Lil J 06
01-10-2007, 03:05 AM
His Deadly Return
Tuesday, January 09, 2007
Chapter 1- First Appearance in a Year
Rays of sunshine shone through the thin sliding doors of Loretta's small dojo. It was early on a sunday morning, and Naja, Shiga and Loretta were already up. Then again, they kinda had to be, they were the oldest. While Kin and Tai still slept in their small, yet satisfying rooms.
''Naja, come here for a small moment!'' Yelled Loretta from the small kitchen and Naja came running in, her hair was not even in it's usual high pig-tails yet. ''Yes, Loretta?'' The old 56 yr. old looked at the 20 yr. old and held out a small sheet of paper with strange writing on it. ''This came for you; quite sometime ago actually, Kin said.'' Naja bowed; she always honored her elders, even a year after she had gotten revenge for her father.
The note said:
Dear my darling god daughter, I request for you to visit me sometime soon. As you know, it is close to Christmas already, meaning it's quite close to your birthday; when you finally turn 21 and I have something very important to tell you. Something your father wanted to tell you himself, but due to his tragic death could not. Please visit sometime before your birthday, understand? Before. Love, your god father, Yuki
Naja absolutely could not believe he had something to tell her that she didn't already know; but she also knew she was willing to listen and believe anything.
She quickly went back to Loretta, telling the woman what Yuki had said. ''Oh my, something you yourself have never even heard? This... cannot be good, not one bit.'' Suddenly, there was a quite loud crash, and the sound of the thin glass windows of the dojo breaking. Kin, Shiga and Tai ran to hide behind Naja, her arms blocking the way around her. Loretta hid behind the door, silently peeking out to see what would happen. But no one came.
Quickly, Naja scooted the three kids towards Loretta and quickly ran through the doorway; her green eyes narrowed as she saw a glimpse of a very familiar robe. She quickly chased the person out of the house, but she didn't stop there; the person had her sword! She was definitaly getting it back, no matter what. When she finally caught up to the cloaked, hooded figure, she grabbed the back of the robe. She whipped the person around to see their face. She froze. Raysu stood there before her, her sword in his hand, the scar on his face from where she had killed him a year ago.
''Well, you seem awfully surprised, Naja.'' He spoke, lifting the sword. That sent something in her heart raging with anger, fury. The same hate and anger as she had a year ago when he even laid his hands on her, her father's sword better yet. She began to ram her fist toward his face, but he used the sword to block it. ''Sorry my dear, but your same old tricks will not work on me this time. I've learned all your moves, all your tricks.''
Naja's eyes began to narrow. He really better let go of my sword, now. She thought. Quickly, she moved to grab her sword; however he held it away, making her more angry and upset. ''Lets see you take on this!'' She exclaimed.
She lifted her foot from the ground and stepped roughly on his foot; making his hand shoot down to move her foot. She immediantly grabbed the sword from his other hand and flipped backwards, so she was about 3 yards away near a tree.
''Hey you-'' Naja quickly took out a element stone and put it in the hole in her sword. She transferred some of her energy into the sword, and holding the sword with both her arms on the same side of her, she ran at him. Lifting the sword up in the air, she went to do an Ice Blade on Raysu; but he moved out of the way. And bolted past her, disappearing into shadows.
''What the-? What just happened? Why on earth did he run away?'' She looked down at her sword, then the sky. The bluish-grey sky. It was around Christmas, and tonight there was even a Christmas Festival going on that same night.
Naja soon began to head back to the dojo and saw Loretta and the others sitting around the fire, trying to get warm. When she walked in, they all stared at her, wide-eyed in a way.
''I'll be in my room if anyone needs me.'' Naja quickly said and ran to her room, her black hair trailing behind her. She laid down on her pallet on the floor and stared up at the ceiling.
What on earth was Raysu after? It's not like him to just give up... She wondered abit. She finally fell asleep.
Tuesday, January 09, 2007
Chapter 1- First Appearance in a Year
Rays of sunshine shone through the thin sliding doors of Loretta's small dojo. It was early on a sunday morning, and Naja, Shiga and Loretta were already up. Then again, they kinda had to be, they were the oldest. While Kin and Tai still slept in their small, yet satisfying rooms.
''Naja, come here for a small moment!'' Yelled Loretta from the small kitchen and Naja came running in, her hair was not even in it's usual high pig-tails yet. ''Yes, Loretta?'' The old 56 yr. old looked at the 20 yr. old and held out a small sheet of paper with strange writing on it. ''This came for you; quite sometime ago actually, Kin said.'' Naja bowed; she always honored her elders, even a year after she had gotten revenge for her father.
The note said:
Dear my darling god daughter, I request for you to visit me sometime soon. As you know, it is close to Christmas already, meaning it's quite close to your birthday; when you finally turn 21 and I have something very important to tell you. Something your father wanted to tell you himself, but due to his tragic death could not. Please visit sometime before your birthday, understand? Before. Love, your god father, Yuki
Naja absolutely could not believe he had something to tell her that she didn't already know; but she also knew she was willing to listen and believe anything.
She quickly went back to Loretta, telling the woman what Yuki had said. ''Oh my, something you yourself have never even heard? This... cannot be good, not one bit.'' Suddenly, there was a quite loud crash, and the sound of the thin glass windows of the dojo breaking. Kin, Shiga and Tai ran to hide behind Naja, her arms blocking the way around her. Loretta hid behind the door, silently peeking out to see what would happen. But no one came.
Quickly, Naja scooted the three kids towards Loretta and quickly ran through the doorway; her green eyes narrowed as she saw a glimpse of a very familiar robe. She quickly chased the person out of the house, but she didn't stop there; the person had her sword! She was definitaly getting it back, no matter what. When she finally caught up to the cloaked, hooded figure, she grabbed the back of the robe. She whipped the person around to see their face. She froze. Raysu stood there before her, her sword in his hand, the scar on his face from where she had killed him a year ago.
''Well, you seem awfully surprised, Naja.'' He spoke, lifting the sword. That sent something in her heart raging with anger, fury. The same hate and anger as she had a year ago when he even laid his hands on her, her father's sword better yet. She began to ram her fist toward his face, but he used the sword to block it. ''Sorry my dear, but your same old tricks will not work on me this time. I've learned all your moves, all your tricks.''
Naja's eyes began to narrow. He really better let go of my sword, now. She thought. Quickly, she moved to grab her sword; however he held it away, making her more angry and upset. ''Lets see you take on this!'' She exclaimed.
She lifted her foot from the ground and stepped roughly on his foot; making his hand shoot down to move her foot. She immediantly grabbed the sword from his other hand and flipped backwards, so she was about 3 yards away near a tree.
''Hey you-'' Naja quickly took out a element stone and put it in the hole in her sword. She transferred some of her energy into the sword, and holding the sword with both her arms on the same side of her, she ran at him. Lifting the sword up in the air, she went to do an Ice Blade on Raysu; but he moved out of the way. And bolted past her, disappearing into shadows.
''What the-? What just happened? Why on earth did he run away?'' She looked down at her sword, then the sky. The bluish-grey sky. It was around Christmas, and tonight there was even a Christmas Festival going on that same night.
Naja soon began to head back to the dojo and saw Loretta and the others sitting around the fire, trying to get warm. When she walked in, they all stared at her, wide-eyed in a way.
''I'll be in my room if anyone needs me.'' Naja quickly said and ran to her room, her black hair trailing behind her. She laid down on her pallet on the floor and stared up at the ceiling.
What on earth was Raysu after? It's not like him to just give up... She wondered abit. She finally fell asleep.