak but he could careless. Yuki had said" Slave..."
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 03:38 AM
She does not move at all. She just lays there breathing shallowly. She was not horrible skinny and blood stained her cloths.
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:00 AM
Yuki didn't like not being answered. He had called in the garud. The gaurd had walked in and Yuki told him to unchain her, The garud had nodded and did as he was told. Yuki had said" clean her and take her to the slaves quaters. She will sleep there from now on."
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:04 AM
She just lays in the guards arms limp barley breathing. Once she was brought to the slaves quarters she was looked over by a girl doctor who went right to the prince finding him in the hall. She gets on her hands and knees bowing and says softly...
"If i may ask... how long did you keep her there your highness?"
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:13 AM
{o.o you do know that I am in control of the garud and what you are doing is called God moding.Something that some people find very annoying http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=god%20modding }
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:17 AM
((..i know what it is...but when some one makes the thread there kinda in charge of the story... i have had rp accounts before and that has always been the rules for as long as i have know.... but..hey..sorry..))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:19 AM
{that is true. The maker of the thread is basicly god but whatever... please don't make my head explode.. I am slow...}
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:21 AM
((...ok..sorry... i wont do that then.... i guess ill just kinda let you be in charge..))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:27 AM
{no I want this to be equal. I want it were we both have say what goes on it the roleplay.}
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:30 AM
(( ok..well im not so sure what to put next because she is pretty much still passed out><))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:30 AM
{hmm well would you like to do a time skip to where she wakes up in the slaves quaters?}
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:33 AM
((ok)) Her eyes slide open to see bricks instead of the gold sealing of the princes room. She had slept for two days and a girl had to shove a certain kind of plant down her throat to wake her up. As soon as she is awake a servant runs off to tell the prince while the other says..
"you have to drink water!..." she takes taking a cup and putting to Alures lips to drink.
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:42 AM
Yuki was busy with his work. He didn't care about his work. All he cared about right now was some peace and quiet. Everything had changed since he had gotten that girl as a servant. Today was the day that she was supposed to see her mother but he didn't know if she deserved to see her mother.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:46 AM
The girl soon runs in and falls to her hands and knees..
"she is awake!..but...she... she has not eating for about a week and she has not had water for almost 4 days...and she had the shivers when she came...and lost alot o blood...we..well...we dont know if she is going to make it so long.." she says. Meanwhile Alure sips at the water only to throw it up along with a little bit of blood..
"why...am..i throwing up blood?" she asks quietly..
"your stomach asid ate threw your stomach slightly...but you have to keep drinking water even when you throw it up.."
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 04:51 AM
Yuki had looked down at the servant that ran into his room with out permisson. He had stood up and walked over to the girl. He had rougly pulled her by her hair and said coldly" what you have me to do? Carter to her? She is no more the a servant. IF she dies, I will not care. I do not care for you are anyones well being but my own"
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 04:56 AM
"..I'm sorry.." she whispers holding onto her hair to make it less painful...
"..i should have known.." she whispers codly lased in it.
"..please let go..." she says softly her eyes to the ground.
Alure is FORCED to drink five cups of water until she finally stops throwing it up. Her eyes tear up and she brings her hands up to her face whispers..
".. i want my mom.."
((>< im not trying to make her all week and pathetic..its just what happens if that were to happen to some one...))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 05:08 AM
{it's ok. To me its more realistic}
Yuki had let go of the girl and walked out the room. He told the girl he would deal with her later. Yuki had walked down the hallway and towards the dinning hall. He was slightly surprised to see Alure's mother was there waiting on him. No doubt she wanted to see her daughter which Yuki wasn't going to alow.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 05:11 AM
Alure pulls herself weekly to her feet while a servant girl grabs her arm..
"no! your much to week to walk!"
"...today..is when my mom is here...i...have to see her.." she whispers weekly walking out of the room while leaning on the wall to try and find her mother.
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 05:15 AM
Yuki had walked towards Melody and said in his cold voice" Why are you here? I do not remember summoning you. I am aware that today was the day you were allowed to see your daughter but I have change my mind. I will not allow her to see you after she has disrespected my"
Melody had looked at the young prince. Oh how he had some much to learn. Melody had said" forgive my prince but whatever my daughter has done I am sure it wasn't so harsh that she couldn't see her own mother"
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 05:20 AM
Alure pulls herself until she saw her mom on the far in of the hall..
