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Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 03:24 AM
In another world, filled with goals, and demons, and sprites, there lived a small kingdom of humans. This kingdom though had an evil prince and an even more even lord who killed any one who was though to go against them. There was a teacher though who taught then young prince many, many things, and despite his argents and rudeness this young prince came to respect her. But the woman also had a daughter who lived with her out side the palace not once meeting the prince or lord but hearing of there horrible will from her mother. Now the sun was not even but simple was cold and had very little to no patience for any kind of foolishness or anything close to it or anything that might even kind of be seen as it. It would surprise any one how easily he got mad or and got some one in trouble. Now he kept himself calm but he did tend to yell at least once a day at some one.
Well one day the teacher was brought in falsie accused for betraying her lord to the elves. Her daughter was meant to come to the trial and when she came she watched as her mother became closer and closer to death. But then the young prince of 18 arrived and kept her from being killed, but she would have to part with the most meaningful thing to her, and like that her Daughter Alure became a slave in the kings home. What will happen? will her soft heart and qu9it voice soffin the young prince in time?... please help me know
now please know i am new and have some grammar and spelling problems.. but I love to write and I will always answer.
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 03:30 AM
Any one?..please. im so lonely..
Your little Whisper
10-10-2009, 04:21 PM
...buuummpppp..
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 03:33 AM
is it my bad spelling?
magicalgirl78
10-11-2009, 09:22 AM
No it's not you bad spelling because I'm joining
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 03:43 PM
Yay!! thank you!!!!
Name:
Age:
Looks:
Personality:
magicalgirl78
10-11-2009, 07:25 PM
Name: Alure Marie Gates
Age: 18
Looks: http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/MarthaLaura_Anime/Anime%20Girls/Red/fan2.jpg
personality: She can have a temper at times,flirty,seductive,and Also quiet at Times
Name: Andrew Donlice
age: 17
looks: http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk32/jirachia/shuukipic.jpg
personality: a little pervy and quiet
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 07:57 PM
uhh..you do know what this rp is about right?
magicalgirl78
10-11-2009, 08:12 PM
Yes I do sorry I will change the girls name all I saw was an A in the begining of her name sorry doing this from my phone lol
magicalgirl78
10-11-2009, 08:17 PM
I hope that's better if you dont mind Andrew can be a servant to the king/prince
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 08:56 PM
Can I join?
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 09:03 PM
I hope that's better if you dont mind Andrew can be a servant to the king/prince
Yes i do mind...The girl is the servant and the boy is the prince... but i think im going to be doing it with some one ells..sorry..
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 09:09 PM
Can I join?
only if you will be willing to please play the prince...
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 09:32 PM
Sure ^^ I'd be glad to.
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 10:08 PM
Thank you so much..
name:
Age:
Personality:
Looks:
and i shall make mine^^
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 10:29 PM
Your welcome ^^
Name:
Erick
Age:
18
Personality:
Short tempered, has little patience, and is cold towards most people. He tries to keep his anger under control, but it's very difficult.
Looks:
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/CherryBabe22/Anime/brother_boyfriend.jpg
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 10:33 PM
Hot...
Name: Winter
Age:17
Personality: soft quite, she stands up for herself if she needs too.
Looks: she has very thick golden brown hair which she keeps in ponytail, hard-ish skin. golden eyes, some freckles(im not sure how to spell that) and she stands at 5.2...
Would you like to start or shall i?
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 10:45 PM
You can start, i virtually suck at starting =P
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 10:46 PM
Winter stands quietly at the main hall like she was told too. Being pulled from her mother was the most horrible thing to have ever happened to her but at least it was that and not her mother death. She could not only see her once a month at the very most and she might not even see her at all. For now Winter stands awaiting the prince too talk with her about her knew role as a slave. She kept her face calm even though her heart was pounding with fear and sadness and anger.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 10:59 PM
Erick walked into the main hall, a bit irritated. He was not in the mood for talking to people. But nonetheless he had to tell that Winter girl about what she had to do as a slave, which seemed pretty obvious in his mind. He skulked over to her. "Heres the basic ground rules. And listen closely so you dont mess it up. Do. What. I. Say. Nothing less, nothing more. Don't speak unless spoken to. And don't annoy me. Got it?" He said harshly.
