my poems

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

here's one of them:

Torn
I'm torn between how I feel about myself and my other half
I'm torn between acting as one person and being another
I'm torn between keeping my strength up when I really want to cry
I'm torn between keeping my defenses up when all I want to do is give up
I'm torn between doing what's right but I feel it's wrong
I'm torn between keeping up a smile, acting like nothing's wrong when it is.
I'm torn between staying here when I just want to run away
But most of all, I'm torn between staying in my cold reality when I just want to stay in my fantasy world where no one gets hurt...
Can't I escape from this place?...can't you help me go where I want to be?

[Zippy_girl]

YA! This is really, really good!

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

Here's another one:

So what?
So what if I'm not all that glamorous
So what if I'm not that sweet
So what if I'm not the biggest prep
So what if I'm not the darkest goth
So what if I'm not the cooliest emo
So what if I'm just....me?

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

:o:D thanks zippy.....

[Gothanimedollfreak]

I think both of the poems are awesome!!!!! ^_^

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

I think both of the poems are awesome!!!!! ^_^
thank you!:D

[Gothanimedollfreak]

thank you!:D
:D Welcome! :D

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

:( This poem might not be so good, but here it is:

Do You
Do you like me?
Do you detest me?
Do you want me to be here?
Do you wish I was gone?
Do you hope I succeed in life?
Do you hope all my hopes and dreams collaspe?
Do you want me to be happy just being me?
Do you want me to be miserble becoming another you?
Do you pray that my hellish life would end?
Do you pray that it would continue?
Do you care for my safety?
Do you care if I lived or died?
Do you care when I say I hate you?
.....do you care if I say I love you?

[Gothanimedollfreak]

:( This poem might not be so good, but here it is:

Do You
Do you like me?
Do you detest me?
Do you want me to be here?
Do you wish I was gone?
Do you hope I succeed in life?
Do you hope all my hopes and dreams collaspe?
Do you want me to be happy just being me?
Do you want me to be miserble becoming another you?
Do you pray that my hellish life would end?
Do you pray that it would continue?
Do you care for my safety?
Do you care if I lived or died?
Do you care when I say I hate you?
.....do you care if I say I love you?
I wish I could wright poems like you!!!!!!
:D :D :D

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

:o...I bet you could...my poems aren't that great........hey, you're could even be WAAAAAAAAAAAY better than mine!;)

[Gothanimedollfreak]

:o...I bet you could...my poems aren't that great........hey, you're could even be WAAAAAAAAAAAY better than mine!;)
I think they're good! I'm good at wrighting stories but I kinda suck at poems... :p

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

*jumps around* ooo! I got an idea! You should post one of your stories on here.....

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Aww, the poems are so pretty. ^^;;
:p

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

:) thank you Lilith

[Gothanimedollfreak]

*jumps around* ooo! I got an idea! You should post one of your stories on here.....
I already did! Lol. It's titled In This Fateful Hour! It's an Inu-Yasha story! :D

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

I already did! Lol. It's titled In This Fateful Hour! It's an Inu-Yasha story! :D
hehe, I found that out:p. I'm reading it now!

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

:) thank you Lilith

((Lol, no prob! ^^))

[Gothanimedollfreak]

hehe, I found that out:p. I'm reading it now!
hehe...^_^;;;

[Elly]

They are so good......... OO

You go sis-sis!!!!

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

thank you sis!!! *hugs*

[elizaTrickster]

List. That is all.

[Lil J 06]

here's one of them:

Torn
I'm torn between how I feel about myself and my other half
I'm torn between acting as one person and being another
I'm torn between keeping my strength up when I really want to cry
I'm torn between keeping my defenses up when all I want to do is give up
I'm torn between doing what's right but I feel it's wrong
I'm torn between keeping up a smile, acting like nothing's wrong when it is.
I'm torn between staying here when I just want to run away
But most of all, I'm torn between staying in my cold reality when I just want to stay in my fantasy world where no one gets hurt...
Can't I escape from this place?...can't you help me go where I want to be?

*whistles* nice job snowy!!!!!!!!!! :D

[Snow_Angel_Kirei]

heh, thanks Lil J

[hissing]

o those are really nice ^ ^