"...hey mom..." she says quietly from where she is not even sure if she can make it so far..
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 05:31 AM
Yuki had heard Alure's voice and was about to speak but was interupted by Melody runing to her daughter. Yuki had watched as Melody embraced her daughter. He had glared at the two. Had they not forgetten that he did not want them to see each other?
Melody had embraced her daugther knowing fully well she would be punsinshed. She had looked at Alure and whispered" Alure... what happen?"
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 05:36 AM
"..well.." she says quietly leaning on her mother...
"...i called him a selfish bastard...so...he whipped me 10 times telling me he wanted to hear me scream out in pain..then left me in the dungeon for 2 days...then... i was brought to the servants qouters and i did not wake up for two more days after that... i.. have not eaten for 5 days so... im a little ..tired...and.. ive thrown up blood a few times...but.. im ok.." she says in small pain filled breaths weekly hugging her mother back. Her mothers embrace was worth much more than all the kings money and wealth.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 05:57 AM
((>< its been about a half an hour and i cant stay up any more...night..))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 05:58 AM
Melody couldn't believe her ears. Her daughter had been whiped, starved and left for dead. She had closed her eyes and held Alure close. She had whispered" I will find away to get you out of here. I promise"
Yuki had walked over to the to and said" that's enough."
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 06:02 AM
Alurs hugs her mom tight as tears start to run down her face..
"no..not yet!" she begs crying..
"..its not even been a minute yet and i wont see her for another month...please.....please" she begs starting ti cry hard as some blood down down her mouth.
"i love you mom.." she whispers quickly just in case she gets ripped away from her, she had to let her know how much she loved her first.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 06:12 AM
(( ok good night^^))
Melody Hall
10-09-2009, 06:18 AM
The sight of her Daughter breaking before her very eyes made Melody start to cry. Melody ahd whispered" and I love you Alure.." Melody had watched as Yuki called a garud and the gaurd had fouced Melody out of the room and the caslte.
Yuki had glared down at Alrure.
Your little Whisper
10-09-2009, 03:48 PM
She leans forward on the ground now crying hard and says quietly threw her tears..
"why do you hate me?.....why..do you want me to suffer?..."
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 03:38 AM
Yuki had walked past Alure and said hashly" because you are weak and pathetic. That is why."
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 03:43 AM
"..week?" she whispers...
"you whipped me 10 times and i never cried out in pain..." she slightly turns her head to him...
"why is it you really hate me?" she asks quietly still lightly crying.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 04:02 AM
Yuki had said" just because you can take one beatind dose not gives you the right to called strong. You have endure nothing. You have been crying since you have got here. You are weak and there is nothing more to it!"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:05 AM
Her voice softens and she says quietly...
"... i feel bad for you.... i bet your mother does not love you... as mine does for me....sure, you have wealth and power... but i bet you are lonely..." she says with a calm look on her face.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 04:10 AM
Yuki had scoft lightly and said" Love? It's nothing more the a word that men use to get foolish girls to bed with them. I have no desire for such things as emotions or kindness because in the end people like you and your mother will wont more"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:13 AM
"...we were both happy living in our small little house.... other than my mom being gone all day...teaching you. we were both fine...but...i wont argue with you... i can tell no mater what i say you will dinie it..." she turns her head forward and whispers..
"so never mind..."
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 04:19 AM
Yuki had said" that the smartest thing you had done so far" Yuki had walked away form Alure but said" I suggest you get to work wench"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:21 AM
"..ok.." she says quietly even though she could hardly walk. She never thought to much of herself but week? no way, she is still able to die so easily from what he has done and he calls her week for just crying? She starts to stand weekly as a servant girl comes and help her too her feet so she could go back and eat and get more water.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 04:23 AM
Yuki had walked down the hallway and saw Ryou staring at him. Yuki had glared at Ryou with intest hatred. Ryou had said" If I may be bold to speak prince Yuki..." Yuki had said harshly" No!" Ryou had said" But prince!" Yuki had said" I do not care what you have to say nor do I want to hear it. Get to work!"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:26 AM
((>< i think he should have this moment of when he thinks she is going to die and he gets hit with sadness and guilt...if you think so..))
