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Shadowed Heart
01-14-2007, 05:54 AM
Nothing happens....


She walked down the street with her dogs,it was isolated.Only the sound of soft sneakers hitting the asphalt,and the clicking of her dogs long nails.The sky was grey,due to the rancid smoke that steamed out of the gorey factory.The adults were so excited when they built the factory it was the biggest thing here,literally.But nothing exciting ever happens here.She walked down the street as the breeze blew softly,her stride picked up and a boy walked her way,"Hey!"he yelled.She stopped,"What?"she said quietly,"Roran,you smell like cigarettes again."she complained.

((to be continued.))

He shot her a glance,"I have'nt been smoking..."he said quitely.She shook her head,short hair rattling.She moved on while saying behind her shoulder,"Whatever."He gave her a smug look and grabbed her shoulder,"Don't walk away from me."he said in a stern voice.Her mind filled with fire,she felt like smoke was pouring out of her ears,"Don't ever touch me!I told you that!"she yelled.Roran's eyes glinted red he threw her down and made a mark on her forehead.She got up and ran home,the dog ran away.She put make up on the mark,it just seeped through like a rock in a sandpit,no matter how many stones you put in the sand would seep back to the surface.She bit her lip,a silver tear rolled down her cheek,she hit the mirror,it shattered.Like everything else in her life,her hopes,dreams,and loves.Sticky blood seeped down her hand,along with bits of silver,shattered dreams.She cried,the silver tears pouring down her already tear stained cheeks.No one heard her,no one was home,or cared.
She stumbled up,and looked to the window,Roran was outside looking straight at her.She ducked under the window ceil,her breath racing,she felt a deep knot into her stomach,it pained her like a knife in the stomach.
((Continue later))

Gothanimedollfreak
01-14-2007, 08:00 AM
Nothing happens....


She walked down the street with her dogs,it was isolated.Only the sound of soft sneakers hitting the asphalt,and the clicking of her dogs long nails.The sky was grey,due to the rancid smoke that steamed out of the gorey factory.The adults were so excited when they built the factory it was the biggest thing here,literally.But nothing exciting ever happens here.She walked down the street as the breeze blew softly,her stride picked up and a boy walked her way,"Hey!"he yelled.She stopped,"What?"she said quietly,"Roran,you smell like cigarettes again."she complained.

((to be continued.))

He shot her a glance,"I have'nt been smoking..."he said quitely.She shook her head,short hair rattling.She moved on while saying behind her shoulder,"Whatever."He gave her a smug look and grabbed her shoulder,"Don't walk away from me."he said in a stern voice.Her mind filled with fire,she felt like smoke was pouring out of her ears,"Don't ever touch me!I told you that!"she yelled.Roran's eyes glinted red he threw her down and made a mark on her forehead.She got up and ran home,the dog ran away.She put make up on the mark,it just seeped through like a rock in a sandpit,no matter how many stones you put in the sand would seep back to the surface.She bit her lip,a silver tear rolled down her cheek,she hit the mirror,it shattered.Like everything else in her life,her hopes,dreams,and loves.Sticky blood seeped down her hand,along with bits of silver,shattered dreams.She cried,the silver tears pouring down her already tear stained cheeks.No one heard her,no one was home,or cared.
She stumbled up,and looked to the window,Roran was outside looking straight at her.She ducked under the window ceil,her breath racing,she felt a deep knot into her stomach,it pained her like a knife in the stomach.
((Continue later))
Omg! THAT IS SO AMAZING! Please write more! :D Oh and could you read my story? it's called:
"In This Fateful Hour (An IY Story)"

Shadowed Heart
01-14-2007, 08:09 AM
Thanks *^^*I will read!

Shadowed Heart
01-14-2007, 08:29 AM
The next day she went to school.Her hair was a mess,dark circles under her eyes.The mark still remained,her dreams had been flooded with malice,despair,and pain.She plopped down into her seat,a group of girls walked up."Ah!"said one girl of a stocky proportion.Her head looked too small for her body,she had long,slim legs,and long brown hair.She pointed to the mark on my head,"I was right Chastice!"she said to the other girl with platinum blonde hair that has sharp eyes and cherry red lips.
"Fine!It is the demon mark!"Chastice admitted angrily.
Another girl piped in she was a bit chubby with red hair and blue eyes,her moth was grape juice stained and she spoke witha peppiness no normal human being should have."I heard you can only obtain that mark if you make love with the demon!"she cheered.
All the others gasped,preps were like visciouse sharks in the ocean of high school,and I was going below sea level.
They all started to chant simultaneously like a cheerleaders."Saki made love to a demon!Saki made love to a demon!"
I banged my fist on the desk and yelled,"SHUT UP!"

Tiffani100
01-15-2007, 03:00 AM
WHOA...Those are good!!!

Shadowed Heart
01-15-2007, 08:32 PM
Thanks!!!!!!!!! =3