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FailureByDesign
10-01-2009, 12:41 AM
Ya known this is like the 3rd Rp I've made tonight X[
Anyhoo, you know the plot.
Murder,stalker, girl yeah.
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FailureByDesign
10-01-2009, 12:51 AM
Name: Hanna Martin
age: 16
Gender: Female
Likes :
*Music
*Boys
*the color purple
*smell of freshly baked cookies
Dislikes:
*jerks
*prevs
*Blood
*yelling
*the dark
Personality: She's not the most talkitive person, a lot of thing in her life have gone wrong and she's just given up on fixing him.
Bio: Her parents were/are murdered and she witnessed it. THe most horrifiying event of her young life, and now shes living on her own and she cant help but be haunted by the memories of that night.
Looks:http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww144/wolflover86/0015.jpg
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Name:
Rorek Cavanaugh
Age:
17
Gender:
Male
Likes:
Reading, Sweets, Halloween, and taking walks
Dislikes:
Lots of things
Personality:
Rorek isn't much of a talker. Cause of that, hes somewhat invisible to most around him. Hes rather intelligent seeing as those who notice him are his teachers. But hes a sweet and shy fellow if talked too.
Bio:
He comes from a small quiet family who are barely noticed in the neighborhood.
Looks:
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/5609903697/Beyond%20Birthday/BB78.jpg
Outfit:
Mostly dark clothing
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None
FailureByDesign
10-01-2009, 01:24 AM
(So how are we starting....and wow he so doesnt seem like a murderer...)
((XD Is that sarcasm? How about, she just found her parents?))
FailureByDesign
10-01-2009, 01:39 AM
[no...he really doesn't...but ya know it's always the well behaved ones....]
Hanna came home from work late that day, She was supposed to have gone out to dinner with her parents, not fer anything special just for some bonding. She apporched the door as she dug her house key out of her bag...
Then she realized that the door was open, just a crack but still open. she pushed it the rest of the way open and let out a scream that could make anyone cover their ears in pain.
Spread out on the walls and carpet in fan shapes was blood. Her mother didn't lay far from her in a puddle of her own blood. Her skin black and blue with bruises but that wasn't what killed her, it was the large gaping hole in her chest that killed her. There were foot prints on the floor that led to the kitchen....
FailureByDesign
10-01-2009, 11:10 PM
Hanna fought back the tears and looked at her mother. Why would somebody do this? she asked herself over and over again until growing brave enough to follow the foot steps to the kitchen.
Her father put up more of a fight though but in the end, he was dead also. He was laid across the table on his back, multiple stab wounds in chest caused by the serrated blade that laid not far from his body.
FailureByDesign
10-02-2009, 08:15 PM
Brookelle started crying she couldnt fight the tears any longer. She grabbed the wall for support but slid down it and started sobbing in a ball on the floor.
The kitchen door slowly opened and a masked figure dressed in all black slipped inside. From behind their back, a blade was banished. Slowly the murderer crept closer behind her, the blade glinting dangerously.
FailureByDesign
10-03-2009, 02:12 PM
Hanna /Didnt notice him, Well She couldnt see what wasnt in front of her. She grabbed her bag digged around for her cell phone and dialed 911
"911, What is you emergency ?"
She couldn't stop crying so everything she said came out wrong.
"Ma'am Stay on the line we're tracking your location."
((I'm so sorry that I am so slow at posting. Dx ))
With a rustle of cloths and a hiss, the blade came whizzing through the air towards Hanna.
FailureByDesign
10-03-2009, 04:54 PM
[[Haha it's fine hun, I'm dealing with my boredom.]]
Hanna's head spun aroundtowards him before she screamed and dropped her phone running through her kitchen to the back stairs.
((Okay. ))
He bent down and hung up the phone before giving into the chase. It was always more thrilling when they ran.
FailureByDesign
10-04-2009, 02:42 AM
hanna ran into her bed room shutting the down as softly as she could. She locked it...But figured that that wouldnt keep him out. she didnt know where to hide...there wasnt much space in her room...hardly any. She could squeeze under the bed, but would have a horrible time trying to get out...She looked at her window there was a ledge on the outside she pulled the window open and crawled outside. shutting the screen and the window behind her. she stood holding her breath and shaking.
The murderer collided with the locked door with a grunt. A growl spilled from his lips as he backed away a little and charged at the door again and again. He was about to give another charge when he heard sirens in the distance. Another feral growl and he stabbed the blade through the door before running out the back door. His black clothing giving him the perfect cloak in the night.
FailureByDesign
10-04-2009, 02:37 PM
Hanna Heard the sierns and sighed with relief, although at the moment she looked like she was attempting to jump off her roof but that wasnt at all the case. She forced her window open and crawled back inside, she saw the blade from the knife stuck in te door. She curled up on the floor and let herself cry until someone found her.
"Hello?" A gentle voice called through the door. "I am Detective Vera Cruz." She leaned against the door. Vera could hear the soft cries. "Its ok. You can come out."
FailureByDesign
10-05-2009, 06:56 PM
Hanna stood up unlocking her door. She looked at the women.