Alure is taking with the servants and they lade her on her stomach where the lightly pulled the back of her shirt pulling it up and drenching a wash cloth in cold water.
"..you must have made him mad.." the girl whispers looking at Alures torn back..
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:46 AM
((...<,<'...>,>'...*poke* ><))
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 04:52 AM
{umm oookkkk....}
Yuki had walked down toward his study but Ryou wasn't going to give up that easily. He knew that Yuki would probaly punshin him but he had to make Yuki see what he had done to Alure. Ryou had grabbed Yuki's arm and said" I am sorry prince Yuki but I can't. I have to say this! Alure is anything but weak. You have beaten her and nearly killed her. You have taken away her mother and still she has the power to defey you!"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:57 AM
((><...yea...sorry))
She lightly dabs Alure's back with the cloth making her shut her eyes in pain...
"ooowww" she groans quietly..
"ssshhh i know... but we have to clean it..."
"we dont..HAVE to.." she mumbles quietly.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:10 AM
Yuki had said" and I should care?" Ryou had said" you have just taken this girls entire life away from her. She is alone and dosen't know anything. She is probaly scared don't you see that!?!" Yuki had pulled away from Ryou and said" No" Yuki had walked down the hall and couldn't help but feel a small peg of guilt.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 05:15 AM
Alure says quietly...
"uugg.. im...starting to feel dizzy.."
"oh please dont pass out girl...you might not wake back up..if you go much longer with no food you can die!... stay awake ok?... i have to finish your back.."
"ok.." she moans quietly as the servant girl finds a piece of her shirt in her back and slowly pulls in out making her give a little bit of a loud whimper in pain. Her sound could be heard just outside the room with the door closed. and blood started to soke her cloths once again running down the servants hands as she wipes her back.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:23 AM
Yuki had walked into his room and laid down onto his bed. The memory of him whiping Alure flashed thoughout his head. He shoke his head to rid of the memory but it didn't seem like it worked. He had growled lightly and muttered" curse that girl"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 05:29 AM
"damn it i want chocolate!" Alure says as the servant starts to clean off the blood...
"oh my dear i dont think that is going to happen.."
"i still want iiiittt" she wines wiping away a tear from one of her eyes happy that her back is FINALLY going numb.
"you need water..im almost done then you need more water and food.."
"...i'de rather have chocolate.." she mumbles.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:38 AM
Yuki had climbed out of his bed and groan lightly. He had made his way down the hallway. He could hear some one babbling on and on about chocalate. No doubt it was a woman. He had thought" why the hell won't my servants just SHUT UP!"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 05:44 AM
Alure shuts her eyes and says calmly...
".....i smell like blood..."
"of course you do girl your covered in it.."
"next thing you know he is dragging me back there to whip my front because i was breathing the wrong way......he hates me..." she lets out a deep sad sigh wondering what she had done for the gods to punish her like this.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:50 AM
Yuki had walked down towards the room he had left Alure. He had stood at the doorway and stared at Alure and the servant. He quickly moved out of their sight. He didn't want or need for them to see him. He listen to their conversation.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:01 AM
"...Alure is it?"
"yea..."
"...Hey im..sorry this is happening to you.." Alures sighs...
"..its..fine.... ill deal with it...."
"were you able to see your mom?" Alure feels her heart sink and she whispers trying to keep from crying...
"..no longer than 30 seconds...and....i..wont see her again for a month....He already whipped me 10 times and left me for dead just forgetting me!...th...then he took away my chance to see my mom......for years... she.. she has been gone all day and working late to pay for our food which was little to mother to teach him...and for what...for me to never see her? for me to be alone in a land i dont know?...she said one day it would come back to us and teaching him would do good for us when we need it...so the time happens... sure he saves her from death...but her tortures me..and hates me..." she sniffs and tears start running down her face.....
"..she...shouldn't have wasted her time... He...has been noting but pain for both of us..."
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 06:06 AM
Yuki had listen to the girl speak. He remember when he Melody use to teach him. She wasn't like all the other teachers he had. She was actually nice and cared about him. He clenght his fist untill his knuckles turned white and began to bleed. He had looked at the girl and the small peg of guilt return. He hated this. This is why he hated emotions.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:09 AM
The servant lightly pats her head and says softly..