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 11:04 PM
He was just how her mother said he would be. She does her best to keep her breathing calm showing no fear or any kind of emotion...
"ok.." she says softly and simple keeping her head down not daring to look up at his eyes. She did not want to.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 11:19 PM
"Good," He said before turning around and walking away. He made a small motion with his hand signaling for her to follow him.
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 11:21 PM
She follows after him quietly making no sound as she walked, her eyes scanning everything in the castle as they walked. She had never been in it before and it was simple beautiful.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 11:30 PM
He stopped before a door. "This is your room," he said blandly and opened the door. The room was an okay size with a bed, small dresser, and a mirror. It was very plain.
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 11:34 PM
She walks to his side and looks inside. It was much better than a dungeon like she thought it would be...
"..ok.." she says softly her eyes scanning around..
"..thank you.."
1~ShadowWings~2
10-11-2009, 11:48 PM
"My room is across the hall. I expect you to be there every morning with my breakfast. If I am asleep, just leave it on my bedside table." He instructed. "Your meals will be served to you in the kitchen, which is downstairs. Any questions?" He glared.
Your little Whisper
10-11-2009, 11:50 PM
"..uh.." she says softly turning to him her ice blue eye looking at his eyes trying to keep herself from seeming yet still a little afraid...
"..I dont know how to cook food from his country... Just food from my country....would...that be ok?" she meets his glare with a soft look.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 12:04 AM
He groaned inwardly. Of cousre she couldn't cook normal food. "Like what?" he practicly growled.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 12:06 AM
"...uh...Mellow pie...Chi berry pie.." she looks up and puts a finer tip on her bottom lip as she thinks.
"...I can make many stews... and drinks..." she says softly not being able to think of all the things she can cook.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 12:10 AM
He had no clue what any of that was. He groaned. "Can you make a sandwich at least?" He asked, annoyed.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 12:13 AM
"..a..Sand..which?" she asks softly lightly tilting her head. She had never heard of it before.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 12:27 AM
"Really?" He asked out of disbelief. He sighed. "You take a peice of bread, put something ontop of it, and then put another peice of bread ontop of it. That's how you make a sandwich.'' Erick said slowly. He had no clue why he was explaining this to her.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 12:31 AM
She gives a small smile..
"How about i make you something i know how to make... and if you like it ill just make you all the things i know how to make...ok?"
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 12:43 AM
Normally he would have yelled at her to figure out how to make normal food, but he held back. "Fine." He muttered.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 12:58 AM
"..ok.." she says softly..
"..so..do you have anything you want me to do now or can i go to bed?" she asks softly.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 01:05 AM
He thought for a moment. "Go get me a drink of water," he said before entering his room and closing the door behind him.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 01:21 AM
She lets out an annoyed sigh and turns from him room going down to the kitchen. She had a little trouble finding it but she does find it and fills him a class of water. She then walks back to his room and lightly knocks on the door.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 01:32 AM
He opened the door while simultaniously buttening his night shirt. He looked at her with a raised eyebrow.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 01:38 AM
She holds the water a little further from herself and says softly...
"...I got you water..."
1~ShadowWings~2
10-12-2009, 01:56 AM
He took the water and shut the door in her face. He had better things to do, he thought as he drank the water.
Your little Whisper
10-12-2009, 01:35 PM
She lets out a sigh. He really was kind of ajerk, but at least now she could sleep. She walks away from his room and goes to her room where she shut the door and lays dpwn on her bed.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-13-2009, 03:32 PM
((we should probably skip to the next day. Also we should make a few more characters like other servants for winter to talk to and the king and stuff, because I'm pretty sure theres more than two people in the whole castle ^^"))
Your little Whisper
10-13-2009, 05:45 PM
((uh..sure ok><....do yuo want to make any?..would this be a good time to do it?))
