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kiki26:)
01-09-2007, 09:41 PM
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something that`s not right
i cry these tears from my eyes and they fall from heaven`s sky
i hate this feeling it`s not love but something bad
it`s not something you must not call ''rad'' nor ''fad.''
my heart hurts in my chest
and all the rest.
i`m alone with this fear
along with these falling tears
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something no one can fight
hear my words hear them now
before i drowned in my tears as the dawn goes out.
someone help now
someone help now
before i have to see another sad frown.

Snow_Angel_Kirei
01-09-2007, 09:44 PM
kiki! *hugs* this is good.....I really like it! *gives two thumbs up*

Gothanimedollfreak
01-09-2007, 09:46 PM
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something that`s not right
i cry these tears from my eyes and they fall from heaven`s sky
i hate this feeling it`s not love but something bad
it`s not something you must not call ''rad'' nor ''fad.''
my heart hurts in my chest
and all the rest.
i`m alone with this fear
along with these falling tears
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something no one can fight
hear my words hear them now
before i drowned in my tears as the dawn goes out.
someone help now
someone help now
before i have to see another sad frown.

That's so good!!!!! My eyes were watering! :D

kiki26:)
01-09-2007, 09:46 PM
thxz.........

SasukeChan
01-10-2007, 01:56 AM
Whoa,that's really good!

kiki26:)
01-10-2007, 01:59 AM
thanks,it's my fav one i've made.