"ssshhh..it will be ok..."
"no it wont.." she whispers sniffing...
"but.. im just have to be a man and suck it up....and just take it when ever he brings me back there to whip...and...try not to die...."
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 06:30 AM
Yuki had walked away from the room and scent a servant to get Alure,
A woman had walked into the room and said" Alure, the prince would like for you to see him in his study"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:38 AM
"..oh god....he wants more..." she moans putting her hands on either side of her head as the servant girl who was helping her helps her up.
"you must go...or you can get in big trouble..."
"i know i know.." She groans standing up weekly and the servant girl pulls off her shirt...
"hey!" she says covering her self with her..
"you have blood all over you!" she says sliding a new shirt on her and pushes her out the door...
"fast girl!..."
"but...but.. i dont even know where his study is...and i dont want tot goo.."
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:53 AM
(( your the only one im talking too right now...T,T and its been 20 minutes... its hard to stay awake on 20 minutes...))
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 07:03 AM
The woman had said" that is why the prince sent me. I am to show you where the study is. So please follow me" The woman looked down at Alurea and noticed she was so young. The woman had turned her back to Alure and said" follow me"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 07:03 AM
Alure follows quietly wondering what horrible thing he had planed for her next. But she hoped with all she had it was hard lobber thinking that would be the least horrible thing he would have her do. She stops as the door and takes a big breath before taking a step inside....
"yes?.." she says quietly her head down and her eyes behind her back, she coukd not look that horrible man in the eyes.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 07:21 AM
(( im going to get off in ten minutes><....))
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 07:27 AM
Yuki had looked at Alure and told the woman to leave them. Yuki had looked out the window and said" I have summon your mother to come and get you. You will have one day to spend with her and only one day.... There is a catch..."
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 07:30 AM
Her whole world filled with excitement when she heard she could stay with her mother but when she hear there was a catch it all melted away with in moments and she is sure this is some kind of trick to once again make her suffer...
"....what is it?" she asks quietly lowering her head a little more in sadness her voice quieter than before when she spoke.
((lol..it only took you a half hour><...night^^))
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 07:35 AM
{I said I was slow...}
Yuki had said without looking at Alure" You will treat me with respect... and I will do the same.. You will not speak ill of me nor will you speak about me behind my back"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:03 PM
She looks up at him surprised...that was ALL? she was sure the catch would be something bad, like more whipping or something...
"....really?....thats all?...then i..can spend a hole week with her?" she asks as joy once again fills her heart to the brim.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 05:33 PM
(( Shoula el fota's..))
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:38 PM
Yuki had said" I didn't say a week. I said you can spend an entire day with her!" Yuki still had his back towards Alure. He had said" you will be followed so don't even think of runing away"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 05:41 PM
She sighs deeply, yea a week really did feel like it would be much to kind for him...
"..ok.." she says softly feeling he is getting the better part of the deal but happy to see her mother..
"..thank you..."
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 05:56 PM
Yuki had said" Why are you thanking me? I did it out of pitty. Nothing more" Yuki had stared at Alure and said" you may leave"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:00 PM
"..well..that means you feel something.." she whispers softly as she turns and leaves shutting the door quietly behind her. A huge smile spreads across her face. She was sure she was in for another whipping..but no, now she could see her mom for a whole day.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 06:02 PM
As soon as she exited the room Yuki had let out a groan.
Ryou was outside of Yuki's study waiting on Alure. He had smiled and said" are you ready to leave?"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:06 PM
She groans and leans weekly on the wall behind her..
"yes..but i need to take food with me.. i still have not eaten.." she says softly starting to scratch one of the new scars on her back.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 06:25 PM
Ryou had said" understandable. I suppose we could stop by the kitchen and get you something to eat but then again we could go to the village and get you something there"
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 06:27 PM
"ill just take the food with me... i want to go as soon as possible.." she says softly as she weekly starts to walk.
Melody Hall
10-10-2009, 06:48 PM
Ryou had spoke" Very well" and followed after Alure. Ryou had asked" what all did the prince say?"