1~ShadowWings~2
10-13-2009, 06:40 PM
(( sure.... how about a butler or a maid of something?))
Your little Whisper
10-13-2009, 06:54 PM
((uh..sure..><..just dont foeget it is a catsle..))
1~ShadowWings~2
10-13-2009, 07:48 PM
((Of course ^^
Name:
Madeline (prefers Maddie)
Age:
20
Personality:
She is a neat freak, which is why she chose to work at the castle as a maid. She is very talkative and loves to meet new people. Maddie is a warm and friendly person. The outfit was her idea, and she wouldn't stop bothering Erick until he agreed to let her wear it.
Looks:
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k141/demon2010/21_maid.jpg
hows that?))
Your little Whisper
10-13-2009, 08:29 PM
(( cool..would it be ok if she gets jelouse of Alure?..>< it might be a fun little twist))
1~ShadowWings~2
10-13-2009, 09:59 PM
((Sure ^^ you want to post again?))
Your little Whisper
10-13-2009, 11:09 PM
((>< can you?..i did post last and i dont know what o post next if we do a rime skip))
1~ShadowWings~2
10-13-2009, 11:38 PM
((Kay I'll think of something))
Maddie knocked on the new girls door loudly. "Rise and shine~!" She said in a sing song voice as she entered her room. "You've got a busy, busy day ahead of you!"
Your little Whisper
10-13-2009, 11:45 PM
Winter sits up slowly feeling dased some hair in her face...
"..mmm?" she asks looking over at her still half asleep.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-14-2009, 12:24 AM
"Get up deary, you'll need to get used to this," Maddie said cheerfully. "Now go get dressed,"
Your little Whisper
10-14-2009, 12:25 AM
"mkay.." she says softly standing weekly to her feet as she walks over to the hutch with simple white dresses in it. She liked that they were not fancey, she never liked fancey.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-14-2009, 12:45 AM
Maddie turned around, "When your done come to the kitchen for breakfast." She said cheerily.
Your little Whisper
10-14-2009, 12:48 AM
"..ok.." she says softly waiting for her to leave before she slide off her cloths and puts on her clean ones.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 08:11 PM
"Hurry up deary!" Maddie yelled from down the hall. She knew that Prince Erick wouldn't wake him up. A fire couldn't even wake him up.
((sorry I haven't been on in a while, I just feel like I'm about to drown in a sea of homework T_T))
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 08:35 PM
((its ok^^)) She comes out in the simple cloths and pulls her long hair back in a pony tail...
"ok..im..ready.." she says softly.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 08:59 PM
"Good, now follow me," Maddie said as she walked downstairs.
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 09:02 PM
She follows her quietly still feeling very tired and still mostly asleep slightly tilting to one side every once and a while.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 10:35 PM
"This is yours," Maddie said as she handed the new girl an apron. "And it's time to start making breakfast," She said with a cheerful smile.
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 10:42 PM
"..ok.." she says softly making sure her hair is tight..
"But i only know how to make food from my country.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 10:46 PM
"That's okay, as long as you didn't tell that to Prince Erick," She said keeping her geniune cheerfull air around her.
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 10:56 PM
"..ok.." she says as they get to the kitchen. She then starts to get out things to cook.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 11:31 PM
"So what are you gonna make him?" Maddie asked curiously, newbies were always so fun.
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 11:42 PM
" Fambeh pie.." she says calmly as she starts to cook.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 11:49 PM
Maddie stared at her dumbfounded. "What?"
Your little Whisper
10-16-2009, 11:56 PM
"..I'll make it for you some time..but do you mind please leaving the kitchen?... its hard to cook with some one talking to me..." she says softly.
1~ShadowWings~2
10-16-2009, 11:59 PM
Maddie looked hurt for a second, but left, nonetheless.
Your little Whisper
10-17-2009, 03:51 AM
She looks over and wonders if she hurt the girls feelings and right away hopes she didn't. She looks over to her cooking and finishes in about 40 minutes.
Your little Whisper
10-24-2009, 03:09 AM
((....oookkkaaayyy?))