Please read this....?

[Thinkbluethoughts]

I'd really like some feedback...
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Dearest Mine, your hand in mine, my hand in yours, let us run away together
Run away from this world,
Run away from our own confusion and demise,
Spend the rest of eternity in each other's arms

Dearest Mine, your eyes on mine, my eyes on you, let us find another way,
Find away to live forever,
Perserve ourselves within time,
Keep me alive with these eyes of yours

Dearest Mine, your lips touch mine, my lips touch yours,
Let us never part,
Your lips shall be my passage to your soul,
Let mine,
Be your passage into my heart

Dearest Mine, let's run away
Let's forget the world for awhile,
Let us just pretend,
Until the end,
We are all that makes up the world,
There is no one else,

Dearest Mine, the world will end, people will die, there will be nothing else,
But you and I dearest, we shall live,
In our everlasting love.
Let this be my promise.

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

((It's beautiful. I love it! ♥♥))

[Thinkbluethoughts]

((It's beautiful. I love it! ♥♥))

Thank you so much! Glad u liked it!!:D :D

[<Lilith.:.Winters>]

Thank you so much! Glad u liked it!!:D :D

((Lol, no prob! ^^;; Keep on writing poems...you're really good at it! :p ))

[Jul4ik]

I'd really like some feedback...
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Dearest Mine, your hand in mine, my hand in yours, let us run away together
Run away from this world,
Run away from our own confusion and demise,
Spend the rest of eternity in each other's arms

Dearest Mine, your eyes on mine, my eyes on you, let us find another way,
Find away to live forever,
Perserve ourselves within time,
Keep me alive with these eyes of yours

Dearest Mine, your lips touch mine, my lips touch yours,
Let us never part,
Your lips shall be my passage to your soul,
Let mine,
Be your passage into my heart

Dearest Mine, let's run away
Let's forget the world for awhile,
Let us just pretend,
Until the end,
We are all that makes up the world,
There is no one else,

Dearest Mine, the world will end, people will die, there will be nothing else,
But you and I dearest, we shall live,
In our everlasting love.
Let this be my promise.
I looooove it!!!!!

[Thinkbluethoughts]

I looooove it!!!!!

thank you so much!!

[Hatred-Falls]

That was verry nice

[Jul4ik]

thank you so much!!
No prob!!!!!:D You are talented.

[Syrus Luvver]

I'd really like some feedback...
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Dearest Mine, your hand in mine, my hand in yours, let us run away together
Run away from this world,
Run away from our own confusion and demise,
Spend the rest of eternity in each other's arms

Dearest Mine, your eyes on mine, my eyes on you, let us find another way,
Find away to live forever,
Perserve ourselves within time,
Keep me alive with these eyes of yours

Dearest Mine, your lips touch mine, my lips touch yours,
Let us never part,
Your lips shall be my passage to your soul,
Let mine,
Be your passage into my heart

Dearest Mine, let's run away
Let's forget the world for awhile,
Let us just pretend,
Until the end,
We are all that makes up the world,
There is no one else,

Dearest Mine, the world will end, people will die, there will be nothing else,
But you and I dearest, we shall live,
In our everlasting love.
Let this be my promise.
♥Aww, that is soo cute!♥

[DarkStorm]

Why pray tell doth the children answer so gleefully to that of which they have no experiences?
Nay, the words from such a tongue are not set in the right stone and your eyes little children have become green pebbles.

[Syrus Luvver]

Why pray tell doth the children answer so gleefully to that of which they have no experiences?
Nay, the words from such a tongue are not set in the right stone and your eyes little children have become green pebbles.
Splee? :confusedmonkey

[DarkStorm]

Haha, how doth the young one learn lest he hath a tutor?

[Syrus Luvver]

Haha, how doth the young one learn lest he hath a tutor?
*Head hurting* I'm trying to make sense of that...

[Thinkbluethoughts]

Why pray tell doth the children answer so gleefully to that of which they have no experiences?
Nay, the words from such a tongue are not set in the right stone and your eyes little children have become green pebbles.

this is cool. Did you really make this up? :D

[Thinkbluethoughts]

That was verry nice

thank you verrrry much!!

[Syrus Luvver]

thank you verrrry much!!
You can write good!:D

[Thinkbluethoughts]

You can write good!:D

aw, thank you!:D :D

[Syrus Luvver]

aw, thank you!:D :D
Hee hee, thanks! :)